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KoalaOShiz [2018-03-29 12:48:56 +0000 UTC]
I think the vest is going to be too much. Either don't give her one or make it shorter so it doesn't overcrowd her design. With the long shirt/tunic (that I thought was the vest at first)'s design already so detailled, it would be too much.
If you do want to keep it, give it another color, too maybe gray or a darker shade of brown, without it being too red to be similar to the tunic. Or just make it orange, make it pop ^^
But damn, IA development? That's badass! And creating an IA not based on a real person (like IA!Alfor) is just???? so damn impressive!!
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Plantress In reply to KoalaOShiz [2018-03-30 06:38:52 +0000 UTC]
I was worried that the vest was going to be a little much as it was, so thank you for your opinion!
And thank you! AI just seemed like it would be such a fun concept that I couldn't help myself! I'm not sure how advanced her AIs actually are, compared to other robots, but Maddie would be the sort to make sure that people could at least tell them apart based on speech patterns.
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KoalaOShiz In reply to Plantress [2018-04-01 14:30:15 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Maybe you can still try it short with a good orange?
Well, we're also not sure how advanced Earth is at the beginning of VLD, so you can try and make it very advanced, but probably not as advanced as Altean/Galra technology ^^
But yaaa, speech pattern is good, and setting a learning program in the AI so they are constantly evolving is good too!
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Plantress In reply to KoalaOShiz [2018-04-06 07:03:19 +0000 UTC]
I might try that, and make her vest part of a combat outfit or something!
Figuring out how advanced Earth is in Voltron is both a fun and frustrating part of writing fic for the series I've found. 'Not as advanced as Galra tech' still leaves a pretty wide gap. At least saying Maddie has been messing around taking apart Galra tech to figure out how it works gives me so excuses.
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