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Published: 2006-08-20 12:02:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 543; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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a first high-key attempt. any tips how to make it technically better?Related content
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I dont know much about high key but i think its beautiful. The off center is perfect. I love it when something isnt totaly centerd in the middle. I think it gives it a certin random apperance which can be breathtaking. the water droplets as well should stay. It makes it.. haha for lack of a better word just cute! It goes along well with the cloth in his/her hands. Makes a connection without it being to obvious. Well done. Its adorable.
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Looks cool, with these tones. For improvements...maybe you could make the lines a bit darker, so the contrast would be higher. But that also depends on what you were going for.
But either way: I like it.
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I can tell why
EYES
this contrast is kiling me
it kicks ass
the right side is better, than the middle of the face
it would be nice to have some details on the nose and hands
at least I think so, mr. D
take care ;]
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hmm, true ... the more I look at this the I can see it's too bright in some areas where certain level of details might look better
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first because of eyes. also the tones are perfect for me
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I wish my daughter had some photos like that, I am jealous 
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bathroom games
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a little low in this high key? too much bright i think... who cares about perfection here, it's a candid photo of a beautiful baby.
if i should name the particularities, i'd mention to remove the water drops, move the crop a little to the left so the eyes get closer to the center.
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I am sure I would never get rid of those, moving face is worth considering though
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i'm sure you will have lots of opportunities at hand to take many further shots
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hele, kouka, ze kus vety mi vypadnul 
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jooo, ja to cet' jako, ze to nejde nafotit bez kapek.))
kapky vody super, ale na tomhle snimku jsou v trochu blby situaci -- trochu mimo hlavni pozorovane/kompozicni oblasti, ale dost vyznamne, aby je clovek registroval. takze mi pohled na nich trochu 'drhne' pri tom klouzani po fotce.
ale to uz je zbytecny nimrani.
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mno prave proto jsem je tam nechal, jsou jakoby bokem, ale furt jsou tam a davaj tomu naznak nejakyho deje (v tomhle pripade cachtani ve vode) - jelikoz nejsme vsichni stejni, je mi jasny, ze nekomu tam budou dost prekazet a nekdo je pohladi okem - mne slo spis o to, jak vyladit tonovani, je to muj prvni highkey pokus a nektery kusy jsou svetlejsi, nektery tmavsi - tzn. hledam
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awww .. SO CUTE ... i dont think you can make it better .. it's great like that .. and the eyes are great too..
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The baby portrait is great, maybe the eyes are a bit too sharp for a high key picture?
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not sure ... eyes are smoother in full size or if printed on paper - the whole picture got sharpened before resize for dA as the resize always steels some sharpness, perhaps I set level too high
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there is always a space for improvement
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