AuraArtist [2018-09-22 03:05:59 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, this is a pretty nice piece of art! It shows your individual style through it which I think is a pretty important factor. The good:The gray-blue and white outline really emphasizes the piece! It brings out the main focus a lot more and focal point is the eyes which is a good sign. Improvement:However going off of "the good" since the main focal point is the eyes, I would suggest you put a good amount of effort into them so that it seems more well done.In my opinion, your linework needs to be more confident. It seems shaky and a bit messy. To fix this I suggest going out of your comfort zone to make bold strokes and try to improve your linework! Especially around the eyes is where it seems to be the problem.Great job on this one!-Aria (AuraArtist)
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Pie--Crust In reply to AuraArtist [2018-09-22 03:22:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!! I appreciate it a lot! I was honestly surprised someone actually gave me criticism, and I do agree. I'll take your advice!
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