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Phoenix-Blaze — Troubled
Published: 2006-03-27 21:03:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 768; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 34
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Zoom in for a better view.Set in the locker room just before Neoborg face the Barthez Battalion, a team formed by Balkov in G-Revolution. Yuriy's team-mates are preparing to leave for the match, while he can't get the thought of his former teacher and tormenter out of his head.
I don't usually colour things in, and I don't usually draw Balkov either.
'Beyblade' and all related characters are copyright of Aoki Takao.
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Comments: 9
Really nice job, I love the coluring and the composition
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I appreciate you leaving a comment on such an old piece of artwork.
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a great composition.
i love how Tala looks so deep in thought.
excellent work
laters
P.S. Sorry its taken me so long to comment
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Yuriy looks really deep in thought here, and I like how you colored and shaded it. Nice job!
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I think you did a good job whit colouring and the shadow of it. The boddys and faces are well draw and the idea is good. Thoug ther are 2 things that bothers me.
The hand of boris, Its not draw bad but I think if the hand was in a other posting like he wanted to grap somthing it had more kind of effect of the idea you had. more power.
I have seen it more ofthen in your drawings but I say about it now. Its about the blue parts on tala's sholders. Its looks to plat. Lift it a bit up so it alsow get more of a 3D effect.
do what ever you want whit thos coments.
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I agree that had I drawn Balkov's hand in a more 'grab-like' position, it would have been more effective. The second note is something I will certainly keep in mind from now on.
I appreciate all of the comments received.
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Good work on the colouring and shading, Yuriy looks very much in thought and troubled. The detail in the background is good also.
What I think you could do, which I will mention within it's own context on your other deviation, is work on using colour pencils/regular pencils towards their full potential.
Many artists use Photoshop, Painter and other programs to enhance their work here, but you've shown you can create good deviations without the use of them and without references. What I mean is, you can make use of more 'effects' within your works in order to give them a new edge.
For example, in this particular deviation, it looks as if Balkov is actually floating there. If you used a lighter set of colours or if you darkened it like the cloud effect surrounding it, it would look more like a thought.
Though if you wanted it to appear like Yuriy was so effected by Balkov that the thought of the man is so clear to him, then it's fine.
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