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Good Job on Lighting andModeling here!
There are some things you should fix though.
- the walllamps are black. whats up with that? they have no shading at all.
- Door is also to dark.
- carpet textures are to blury.
- shoes on carpet look like they were in the air.
- the wood structure of the balconydoor should be from upside to down on some parts. hope you know what i mean.
- the material of the wood of the top bed is to crospy. maybe more samples here.
- also more samples on the shadows of the sun. good to see on the last picture on the bed.
- The tv could get some material work too. the isnt one shine on that thing.
- i think the fabrics are overall to "clean" and flat.
this scene has real potential. but its the details wich brings it down a bit.
All the Best
Karim
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serdal abi ellerine sağlık güzel bir çalışma olmuş.Yanlnız terlikler havada kalmış abi haberin olsun
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sağol yasin. evet ben de farkettim ama geç oldu
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