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Poetrymann β€” Seducer

Published: 2008-11-23 01:02:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1633; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 11
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Description He is a solitary hunter
who steals the light of the moon
and taints your nightmares gorgeous.
He shows you colors caught in prisms,
images that disturb what is forbidden,
that get under the silk of your skin
and let you discover your unseen world
spun in tapestries and stained glass.
He takes the words off your lips,
making them his own -
the secrets hidden in the well of souls -
to paint the sky, his only witness
to unspeakable crimes of the heart
as you follow the tangled threads of seduction
he has so cleverly laid out for you.
He has bought and sold you,
laid out the robes of rich desire
upon a bed of dreams held fast
by a canopy and veil of stars.
His lips implore you for more.
They seek confessions, transgressions
and dangerous promises, spilled from a tongue
grown heady and thick with wine
as he unravels your heart and mind
in the garments that pool at your feet
undone one by one by his deft fingers
leaving your fragile heart of darkness
the object of his obsession.
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Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2009-11-18 14:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. This is one I want to revisit at some point...

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imsuchanoxymoron [2009-03-14 18:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, breaktaking. Your words are truly magical.

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Poetrymann In reply to imsuchanoxymoron [2009-03-18 12:57:38 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate it and am glad you liked it.

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xeena-dragonkizz [2009-01-20 16:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Passionate and very much a mystery mood, in this touching poem...very captivating!!!! YouΒ΄re words seems to flow so easily...and natural!

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Poetrymann In reply to xeena-dragonkizz [2009-01-24 03:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! The subject matter fascinates me...it has so many levels.

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xeena-dragonkizz In reply to Poetrymann [2009-01-24 08:56:38 +0000 UTC]

you are very much welcome!!

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darkhairedangel [2008-12-27 21:09:11 +0000 UTC]

I read think I read this about 5 times and by the end I was reading it out loud, and even I was breathless ... just the kind of seduction I dream about, gorgeous.

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Poetrymann In reply to darkhairedangel [2008-12-30 15:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow - thanks so m uch!

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BoudiccaMoon [2008-12-21 10:39:39 +0000 UTC]

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Poetrymann In reply to BoudiccaMoon [2008-12-24 01:16:54 +0000 UTC]

And dawn...*Winks*

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Lieska [2008-12-06 03:39:31 +0000 UTC]

*sighs* And that's all I can think of to do...sigh in at least nine different ways...

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Poetrymann In reply to Lieska [2008-12-06 23:16:54 +0000 UTC]

*Smiles* That is a lovely compliment. Many thanks.

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An-Old-Feathery-hat [2008-12-04 05:06:18 +0000 UTC]

God, I love your work. *shudders*

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Poetrymann In reply to An-Old-Feathery-hat [2008-12-04 22:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I take it shudder is good?

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An-Old-Feathery-hat In reply to Poetrymann [2008-12-07 17:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, a shudder is good. It's a shudder of ecstasy, your descriptions give me chills straight to the core.

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XoShuShuXo [2008-12-02 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]

and taints your nightmares gorgeous.
i absolutely adore this line
i feel bad for this girl because it seems like she has no idea that he has been lying and seducing her
beautiful work

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Poetrymann In reply to XoShuShuXo [2008-12-04 22:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah, but some people love to be seduced...

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XoShuShuXo In reply to Poetrymann [2008-12-04 23:19:20 +0000 UTC]

hhaha yeah that's true

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Malandante [2008-11-28 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love it, such a magnificent piece.

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Poetrymann In reply to Malandante [2008-12-01 15:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Seduction comes in so many forms and from so many people...

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Malandante In reply to Poetrymann [2008-12-03 02:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes it does. It is a tricky thing too.

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moondaughterstory [2008-11-25 17:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Interesting characer description

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Poetrymann In reply to moondaughterstory [2008-11-29 23:35:46 +0000 UTC]

*Smiles* There are so many faces and sides to the art of seduction...

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Cinnamoncandy [2008-11-25 06:05:39 +0000 UTC]

I really must stop drooling when I read your writing, but I can't help myself. It's wonderful and delicious once again, my dear. -grins-

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Poetrymann In reply to Cinnamoncandy [2008-11-29 23:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! I am glad to know i have that effect!

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vintage-muse In reply to Cinnamoncandy [2008-11-27 03:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Ha, ha! Drool away, babe. I usually have the same problem. *winks*

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IRISHWSDM [2008-11-23 18:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Damn could I borrow your muse for a bit!! lol well said Brendan

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Poetrymann In reply to IRISHWSDM [2008-11-24 20:32:58 +0000 UTC]

*Grins* Only if I can borrow yours....

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IRISHWSDM In reply to Poetrymann [2008-11-24 21:42:41 +0000 UTC]

lol Slainte!!

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PondDreamer [2008-11-23 13:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. So rich in nuance.

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Poetrymann In reply to PondDreamer [2008-11-24 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, love. I am very glad you like it.

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Kouari [2008-11-23 07:37:20 +0000 UTC]

The words make me feel sorry for this girl... Does she know she's being...? Well, I don't have a word for it. Either way it sounds like only we can tell what side of the two-way mirror she's on.
Brilliant, though. I'm becoming a fan~

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Poetrymann In reply to Kouari [2008-11-24 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Seduction is a tricky, but beautiful little demon...

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Alleyana [2008-11-23 05:36:35 +0000 UTC]

This is heavy with seduction and mystery. Very well-woven!

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Poetrymann In reply to Alleyana [2008-11-24 20:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That was exactly what I tried to achieve!

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Alleyana In reply to Poetrymann [2008-11-25 00:26:03 +0000 UTC]

You achieved it well.

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Flobblem [2008-11-23 03:28:40 +0000 UTC]

i really quite like this piece

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Poetrymann In reply to Flobblem [2008-11-24 20:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks! It is still not quite where I want it yet...

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Kathryn-777 [2008-11-23 02:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Powerful and heady, it draws you deeply inside....Beautifully written luv!

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Poetrymann In reply to Kathryn-777 [2008-11-24 20:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! It just sort of happened on its own.

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Kathryn-777 In reply to Poetrymann [2008-11-24 20:48:23 +0000 UTC]

It shows...its spontaneous and flows like a stream of thoughts and emotions...

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atbarnett [2008-11-23 01:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Ominous..powerful words.

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Poetrymann In reply to atbarnett [2008-11-24 20:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! I think it applies to all sorts of people.

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ChibiChibiRobo [2008-11-23 01:43:20 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a boy I know >.>;

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Poetrymann In reply to ChibiChibiRobo [2008-11-24 20:29:21 +0000 UTC]

*Smiles* Sounds like a number of people I know....

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ChibiChibiRobo In reply to Poetrymann [2008-11-24 22:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Eh just this one dude for me

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SubzeroMonarch [2008-11-23 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]

...you never cease to amaze me. I adore how everything you write has layers to it. Your poetry requires deep thought and understanding to appreciate it. I don't believe I've said it before, but I would like you to know that you are truly my favorite writer on this site.

Have a lovely day.

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Poetrymann In reply to SubzeroMonarch [2008-11-24 20:29:01 +0000 UTC]

I am truly honored and appreciate that more than you know.

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caramac1 [2008-11-23 01:22:51 +0000 UTC]

brilliant def a fave

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Poetrymann In reply to caramac1 [2008-11-24 20:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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