Comments: 70
godzillafab [2018-06-11 14:17:44 +0000 UTC]
when's the next part going to be up?
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RaeRob2 [2013-11-09 21:34:39 +0000 UTC]
PLEEEAAASSEEE im dying FINISH IT PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEE
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nickyreader [2013-06-18 02:18:35 +0000 UTC]
Make a part 4.
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haha153 [2013-06-02 20:34:37 +0000 UTC]
FINISH ALREADY!!!1 PLEASE IM DIEING!!!!!!! DX
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serleena5 [2013-04-01 02:35:24 +0000 UTC]
What happens next?!
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SherlockedHazza [2012-12-10 23:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Pwease continue! You've made me addicted to this
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firesspell1 [2012-06-08 01:41:27 +0000 UTC]
ooo what happens next?
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ElkKiller [2012-04-10 15:07:23 +0000 UTC]
DUDE U CAN'T MAKE AN AWESOME STORY LIKE THIS AND NOT FINNISH IT!!!!!! COME ON MAN FINNISH THE STORY!!!!
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NoImNotObsessed [2012-01-29 13:51:07 +0000 UTC]
To be continued...
IT'S BEEN SIX YEARS! DO IT ALREADY! FINISH IT!
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XmagicgirlX [2011-07-04 23:32:49 +0000 UTC]
this is an awesome story
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tigergirl44 [2011-06-03 15:30:17 +0000 UTC]
when is the next part coming
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cihojuda [2011-04-08 18:04:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is actually good. The villain is interesting and so is the plot, I can't wait to see how it ends.
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transvenom [2010-10-10 20:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story!! When is part 4 coming?
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fbluemoonfire61 [2010-03-24 03:16:30 +0000 UTC]
So awsome!
When is your next part going to be up?
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egyptgirl1129 [2010-02-24 03:34:38 +0000 UTC]
i have a question...did u die?
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egyptgirl1129 [2009-11-14 02:07:21 +0000 UTC]
um...hey again. It's been a while since i've complained, but i want to say not that...well...take all the time u need. I want this part to be one of the best and i can't wait to see how you will have outdone yourself next!
And trust me, i know what you mean. with a story that long, it would take a forever to finish a chapter, esspecially when you involve something in the real world, let alone that subject, with a cartoon.
But, anyways, keep up the good work!!!
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natalie-inuzuba [2009-10-15 01:20:37 +0000 UTC]
PLEASE MAKE PART 4!!!
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egyptgirl1129 [2009-07-25 05:54:08 +0000 UTC]
i have a question...is there going to be a part 4?
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egyptgirl1129 [2009-06-27 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]
I GIVE UP!!! Why man? WHY! im crying in a corner! this is like what the 4th time ive written??? i dont meant to annoy you but im dying of anticipation! your stories are too damn good! i need MORE!!!
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powerpuffgirlsfan [2009-04-10 03:38:58 +0000 UTC]
ok i have to say......I AM AT A LOS FOR WORDS AT HOW GOOD NO AMAZING THIS STORY WAS! did you make a part four cuz i want to read it plz tell me in a comment where the fourth part is if you have made one if you havent made one plz plz plz plz make part 4.
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egyptgirl1129 [2009-03-06 04:05:51 +0000 UTC]
WOW, i love your stories!!! i can't wait for the 4th part. seriously, i i'm growing grayhairs! jk anyway hope u know that u have an awsome gift with 'story telling'. Keep it up!!!
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doomboy911 [2009-02-12 03:52:03 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for the next part
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doomboy911 [2009-02-12 03:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for the next part
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atomichippy [2009-02-01 06:26:58 +0000 UTC]
would you mind if i made part 4? i already have ideas, i could go over it with you?
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atomichippy In reply to wheatman3 [2011-08-04 22:47:32 +0000 UTC]
But now I forgot what I was gonna write lol. Sometimes I hate irony.
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rockyoursoul48 In reply to christmaswolf [2009-11-15 04:53:30 +0000 UTC]
you mean starfire??!! and yes they are made for each other
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LOsulliv2 [2009-01-10 12:09:14 +0000 UTC]
correct spelling: METRION ZINTHOS
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4182209 [2008-10-03 02:37:21 +0000 UTC]
were is four. -_-
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Kiros111 [2008-06-29 03:21:36 +0000 UTC]
cant wait for more
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bluelightningtw [2008-06-18 11:46:46 +0000 UTC]
Yikes.
But it's not too bad.
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TeenTitansTomorrow [2008-06-10 14:25:24 +0000 UTC]
OMG! I love this story! I've read all 3 but I want MORE!!!! Please make a lot more please! [link] happened to Bumblebee?
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Nina-Elric [2008-04-16 21:13:45 +0000 UTC]
Hee hee! I love! And I don't even like BBRae! Don't leave me in suspense! Part Four!!!!
(Make it ultra long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Generalnazor [2008-02-25 07:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Looking good!
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aceman182 [2007-08-10 18:55:36 +0000 UTC]
weird and cool wheres the 4th part????
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