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Published: 2011-07-31 09:57:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 24679; Favourites: 649; Downloads: 1134
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I love this piece because the posture and light in this beautiful artwork.
The fact that she looks so calm and relaxed sets a nice overall numbing feeling inside, it truly sets one at peace.
For improvement, maybe turn her body a little further to the right, but maintain the position and facial expression etc.
The way the light falls on her body is truly spectacular, the way her neck lines have been emphasized magnificently truly make the shot what it is.
I also love her hair, the fact that her blondness shines through with the light bisecting it.
Overall i love it, just a few minor edits and re-shoots and it'd be perfect.
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I like the color of the photo, it looks very soft. Foreshortening is good too, if to talk about the whole picture, but not about her hips. It looks unsuccessful.
Despite this I like a model, she is beautiful and the pose is so relaxed. That's why the photo is very calmly. And there are no any bright spots in photo which can break this feeling.
Maybe here is one little defect. It is her left cheek. I'm talking about relight. But I think this fact is really insignificant here, because this is good work.
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I think your critique is fair and touched on all of the most important elements involved here.
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You succeeded, I think. You identified exactly the only points that could be addressed for improvement, in my opinion, and this takes a skilled eye.
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Well...will be waiting for author consent!
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The expression on her face is so appealing and serene for starters. She is quite the stunning model and i look forward to seeing more of her in the near future.
However, the image is rather plain in that we only have her beauty to marvel at. In your next photograph I encourage you to expand your artistic vision and give us more then a beautiful girl a top a rock. Looking deeper into this photo I can see the outline of the picnic basket and vibrant red and white cloth that should've shared a seat on the rock with her.
It wouldve been an exceptional enhancer to the beautiful simplicity of this piece. So my advice to you Piddling is to always look for the enhancer besides the model, for when the scenery matches your model's expression the audience is inspired all the more!
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its the first time i deny a critique, not because its bad, but because its obvious firtsly that you didnt even took one minute to check my gallery, and secondly because all you say is what you would do. Well this is not a critique, maybe you should check the FAQ how to make a critique ,and what are the elements you should take notice when u do it. Thank you for your time though
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i didnt say what i would do, i said an example of what couldve been done as to try to give you some basis as to what a meant by "Enhancer"
I didnt check the rest of the gallery because i was asked to critique that particular picture, and so i did.
Sorry you found it useless, its a shame to me that you got nothing at all out of that.
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what do you mean "you were asked" ? , and dont be sorry i wasnt offended or anything, im just saying that when u do a critique try not to focus on one thing (like here on composition) and try not to say only your personal opinion, just in the end as an addition
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oh ok, thanks
lol at u critiquing the critique XD (Not being sarcastic)
also i meant that you asked the general public for a critique, not me particularly of course but you understand.
Keep it up man
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Beautiful Girl, beautiful photo. The color is soft and the lighting is just right. Great job and thank you for sharing!!!Β Β All your photos are fantastic, I love the retro looks!!!Β Β Β
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I find this picture mesmerizing. Her body is relaxed but her eyes are looking for something... searching, waiting.
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I like this pose and model as well as a prior one in this series, but i would have preferred a different position for her right foot, a little distracting, not as elegant - but love this scene.
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i know, i agree, the foot is distracting, but i liked al the rest ,so i let that little mistake there and decided to post the picture (if you ask me, the hands are not perfectly put either, i would preffer them better and not cut on the wrists, but ok still is a nice picture)
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Understand - i agree, very nice picture. I definately cannot match your quality of work. It is always easier nit pick small little things like that after you look at a picture later. I di not even think about the hands you mentioned.
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great pictures.and very beautiful and gorgeous i might add.nothing really to critique on,too.
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Beautiful model. I love your choice of setting as well. Excellent work.
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this is beautiful.... everything about it seems like visual poetry the pose the tree the way way the shadows accentuate her feature
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