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Published: 2008-06-02 03:45:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1021; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 13
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don't beat me up, i have writers block and i just really wanted to submit something
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Comments: 14

Robino [2008-12-31 14:37:25 +0000 UTC]

I meant conversations* throughout the night.

Damn typo's!

And I forgot to say I am glad your still here on DA!

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Robino [2008-12-31 14:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I am glad to see something from you again! This is pretty good, I really like this :

I am still her.
Passion and triumph.
Conversation throughout the night.
Take flight, hold on.
This is all worth the fight.

I can so relate to this part, thank you!

Btw I really hate saying ''writers block'' , I have had it too. I just called it a lack of inspiration, lol!

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Robino [2009-04-13 19:27:22 +0000 UTC]

ya thats a better way of explaining it thanks for the comments...

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Robino In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2009-06-06 09:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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skatingami [2008-06-14 21:21:39 +0000 UTC]

reallly good work sister.

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CherylWho [2008-06-05 01:25:24 +0000 UTC]

I am wowed by this piece of prose.
Excruiatingly poignant.

Smile

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to CherylWho [2008-06-05 02:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much

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Orunitia [2008-06-03 05:44:01 +0000 UTC]

i miss these. i honestly do. you are one of my favorite writers. i am so glad you ubmit to da

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Orunitia [2008-06-03 15:32:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i miss being on here, having the time to read others work and really take it in. i hope to find that time again

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Orunitia In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2008-06-04 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]

well i hope you do come back. it feels like we have so much to catch up on! one way or another its good to hear from you on DA!

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Tuishimi [2008-06-02 06:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's excellent for a "trying to come back with a tot on my knee" poem!!!!!

"I am still her
Passion and Triumph"

Sweetness.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Tuishimi [2008-06-03 04:26:11 +0000 UTC]

lol, thank you so much

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judylee [2008-06-02 05:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Moving and poignant, so very many emotions come to me as I read this, longing, joy, sadness, passion, all the things that make up a marriage and so much more. Doesn't seem at all like writers block to me

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to judylee [2008-06-02 06:05:25 +0000 UTC]

i am glad it made you feel, that is the thing we writers want to force you to do hehe. thank you

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