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Published: 2004-07-07 16:00:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description to you i owe this state of mind
of body. of soul
what did you create?
was THIS your final goal?

An empty shell of nothing
a deselate waste of life
your grand becoming
my falling, by your sythe.

No more fears i have now
for you have brought them all
hopeing that you are proud
for all i do now is crawl.
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Comments: 8

Freespirit26 [2004-07-10 19:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Nice job! I like this alot!

Keep up the awsome work!

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poi-bitch In reply to Freespirit26 [2004-07-10 20:08:58 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* you really are to kind.








--stay sane inside of insanity---

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faeryzeph912 [2004-07-07 21:54:38 +0000 UTC]

this one was pretty good. i love the line "an empty shell of nothing" that really hit me hard. good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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poi-bitch In reply to faeryzeph912 [2004-07-08 09:05:38 +0000 UTC]

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brit-allure [2004-07-07 17:33:25 +0000 UTC]

"your grand becoming
my falling, by your sythe."

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poi-bitch In reply to brit-allure [2004-07-07 17:41:30 +0000 UTC]


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Japtain-Sack-Carrow [2004-07-07 16:04:45 +0000 UTC]

I like this one

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poi-bitch In reply to Japtain-Sack-Carrow [2004-07-07 17:43:14 +0000 UTC]

thanx.

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