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6-Simplicity-9 — .Goodmourning.
Published: 2006-07-04 18:27:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1640; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 240
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Oh, it's killing methe monotony,
the aging calm,
the fight against long,
hard nights
and the need
for something more-
to be someone freed.
The need to find me
and be happy,
for once.
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What do you feel- day in day out- when you wake up, what sprints through your mind?
For the =dysmorphics contest.
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xstockx(model), simplicity-stock (sky), sxc (texture)
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Comments: 40
I am thrilled that this piece is my introduction to this account. Splendid work!!!
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:] i cant thank you enough
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at first..i thought it was just darkness embarking upon the warmth of a sky that needs to feel...okay?
i like how you can then notice there is a person.. as if they are truly trapped
amazing words..somewhat hard to read, but..it adds to it, the striking of the words
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Thats gorgeous. What a unique idea, it looks amazing! 
Kristen
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i think the thing that goes through my mind the most is the question "am i awake or is this a dream?" LOL
This is a nice piece of work, i really like the visual poetry and the sugestion of emotional drama in the pose of the body. well done.
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It's gorgeous, I love the line spacing and the way that it's laid out around th silhouette(sp?).
Sam
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the body
the shapes
truthful colours
light
sounds
uplifting
giving to so many things
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Amazingness. You KNOW I love this. It is strong, fiery, beautiful and wholly original.
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<3
I can't say anything but what's already been said, so "wow."
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wow!....u hav jz impressed me!...wow..great artwork!....gosh..really amazin!
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very unique
i love the sky with the body outline. It really makes the poetry personal
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Thank you
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this is so...amazing! i love the emotion...i love all of it! fav
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Thank you
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I'm glad to hear that, Rachel. 
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so emotive, and i love the way you did the girl!
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its beautiful plus the visual part..I like it very much Sasha!
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The poem is beautiful, if it were me doing the picture I wouldn't have put the words so far apart, because it's hard to keep track of which way you're reading. But other than that it's beautiful, and the picture is very suiting.
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yeah, that's why I submitted it in the description. The words seem to fit the picture better than they would if I had simply straight-single spaced it.
thanks a lot
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This is very good... I really love the image(checked the actual photos just now as well, awesome!). The writing is so fitting...
"the aging calm,
the fight against long,
hard nights"
That is such a stunning piece of writing. I love this! Very well done babe.
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