Comments: 5
GreyCloudCat [2014-10-08 19:16:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow, coloring looks amazing!!! I like the contrast of the simple backgrounds and detailed lineart. Also, the lineart looks GREAT. I don't know what you did, but the lines blew me away as soon as I looked at this. I also love how dynamic the hair and expressions are. Only suggestion I have for you is to add some more dynamics/ speed lines to the fifth and last panels. Looking back, I do see them, but they're a tad bit indistinct and they don't have much impact. Otherwise, amazing work!!!
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Pollitio In reply to GreyCloudCat [2014-10-09 03:35:53 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, I was making the lineart at 5 am. Insomnia can do wonders it seems...
Also, thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah, I should have made them bigger... oh well, next time's the good!
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Gecko-Comics [2014-10-08 18:00:25 +0000 UTC]
was that Dragon Pulse? THAT LOOKED AWESOME.
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Pollitio In reply to Gecko-Comics [2014-10-09 02:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it is indeed Dragon Pulse!!
And thank you!! That sole panel took me 2 entire days to pull off :''''D
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