HOME | DD

PinkMochi β€” the mary sue test by-nc-nd

Published: 2009-06-14 18:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 45408; Favourites: 337; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description [link] [link] [link] [link] click on them so they can grow, i beg of you ;-;

i wanted to make sure if my characters were mary sues or not. so i took the test, and this were the results. i allways knew that B.A.S.H. wasn't a mary sue, and i also knew that Kira was a perfect mary sue.

what it makes me happy anyway is that there were three more kinds of character: the anti-sue (i don't want mary sue, but going completely to the other side is not good either), and the ΓΌber and irremediable sue (that are worse than getting just a mary sue level). this mean that i may not be that bad creating characters after all.

i took another test in wich everyone got less than 50 points, and the result was:

0-50 points :" congratulations! you are the proud creator of a completely original character! keep up the good work. it takes skill and determination to create such a pure individual. you ought to throw a party or something to celebrate".
YAY!

art & characters (c) ~PinkMochi
Related content
Comments: 214

veekaizhanez In reply to ??? [2012-10-13 04:25:41 +0000 UTC]

That's what I wanna say, they got powers but also got flaws consenquences for activating it, their weakness based from their fear, their reserved version of their element and power, or based from their personality.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to veekaizhanez [2012-10-13 04:34:21 +0000 UTC]

i understood the idea the first time. you don't have to explain it to me. ¬¬

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Ask-Freddie In reply to ??? [2012-10-04 21:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Why you take a test? You shouldn't let ANYONE tell what to do with your OC's. They're yours and they can be Mary Sues if you wish.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Ask-Freddie [2012-10-05 21:07:03 +0000 UTC]

I took it because i was curious about how they would rank. I was fearful about making Mary-sues because they're not challenging (and they're boring), and if i don't like to see or read mary-sues from other people, i thought i should be able to avoid creating one.

I don't think that a test can define if my characters are either good or bad, but it doesn't hurt to look for the opinion of other people (or in this case, program) to see what kind of character you're making.

Fear not, I didn't actually change anything about my OCs after i made the test. They're still the same, and that counts for all the other OCs i have.

I apreciate your comment You're right, OCs are ment to be whatever we want them to be and we shouldn't let others change our view of what we want to create.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Ask-Freddie In reply to PinkMochi [2012-10-05 22:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I just don't like people jacking up other people's OC. Besides, if an OC doesn't have at least one or two traits of a Mary-Sue, they turn out pretty boring...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Ask-Freddie [2012-10-07 00:42:01 +0000 UTC]

that's true, some people just can't live if they don't mess up with other people's OC. Even if you could do it better, you should let people be.

i agree with that too. People have talents in real world. I've met people who can read something once and understand the subject like an expert, or play an instrument almost perfectly with just a few days of practice, or that can run faster than anyone without training or they are naturally flawlessly beautiful without having to take care of their appearance.

Having ALL the talents and skills is Mary-sueish. Having one or two special gifts is NORMAL. And so, to make an OC you have to give it special gifts.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Ask-Freddie In reply to PinkMochi [2012-10-07 01:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Yup. Otherwise, it's not exactly an "Original Character".

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Ask-Freddie [2012-10-07 14:51:28 +0000 UTC]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

maevemaelstrom In reply to ??? [2012-06-26 05:40:56 +0000 UTC]

What test did you take? The "Universal" one?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to maevemaelstrom [2012-06-26 17:07:39 +0000 UTC]

i can't remember actually, but i'm quite sure i didn't take one of those that say harry potter or star trek or any specific fandom.
must've been the universal one. the link to the one i used is broken now, so i can't be 100% sure.

i'm sorry that i can't be more helpful

would you like me to send you a link to some OC litmus tests?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

maevemaelstrom In reply to PinkMochi [2012-06-27 03:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Sure! ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to maevemaelstrom [2012-06-27 19:43:49 +0000 UTC]

ok here are some:

[link] this is a universal one.
[link] this one is weird, but it suposed to make the writer see if the character is too much like him/her
[link] this one looks like the one i used back then.
[link] this one is useful, but you need a notebook to write the scores and add them.

hope they help, and remember that you have to keep in mind the basics of the world your characters lives in before you answer.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

bloodrosered In reply to PinkMochi [2014-09-27 12:22:58 +0000 UTC]

I've tried these tests and the first one is really confusing. Whenever I take it I don't check the ones that don't apply to my characters...and the results always say that my characters are MSs. It pisses me off.Β 

I used the second one and it was better. I'll try the last one.Β 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

BlackRedDragon7 In reply to ??? [2012-04-17 03:22:37 +0000 UTC]

your drawings are so cute ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to BlackRedDragon7 [2012-04-17 23:25:07 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

BlackRedDragon7 In reply to PinkMochi [2012-04-18 00:18:37 +0000 UTC]

and your icon right now is SO cute! XD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to BlackRedDragon7 [2012-04-21 01:08:50 +0000 UTC]

oh, thanks again

i just loooove cute pink things

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

BlackRedDragon7 In reply to PinkMochi [2012-04-21 02:12:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe xD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

DayLikesCookies In reply to ??? [2011-09-20 07:06:32 +0000 UTC]

3 out of 50.
DEAL WITH IT.

I was using Invader Zerp, who is a bit like Derpy Hooves, I suppose. She just goes around, avoids messing up the story line, and destroys other then it. Her intenathing is broken at one point, as part of her being, ahem, "special". She was basicly in a mental hosbital on Irk, when she managed to mess something up bad enough to steal a ship, and run into a mail truck. Said mailtruck contained the "Switched Mail" from one episode, which weakened the defective SIR unit container just enough so that they poured out of the container and into the truck. One got stuck in the wall, with enough power to fly right into the ship. It clung to the ship. AND BY A TOTALLY WEIRD CONINKYDINK, it was one of the ones that was just plain derp'd. It isn't a GIR recolor. It is a SIR unit, not a GIR unit. She later crashed into the "PREETTYYY GR33N N BLOO ROK" and hit the SIR with a wrench until it's eyes and discuys (spelling failure) became totally out of wack. She doesn't directly meet any of the main people, she doesn't fall in love with anyone, she doesn't save the earth, or atleast on purpose.

I say she isn't a Mary Sue.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to DayLikesCookies [2011-09-20 21:39:34 +0000 UTC]

i totally agree!
i got a little bit lost with her story, but i definitely like it.

kind of weird how this tests can't actually tell you if the characters are mary sues or not. they try to make people avoid the self-adition to the stories, but they don't help to make a solid or half-real character.

this must be one of the best comments i've ever read, seriously

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

DayLikesCookies In reply to PinkMochi [2011-09-22 02:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bro I enjoy when people don't pelt me with earth rocks... Or any type of rock, for that matter.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to DayLikesCookies [2011-09-22 07:15:58 +0000 UTC]

no prob
people are sensitive about everything... they snap even when you say "that's beautiful! but the colour is a little bit too bright" or something like that. they can't take a polite constructive critic, much less sarcasm or harsh critics.

and i'm a girl, by the way...

i don't like to throw rocks at people. my nails could break (terrible sence of humor, i know)

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

DayLikesCookies In reply to PinkMochi [2011-09-22 21:57:18 +0000 UTC]

I call everyone a bro, though. Calling them a sis just doesn't flow right.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to DayLikesCookies [2011-09-22 23:48:43 +0000 UTC]

oh, ok.
if that's the case you can call me bro

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

DayLikesCookies In reply to PinkMochi [2011-09-23 02:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Sweet, thanks brotato ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to DayLikesCookies [2011-09-28 18:24:18 +0000 UTC]

you welcome

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Firegirl282 In reply to ??? [2011-02-18 20:38:55 +0000 UTC]

yay none of my characters are Mary sues! Now i can right my story without worry!!! lol

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Firegirl282 [2011-07-01 03:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Good for you!!

but i think you should write your stories the way you want without worrying so much. just my opinion

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Firegirl282 In reply to PinkMochi [2011-07-01 03:58:49 +0000 UTC]

lol i was kidding

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Firegirl282 [2011-07-01 04:01:15 +0000 UTC]

XD nice!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Jinx-kun In reply to ??? [2011-02-08 02:34:55 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh, I love it! It's the only Mary Sue test that is actually encouraging(: (I love the art by the way)

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Jinx-kun [2011-07-01 03:53:14 +0000 UTC]

yes, it's a good test. not perfect, but nothing is

lol, thank you!


i'm answering you after so many months that you probably won't even know what you commented in the first place XD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jinx-kun In reply to PinkMochi [2011-07-04 22:50:40 +0000 UTC]

very good point(:

no, I still do XD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Jinx-kun [2011-07-06 23:22:08 +0000 UTC]

awesome! i never remember the comments i leave

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jinx-kun In reply to PinkMochi [2011-07-06 23:23:07 +0000 UTC]

I usually do the same XD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Jinx-kun [2011-07-07 04:11:15 +0000 UTC]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

wildtraveller In reply to ??? [2011-01-31 00:58:44 +0000 UTC]

My original character, Death Hand, would likely be shooting for 11-20... though he'll be especially made for hunting mary sues.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to wildtraveller [2011-07-01 03:54:19 +0000 UTC]

a mary-sue hunter? that's something new XD
good idea

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

InfiniteFruit In reply to ??? [2010-12-16 03:50:27 +0000 UTC]

I got a score of 3 for my green-haired character, The Rage. I'm so proud!

I like the goggled chick at the top. She looks hip.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to InfiniteFruit [2011-01-04 01:06:21 +0000 UTC]

omg, that's great! i love the look of your character, she's beautiful!

why, thank you!
she's one of my favs!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

InfiniteFruit In reply to PinkMochi [2011-01-04 02:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks! And you are welcome, too!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Azerarhk In reply to ??? [2010-08-20 17:22:31 +0000 UTC]

the link doesn't work!! D: What website is this test on? o3o

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Azerarhk [2010-08-21 01:24:10 +0000 UTC]

it's not there? ...well, try this one.

[link]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Azerarhk In reply to PinkMochi [2010-08-21 01:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah-hah! Works.

Yay, got a 20

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to Azerarhk [2010-08-21 01:28:16 +0000 UTC]

that's great! good for you

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Azerarhk In reply to PinkMochi [2010-08-21 01:32:22 +0000 UTC]

*is happy because her character is pretty okay*

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

PepperSupreme In reply to ??? [2010-08-06 01:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Whaha, I just did the test and laughed at how I thought it would totally the other way around for my characters. xD
I love the 2nd panel since the score-advice doesn't seem to say anything good, though your characters are like: 'YAY almost sue!' xD
Oh well, a test is a test and not an awnser. But I must keep paying attention to it.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PinkMochi In reply to PepperSupreme [2010-08-21 01:26:18 +0000 UTC]

yeah, some characters are not what we expect!

lol, you're right! i didn't mean to give that image, but my characters are totally like "yay! we're almost perfect!"

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

PepperSupreme In reply to PinkMochi [2010-08-21 12:34:25 +0000 UTC]

xD I wish I was a real-life Sue. Wonder how life would be like that.
Kinda like a paradox how a perfect character is anything but perfect. xD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

ISmellPasta In reply to ??? [2010-07-03 04:04:41 +0000 UTC]

:/ I took one. My character Junsei scored negative 2. Good maybe? My siblings character got negative 15. Does that mean theyre boring? X D

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1


<= Prev | | Next =>