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Description      I can't believe it… I just can't believe that my daughter is finally back! It's been just over a year since she was found… She was lying unconscious at the foot of a cliff. A boy said he had seen her jump off of the cliff to save our pet Quilava, Ravi… But the weird thing was she didn't have any injuries. No cuts or bruises, no broken bones, not even the slightest crack to the skull. Yet somehow…she had fallen into a coma.
     I couldn't believe it. First, my husband died, and then soon after, my daughter mysteriously fell into a coma… It was tearing me apart… But my son kept me hopeful. He always said that she would come back soon. And now…she finally has. My little girl has finally awaken!

     But she… She's depressed… Just like when her dad died… She always tries to put on a smile, to convince everyone that she's fine, that she has everything to be happy about… But she's not. I can see it. When she's thinking about it…that time she was in her "coma"…she stares blankly into the distance, and I could catch a glimpse of the tears forming in her eyes. And at night, when she's gone to bed, I could hear her muffled sobs…
     She told me once where she had been. She said she went to the Pokémon world, became a Skitty so she could help save it from an impending meteor… And she had made many friends there--her Cyndaquil partner, Keahi, and a Gengar… I could see how much she loved them. So, when she had to leave them for good…
     I still don't understand how that can even be possible, though. Becoming a Skitty, going to the Pokémon world… She was with us the whole time; I came to visit her every day. …At least, her body was with us… She told me it must have been her soul that left… It would make sense, I suppose, suddenly falling into a coma without explanation…but it's still hard to believe… It could have all just been a dream…
     But whatever the case, it was real enough for her. And now…she's just so depressed…
     Please… Somebody… Help my daughter… I haven't seen her happy since before her dad died… I need to see her smile again. Not that mask she puts on, but a genuine, heartfelt smile. She needs to be happy… I would give anything for it… Someone… Anyone… I beg of you… Please make my Sanura happy again…

*****

     Gengar and Keahi sat around the base, still upset over Sanura's departure. "Can you believe it's already been a month since she left…?" Keahi asked. "It still feels like she could just walk through the door any minute now, after only having completed a mission or something…"

     Gengar merely nodded, not really wanting to talk.

     "I wonder what she's doing now… I hope she's alright." He looked over to him. "Hey, Gengar. Do you think she still remembers us…? I mean, what if she lost her memory of her life here when she became human again…?"

     "I don't know…" he muttered absently.

     Keahi sighed. He really missed Sanura, too, but Gengar was taking things harder than he was. Always just sitting around, barely ever saying a word… He was just so depressed… Not that Keahi wasn't, of course. But he wanted to cheer up, for Sanura's sake. After all, he thought, she doesn't want them to grieve for her. It would be hard, but he would try to cheer up. "Well, I don't think she could ever forget us. She loved us too much, didn't she?"

     "…Yeah…"

     "And you really loved her, didn't you?"

     Gengar looked up to see that it was Ninetales who asked the question. She had just walked up to them. He huffed and looked away from her. "What are you doing here?"

     "Ninetales!" Keahi exclaimed in surprise. "Long time no see… But why are you here?"

     "I have come to bear Gengar some news."

     "Unless Sanura's back, then I don't really care," Gengar said.

     "No, she is not…"

     "Then, go away."

     "I imagine you would want to hear this, anyway, considering it does mean a chance to be with her again."

     He froze, and then quickly turned to stare at her incredulously.

*****

     Gengar stood at the road to the mystery dungeons, making his goodbyes.

     "I can't believe you're actually leaving," Ekans said sadly.

     "I wish you'd given us a bit more notice about this," Medicham added.

     "Sorry, guys," Gengar apologized. "I only just found out, myself."

     "Well… It's to see Sanura again, so I guess we understand."

     "You've been like a zombie ever since she left. It was depressing just to look at you like that."

     "Keh, yeah… Sorry."

     "Ah, forget about it." Medicham smiled at him. "Just go be with your Juliet, Mr. Romeo, and be happy again."

     "And tell her we said hi, okay?"

     "Kekeh!" Gengar laughed, embarrassedly. "Yeah, yeah! Just shut up already!" His teammates laughed, too.

     Then, Gardevoir stepped up to him. "Gengar…" And she gave him a big hug. "Please take care, my friend. And give Sanura my best regards, as well."

     He hugged her back. "Thank you…Gardevoir… And I'm really sorry for…"

     She shook her head. "There is no need for apologies. I have already forgiven you." She gave him a warm smile. "Thank you for coming back for me, my old friend. I wish you much happiness from here on."

     He smiled back with wet eyes and nodded.

     Ninetales walked up to him. "Are you ready?" she asked.

     "Yeah. I'm ready."

     "Then, let us be off."

     They both turned to leave, and then Keahi shouted out. "Hey, Gengar!" Gengar looked back at him questioningly. Keahi sniffed, tears in his eyes. "When… When you do find her again…you'd better take good care of her. Gengar, if you let anything happen to my little sister, I'll never forgive you!"

     He stared at him before nodding and giving him a grin. "Don't you worry. She'll be fine; I'll make sure of that!"

     Keahi nodded back, and then waved. "Bye, Gengar! Take care! Don't go get yourself cursed again, okay?"

     "Kekeke, I'll try not to!" He waved at them all one last time before finally leaving with Ninetales. "Adios!"

*****

     "Come on, Sanura! You have to see!"

     Sanura was being pulled along by her younger brother as they ran. "Slow down, Caleb! Why do we have to run?"

     He looked back at her. "'Cause if we don't hurry, you'll miss it!"

     And then they crashed into someone, all of them falling to the ground. The boy they crashed into glared at them. "Watch where you're--" But he paused when he noticed Sanura's collar, eyes widening.

     "Oh, we're so sorry!" Sanura pleaded before scrambling to her feet and held her hand out to the boy. "We weren't watching where we were going!"

     "No kidding…" he muttered absently, staring at her as she helped him up.

     Hearing his voice, she stopped to stare at him, as well.

     "Yeah, we're sorry, guy, but we really have to go now!" Caleb quickly said, tugging at Sanura's arm again. "Come on, Sanura!"

     He pulled her along, and she turned back to apologize again as they ran off. The boy continued to stare after her, incredulously. "That is her," he whispered to himself. And he began to follow them.

*****

     "Here it is!" Caleb exclaimed as they arrived at a park. "See there, Sanura? Look who's fighting!"

     Two trainers were fighting each other in a Pokémon battle. And the two Pokémon that were up against each other…

     "You said your best friends in the Pokémon world were a Cyndaquil and a Gengar, right? Well, I thought seeing this would cheer you up a bit."

     Sanura watched as the Cyndaquil and the Gengar fought each other, and she smiled. "Yeah… It's… It's just like them…" But, holding back tears, she quickly walked away.

     Caleb looked back and saw her leaving. "Sanura!" he shouted as he followed her to the trees. "I'm sorry, Sanura! I just thought it would…"

     Sanura leaned back on a tree, holding her arms. "N-no… I-I'm sorry, Caleb," she said shakily. "I'm glad you showed me. I really do appreciate it. Thank you…" But a tear managed to escape her eye.

     "Oh, p-please don't cry, Sanura! I-I didn't mean to…"

     "I-I'm… I-I'm not…" She couldn't hold it back anymore. She covered her face with her hands and began sobbing as she slid down to the ground. "I miss them, Caleb!" she cried. "I miss them so much! Keahi… A-and Gengar… I just want to see them one more time…"

     "Then, look up."

     Sanura caught her breath. The familiar voice wasn't her brother's. She slowly looked up from her hands, and she saw the boy they ran into earlier.

     He smirked at her. "If you were going to miss us this much, then why'd you have to leave in the first place?"

     Sanura stared at him incredulously. "G…Gengar…?"

     He winked. "I'm not a Gengar anymore."

     After a moment of letting the realization soak in that it really was him, she jumped up and clung to him in the tightest hug she could manage. "Gengar!"

*****

     How? How did you ever get here? And as a human again, too!

     Turns out that after I saved Gardevoir from the curse, I could have resumed life as a human again at any time, if I really wanted to. Ninetales helped me with that.

     So, then, Keahi's still…?

     Yeah… He's still there. But he wanted me to tell you hi, and not to worry about him. He really misses you, but…he said he'll take care of Team Tyrique for you, just like you wanted.

     Ah… That's good, then… Well… At least I got to see you again. That alone makes me so happy.

     Me, too… Me, too… It just wasn't the same without you, Sanura. I missed you too much…

     I missed you, too…

     Sanura… I know I've caused you a lot of pain before, but… If you can still forgive me… Would you let me stay with you?

     Gengar…

     Zane, now.

     Haha, Zane, then. …I've always forgiven you. It doesn't matter what you did so many years ago. You tried your hardest to be good and to save me, and that's all that counts. So, of course I want you to stay with me. I love you.

     …I love you, too…Sanura… Thank you so much…for everything.

*****

     Catey was walking home from the store, carrying the groceries in her hands. "I just can't believe it's him…" she muttered to herself. "How is it even possible? He looks no different than when I last saw him, nearly twenty-five years ago… Maybe Sanura really was telling the truth about her adventure in the Pokémon world… And her Gengar friend was…Akuji…all this time…" She stopped and sighed. "This is all just so weird… But somehow… He makes Sanura so happy. I haven't seen her this joyful in years. …So, I guess I'll just have to get used to it." She smiled. "After all, it is because of him that my daughter is smiling again."
     Then, suddenly, she heard a growl from the wood line. She turned to look and saw a hungry-looking Houndour ready to pounce her for her food. She stepped back nervously. "E-easy there, little guy. Y-you're just a little hungry, aren't you?"

     Another Houndour barked right behind her, and she jumped with a startled yelp, dropping the bags. The first Houndour began running toward her…and then was suddenly knocked into the wall with a forceful blow. And before anyone could react, the other Houndour was knocked into the wall, as well. Then, a dark blur rushed in, grabbed the Houndour, and swung him into the other. The two hounds yelped and whimpered as they ran off in fear.

     Catey watched as they ran, and then turned to her savior, who was already walking away. "Wait!" she cried out, holding her hand up. He halted, but didn't turn around. She stared at him another moment, looking over his features. "…Thorne…?"

     The Banette flinched. A tear escaped his eye, and without looking back, he dashed off before she could say any more.
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Comments: 130

PancakeShiners [2013-12-22 21:16:32 +0000 UTC]

kefwplew;'efkwe;


GAAAH it's sad how I just barely read this.  It's so sad but sweet at the same time.

I'll have to do fanart.  lD


You may me want to put Gengar on my team in my fanfiction.  Derp.

...I'd totally do it too, just worried about what others might think...

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PokreatiaForms In reply to PancakeShiners [2014-01-06 02:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Eehee, I'm glad you enjoyed it~
Oh! Fanart is always welcome~! 8D

And there's nothing wrong with that. 976
'S your fanfic, do what you want!

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PancakeShiners In reply to PokreatiaForms [2014-01-06 02:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Cool! You can expect some from me! :3


Yay.  XP It'll be fun!

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Kurarukisoldier [2013-06-16 18:23:07 +0000 UTC]

MY FEELS!!! THIS IS LIKE THE UMPTEENTH TIME THAT IVE READ THIS AND IM BAWLING!! THIS IS THE BEST MAMA!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Kurarukisoldier [2013-06-19 02:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Eeheeeeghdfjgdknjh, I'm so glad you like it that much~! >7<
Thank you sooooooooo muchghfkjhkjfgc!

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Kurarukisoldier In reply to PokreatiaForms [2013-06-19 02:10:01 +0000 UTC]

no problem mama! ^3^

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Coffie-Buzz [2013-04-16 23:11:45 +0000 UTC]

THE FEELS!! Freaking Adorable!!!! best PMD Fic I have EVER read!!!

I will admit you had me worried that Gengar and Sanura would never see each other again!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Coffie-Buzz [2013-04-17 03:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Eehee~! Thank you so much! I'm glad it managed to move you so~!

Haha~ The suspense made it all the more sweet, yes~?

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Coffie-Buzz In reply to PokreatiaForms [2013-04-18 17:51:00 +0000 UTC]

yur welcome^^


Yes it did!

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rikert1 [2013-03-13 17:29:20 +0000 UTC]

One of the best stories I have ever read. Just wow.

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PokreatiaForms In reply to rikert1 [2013-03-22 05:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, I'm so glad you think so! 8D
Thank you so very much~! \^7^/

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rikert1 In reply to PokreatiaForms [2013-03-22 18:39:04 +0000 UTC]

you've Kinda inspired me to write storys myself (thanks). Maybe a story about the new mystery dungeon thats coming out. you think thats a good idea?

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PokreatiaForms In reply to rikert1 [2013-03-22 21:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh, excellent~! 8D
Of course! Go for it~!

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Dawn-Starrie [2012-06-25 17:59:11 +0000 UTC]

this ending literally made me cry. It's so beautiful

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Dawn-Starrie [2013-03-22 05:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I'm glad it moved you so~ 8'D
Thank you so very much~! \^7^/

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Dawn-Starrie In reply to PokreatiaForms [2013-03-23 14:24:45 +0000 UTC]

You're so very welcome!!!~ \(^J^)/

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MewMewPeach365 [2011-06-11 03:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Keahi is Sanura's big brother? I'm confused!!!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to MewMewPeach365 [2011-06-14 15:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, not blood brother. Just self-proclaimed brother. XD;

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MewMewPeach365 In reply to PokreatiaForms [2011-06-14 17:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh! That makes sense.

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TorikaDraws [2011-05-02 12:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh Thorne you stupid little doll oO

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Snickerlovescookies [2011-01-11 00:12:28 +0000 UTC]

its such a beautiful ending T^T

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Snickerlovescookies [2011-06-14 15:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ TTwTT

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Snickerlovescookies In reply to PokreatiaForms [2011-06-18 18:50:45 +0000 UTC]

x3

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theSTORMriser [2011-01-02 19:35:04 +0000 UTC]

the Revenge of the Heart story has got to be the best story i've ever read, you are awesome.

fav and watch

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PokreatiaForms In reply to theSTORMriser [2011-01-07 08:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really? I'm honored! Thank you quite muchly~ I'm glad you enjoyed it~

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Lindseytheskitty [2010-11-10 11:59:23 +0000 UTC]

How sweet of Gengar!

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Scarlet-Nova20 [2010-03-27 00:02:06 +0000 UTC]

oh hey i realized! if she had been with them for a year then.... they must had Christmas or thanksgiving together! : )

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Scarlet-Nova20 [2010-03-28 22:45:48 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, indeed!

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Mepps [2010-03-19 05:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Holy... freaking... crap.
I never. Ever. Expected this.
This is just... absolutley amazing.
Couldn't have had a better ending, in my opinion.
Wow.

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Mepps [2010-03-20 20:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, really? 8D
Why, thank you very much! I'm so glad you think so~

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Mepps In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-21 04:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Yep.
You're welcome~

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Pikininja [2010-03-06 03:05:11 +0000 UTC]

EPIC
OH MY GOD
I cried more..
That was a butt-awesome ending. <:,D

Aww but why Thorne run away? ,:C He just kicked some doggy butt!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Pikininja [2010-03-06 05:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, thank you very much~

Thorne was too ashamed of himself to be with Catey again, after what he did to her daughter... ;^;

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Pikininja In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 16:42:17 +0000 UTC]



D'aww that's depressing. ;A;

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Pikininja [2010-03-06 20:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. TT^TT

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KyotoPhoenix [2010-03-05 23:41:49 +0000 UTC]

OH MAH GOD! This is probably the best fanfic I have ever read! I know how this started out as a comic, but I think it works better as a fanfic. And I have to say I love Thorne. He's snapped yet he can think straight and even calmly talk to his enemies. I also really like how it ended...Didn't expect Thorne to wish for Sanura to turn back into a human.

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PokreatiaForms In reply to KyotoPhoenix [2010-03-06 01:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really? Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

Heehee, indeed, Thorne. Perhaps he was able to speak so calmly 'cause he knew Akuji would get what's coming to him reeeaaal soon. >w>
And with some people, when they snap, their train of thought becomes contrarily more calculating and, of course, much more sinister~ >BD

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KyotoPhoenix In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 04:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Yes really. And you're welcome. That very well might be it, thoughts like that can keep one's sanity. Tho I find that very interesting that some people's train of thought becomes more calculating, I always figured that when people snapped they compleatly lost it. And yes, it totally makes Thorne way more sinister than other snapped characters.

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PokreatiaForms In reply to KyotoPhoenix [2010-03-06 15:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Especially since he would normally not be so cruel in his punishments. :U;
He was puuuushed~ Paaaast~ His li.miiiiit~ *hit*

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KyotoPhoenix In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 17:22:37 +0000 UTC]

OOooooooh!

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kyro909 [2010-03-05 23:07:27 +0000 UTC]

WAAAAAIIIIT A MINUTE. HOW old is Gengar, exactly? And how old is Sanura?

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PokreatiaForms In reply to kyro909 [2010-03-06 06:00:53 +0000 UTC]

WELL, you see... 8D; *hit*
Akuji was reborn as a Gengar, right? Therefore, it was a new life. And that new life of his is 14 years old. |D
And Sanura is 12. >w>;

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kyro909 In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 14:50:41 +0000 UTC]

X3

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Killian-Darkhunter [2010-03-04 05:02:34 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!!!! It's so.....*cries a litle* Yay for Sanura and Zane!!!! But poor Thorne!!! Why, dammit, WHY!?!?!?!?!?! Its so good and so sad and so much better written than Twilight!!!!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Killian-Darkhunter [2010-03-04 12:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, indeed~
Really? Why, thank you very much!

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Killian-Darkhunter In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-04 23:33:35 +0000 UTC]

I did, really.

It really is. This has a plot, Twilight does not. And you are very welcome!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Killian-Darkhunter [2010-03-05 03:36:22 +0000 UTC]

It had...something of a plot. ...Eventually. >w>; *hit*

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Killian-Darkhunter In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 01:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Twilight still sucked in comparison to this!

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PokreatiaForms In reply to Killian-Darkhunter [2010-03-06 06:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank yo, then. XD;

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Killian-Darkhunter In reply to PokreatiaForms [2010-03-06 06:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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