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Published: 2008-08-15 22:43:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1920; Favourites: 130; Downloads: 7
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The sweet violence we commitwhen there are no witnesses -
where heat snaps the night in two
and runs down your back.
and my hips hold you prisoner,
pressed against the cool brick
spreading you open to me -
my language primitive with raw colors
and wicked verbs
that pierce your secret places
and make you ache.
Your body knows my meaning
and pulls me in -
the warm lift and roll of you
closing over me,
shaking down the dark,
working fierce magic
with your wanton tongue
lashing over my own -
twisting the night
into something bright and savage.
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Comments: 140
An erotic poem that does not fal into clichΓ©s. Thank you for this surprise.
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I try to avoid them as much as possible. I also try to avoid being blatant... Thanks.
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Holy hot. Perfectly described and not cliche, so sensual. Felt like a voyeur
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Many thanks - I appreciate it very much.
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Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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That's amazing! Thanks ever so much for putting this up!
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Thanks very much...and you are welcome!
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This is amazing. Very emotive and provoking in only a few short lines. Brilliant
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Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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Many thanks! I appreciate it!
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this is beautiful. so raw, and real, and passionate. great job!
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Thanks! Summer has that effect!
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WOW
This is amazing yet subtle. Its best like that. Your work's always amazing 
my erotica never sounds that good B[ any tips at coming near as good as you?
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Thanks very much. As far as erotica goes, I believe in being subtle. We all know the names of the body parts and what they do, so I tend to avoid them.
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I understand. Thanks for the tip ^^ Your work's very inspiring
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Thanks very much!
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I said it before, and I'll say it again;
You are such a special and sensual writer.
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I am very glad - thanks!
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I am glad - thanks!
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you're welcome (:
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Thanks very much. I appreciate it.
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oh jeez!!!! you really do know how to express things 
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*Smiles* Some things leave me speechless...
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Many thanks. I appreciate it!
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damn.
and i'm here all alone tonight...
lemme grab an ice cube.
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*Smiles* I am glad you like it.
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