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“You're all set! You can go get him from the paddock whenever you're ready to head out.”
Banks passed the halter and lead between her hands, ignoring the way her palms were sweating. The wooden gate behind her groaned, as it was pulled shut. While she refused to glance backward, a nervous swallow was involuntary. It was now just her and the Tokota alone in the pen. She couldn't help switching the halter between her hands again, wondering all the while which end was up. If she fastened it wrong what would happen? Would they refuse to let her leave with the Tokota. What was his name again? Rourke? Would he even lower his head enough for her to put the halter on?
For all the time Banks had spent around Tokotas, she had only ridden a handful of times. Some lessons when she was younger; that was all. Now that seemed like another lifetime. Even with all the research she had done, Banks couldn't ignore the worry that she was already in over her head. Despite that feeling, Banks quickly stepped away from the gate. She walked resolutely towards the Tokota, who had yet to notice her. He was staring over the fence at the activities of the busy camp, namely the preparation of some smoked fish.
The snow was swirling in eddies around her feet, as the wind blew around the enclosure, Rourke raised his head and snuffled hard at the air, exhaling little puffs of steam as he quickly turned towards Banks, He seemed to have just realized a stranger was in his paddock. He shook out his mane, which only served to make him look larger. Banks steps faltered for a moment. Was it her imagination or was he even taller than she had calculated? In fact, he looked more imposing than ever now that he was standing at attention, regarding her with a speculative expression. She thought back to the Tokotas that she had ridden before, “They were giving me the smallest ones that whole time, weren't they!”
The thought seemed to rally her, and Banks moved forward with renewed purpose, clicking her tongue to call to Rourke. She held a hand out for him to sniff. Rourke pressed his cold mottled nose to her palm. Though he wasn't trained yet, he had obviously been handled well. Banks felt her fears melt away as she gave him a scratch under his chin.
“Good boy, Rourke, good boy! You're so friendly, aren't you!” Banks exclaimed in a voice that raised into a higher tone of it's own accord.
The great spotted Tokota lowered his head to receive more attention and scratches. He snuffled at her treat filled pockets. Banks seized the opportunity, while scratching him behind the ears, to slip the halter over his head, continuing to coo to him and praise him as she clipped the snap into place. The halter was, remarkably, not upside down. She beemed up at Rourke as she patted him on the shoulder. Fastening her grip on the lead rope, there was no doubt in her mind that she could handle a Tokota of her own. She even wondered if she shouldn't have held out a bit longer and looked for one of those taller, dire built ones. She would certainly have looked imposing on something so tall.
At that moment the clunk of another rack of fish being stacked over a fire reached the pair. Rourke's head jerked up, he cranked his neck towards the sound. The small woman's feet momentarily left the ground, before she could slacken her grip on the rope. Landing off balance, Banks toppled to the ground. Rourke turned back, and seemed surprised that the red-faced new handler was now sitting on his front paws.
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Finally finished fiddling with this little story and picture Decided that I need to be "commissioning" myself more often, not just doing sketches but taking the time to do full images of my characters or things I enjoy. So this was my birthday gift to me. I needed a bit of a push to get back to writing some as well.
I just had to get some pictures of Banks and Rourke out of my head and onto paper. Hopefully in a few more pictures I will totally understand how to navigate the Toko group
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Characters Pictured:
Rourke 2638 Tracking Journal
Comments: 46
Wataha-Notte [2018-04-19 17:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Hello!
I come from Wataha Notte (link: watahanotte.blogspot.com/ ). This is a RPG blog and no one gets financial benefits from running it - it’s only for our fun. Can we use your artwork here? Of course I will sign the art with your nickname.
Kinds regards,
zucek
PS. I’m sorry for the mistakes – my English isn’t very good
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TheStrayTerrier [2015-12-27 16:00:43 +0000 UTC]
Love the little story and the image! You have such a handsome lad. Would love to get myself started in he Tokota world at some point, as I've only just started using dA very recently. Can't wait to see more images of these two in the future!
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xBlueMoon [2015-06-26 11:21:36 +0000 UTC]
He's really gorgeous. <3 The whole picture is, really. But at first glance, I thought it was an adult Tokota and a pup. xD I got so excited.
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pepweb1 [2015-06-24 21:59:37 +0000 UTC]
He's so pretty! This came out awesome Plague look forward to seeing more!
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tsareia [2015-06-24 14:33:19 +0000 UTC]
This is so pretty! I love how soft/hazy it is and the fur! I keep expecting the image to move, it looks like it's straight from an animated feature o.o
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imke14 [2015-06-24 10:53:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow this looks really gorgeous!
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DeepRedAkane [2015-06-24 08:22:16 +0000 UTC]
very pretty *-* <3
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SelahAnn [2015-06-24 05:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Ah! You finished it! It looks so beautiful-love the textures you used-really makes the snowy atmosphere come alive.
lol-and totally jealous of your Tokota-such a beautiful creature and love your design for Banks!
Hehe-that story was super cute! I look forward to seeing what adventures you have in store for these two!
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Plaguedog In reply to SelahAnn [2015-06-24 15:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Finally! I couldn't stop going back and adding little bits of detail. D:
Thank you so much! I'm so in love with his design, even though its a lot of spots to remember, I have a feeling I will end up drawing him a lot. XD And I seriously will throw future puppies at you as a bribe to join in on the fun.
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SelahAnn In reply to Plaguedog [2015-06-28 14:44:10 +0000 UTC]
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Bribe to join the fun, eh? Somehow I've succumbed to the temptation already...1 tokota has somehow magically turned into 2, possibly 3 *BUT*
I have this elaborate story to go with them rattling around in this scattered brain-I actually can't wait to get started on it-all I need now is designs for them xD
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SkyfulSeren [2015-06-24 05:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhh your Rourke is so stunning! And good for you, you need to draw for yourself sometimes! <333
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Plaguedog In reply to SkyfulSeren [2015-06-24 15:19:53 +0000 UTC]
<3 Thank you so much! Ahh It really is important and its something I often push aside for way too long D:
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sealle [2015-06-24 03:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Sweet Nibblets...... This is amazing! i love the details, the atmosphere, just everything!
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Plaguedog In reply to sealle [2015-06-24 15:18:51 +0000 UTC]
hehe Thank you so much! I will admit I have a small bald patch after stressing over how to draw that outfit from the side T_T
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OodlesofOwls [2015-06-24 00:36:24 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering when I was going to see this finished. It turned out great mang and that story was cute
And yes, you should do pictures for yourself more often.
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OodlesofOwls In reply to Plaguedog [2015-06-24 01:19:10 +0000 UTC]
It will probably help to prevent you from getting burnt out.
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Plaguedog In reply to OodlesofOwls [2015-06-24 01:21:30 +0000 UTC]
Which is a thing that happens to me! *sobs in the corner*
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OodlesofOwls In reply to Plaguedog [2015-06-24 01:46:50 +0000 UTC]
I know, that's why I said it silly.
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KirasDarkLight [2015-06-24 00:21:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh whoa you got a Tokota, and they look AMAZING! I look forward to seeing more of your Toko~
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DarkHeartSeer [2015-06-24 00:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, this is so beautiful! *-* And that little story is super cute! >u< I can't wait to see where you take these two!
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SolinaBright [2015-06-24 00:18:48 +0000 UTC]
The texture of the fur is captivating! Amazing characters! ♥
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DrazziElder [2015-06-24 00:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Your art is to die for. Poor Banks!
Also, happy belated birthday (I assume it was a while ago?)
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Plaguedog In reply to DrazziElder [2015-06-24 00:48:43 +0000 UTC]
<3 Thank you! T_T Banks is in for a tough road hehe
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Plaguedog In reply to OodlesofOwls [2015-06-24 00:49:03 +0000 UTC]
GASP! My secrets! You've revealed them!
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OodlesofOwls In reply to Plaguedog [2015-06-24 00:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Shhh. It's fine. *Pets you and feeds you homemade mashed potatoes*
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Plaguedog In reply to OodlesofOwls [2015-06-24 01:15:43 +0000 UTC]
...I'm going to sit and quietly eat this, but I'm going to be scowling on the inside. JUST SO YOU KNOW!
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Tauriiga [2015-06-24 00:13:24 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhh my word, this is gorgeous O___________O Banks and Rourke look like they're going to have an amazing relationship <3
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