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Pony-Berserker β€” Lyra's Fanfic

Published: 2013-09-06 20:04:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 82993; Favourites: 908; Downloads: 363
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Description In the next part, Lyra draws a comic, submits it, doesn't get a response, goes insane and ends up in a lunatic asylum, where she spends 15 years until she's released. Then she goes on a killing spree, kills 4 ponies until she is captured. She gets a death penalty. Gets clemency from Princess Celestia, and is put in the Everfree Penitentiary, where she serves life sentence with no parole. Or not.

Who are the people mentioned by Lyra? I dunno, but these people might know . Ask them.
Special thanks to VoidChicken and Alamais for pre-reading!
Inked and colored in ArtRage. Lettered in Inkscape. | MLP and its characters belong to Hasbro | If you repost or translate this comic, please link back here. You can repost it only outside of DeviantArt! | EQD 07 Sep 2013 post | Russian translation ponyworld.egloos.com/454439 >Korean translation
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Nuttyhoof [2023-09-11 08:59:30 +0000 UTC]

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fyre-byrd [2019-04-15 10:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Alicorn Sparkles... is that synonymous with Mary Sues?

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gattuvem72 [2018-11-11 02:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Here's my question: how does Lyra send mail between the pony world and the human world? (Through the portal, perhaps?)

Also, no offense, but what was the reaction of the people of Quebec to seeing something that was allegedly written by a unicorn?

And does Fyre Flye mean whom I think it means?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to gattuvem72 [2018-11-11 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

she sent a letter to the MLP world's equivalent of Equestria Daily... and this "Quebec Weekly" is just a name referencing the fact MLP is created in Canada but "Quebec" in this context is a fictional land of My Little Humans in the MLP world >.>

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gattuvem72 In reply to Pony-Berserker [2018-11-11 21:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Is fyre-flye also QuΓ©bΓ©coise?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to gattuvem72 [2018-11-11 22:10:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't know

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gattuvem72 In reply to Pony-Berserker [2018-11-12 03:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, in the not-so-likely event that there is a universe where brightly colored ponies who somehow learned to talk like humans and made up a show about us insist that humans are only for little girls, I'd probably beg to differ...

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MoonFlowerSax [2017-03-10 22:54:03 +0000 UTC]

I like how you turned those fimfiction terms into human counterparts which partially hurt as much.

Where's that drawn face in the background from (last panel); it looks familiar to me.
And what is this deku nut look-a-like?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to MoonFlowerSax [2017-03-10 23:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Deku nut what?
The face comes from "Bean: The Ultimate Disaster Movie" - this is what Mr. Bean drew as a replacement for Whistler's mother's head

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MoonFlowerSax In reply to Pony-Berserker [2017-03-10 23:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Aaah! Yes! I remember! It's from there, thank you! I knew I've seen it already.

Deku nut, an item from The Legend Of Zelda.
Well, I mean that thing that looks like a ball with a big stitching around it.

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littlecuteloki [2015-11-11 19:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Man what happened to the show "My Little Goat"

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Elsa-Does-Minecraft [2015-10-06 13:58:22 +0000 UTC]

WHERE IS LINK TO NEXT PART?!!!!!

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Pony-Berserker In reply to Elsa-Does-Minecraft [2015-10-07 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]

There... there is no next part

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Elsa-Does-Minecraft In reply to Pony-Berserker [2015-10-09 23:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Oooohhhh... But it as such a good story line...

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Charmless-Crescent97 [2015-08-08 11:26:59 +0000 UTC]

I know how it feels sister.

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Chainsaw8712 [2015-06-13 17:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Nothing illegal in here. I wonder what's in their?

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ForestMidget In reply to Chainsaw8712 [2015-09-19 17:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Maybe naughty "rejected" fanfics

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kurtisatdeviantart [2015-05-28 19:32:15 +0000 UTC]

lolΒ 

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Aaron235 [2015-04-23 04:49:24 +0000 UTC]

That description... O.o

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MCAsomm [2015-03-08 20:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Quebec?

FCK YEAH! BEST PROVINCE!

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E-guardias [2015-01-25 13:28:57 +0000 UTC]

most fanfiction writters.

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dragonflyzMC [2014-08-29 03:50:05 +0000 UTC]

whats in the "toybox"?

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ihamza995 [2014-06-17 16:52:40 +0000 UTC]

The Mr.Bean picture in the back!

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MLPegasis4898 [2014-05-13 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]

"Pre reader who likes socks"

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Twizzler787 [2014-05-04 14:53:37 +0000 UTC]

I love the box in the first panel. "I keep nothing illegal here. Just toys, k?"

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Lakword [2014-04-10 00:24:12 +0000 UTC]

I see Monalisa after Mr.Bean did work on her on the last panel XD

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DragonTamer360 [2014-04-05 01:13:14 +0000 UTC]

awwww lol

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ABrightSide [2014-04-02 16:47:07 +0000 UTC]

What's OOC?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to ABrightSide [2014-04-02 17:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Google it...

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Lakword In reply to Pony-Berserker [2014-04-10 00:25:01 +0000 UTC]

I did and all I found were sexual ones which did not make much sense with this comic

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Pony-Berserker In reply to Lakword [2014-04-10 09:36:29 +0000 UTC]

OOC? OOC is "out-of-character". There is nothing sexual in it, lol.

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Lakword In reply to Pony-Berserker [2014-04-10 09:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh... Thank you

I guess I need to change search provider as this one I have cant seem to find anwsers I need XD

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SasQ In reply to Lakword [2014-04-13 20:43:43 +0000 UTC]

That's because Google personalizes your search results according to what you search most frequently

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Lakword In reply to SasQ [2014-04-13 21:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Im pretty sure thats the last thing Im searching. If it would be true it would find Skyrim refrences

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ggpestilence [2014-03-19 13:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Them references !

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kieransderp [2014-03-09 18:43:19 +0000 UTC]

can any one see the mr been reference in the last scene??????

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adam7868 [2014-01-23 16:41:19 +0000 UTC]

and i glad you put this up here this goes perfectly with my argument that there are not enough lyra fanfics nd there need to be more and the only good fanfics with lyra at her best is with either bon bon(which im ok with) or octy and vinyl(those two have serious problems)

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QuakeBrothers [2014-01-12 04:59:00 +0000 UTC]

what is OOC?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to QuakeBrothers [2014-01-12 11:14:43 +0000 UTC]

use google...

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MLP-OC-Creators-Wiki [2014-01-03 00:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Minty, how dare you reject Lyra's story!!

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Pony-Berserker In reply to MLP-OC-Creators-Wiki [2014-01-03 00:37:05 +0000 UTC]

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Aqua-andfriends [2013-12-24 02:56:11 +0000 UTC]

I love this:


Panel 1

TOYS:

I don't keep anything illegal here

Only toys here, K?


Panel 2

If you can read this, it means nothing


Panel 3

NOthing illegal here:seriously.

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Linkzilla [2013-12-07 09:52:34 +0000 UTC]

...Is that Mr. Bean's Whistler's Mother in the final panel?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to Linkzilla [2013-12-07 13:45:22 +0000 UTC]

yes

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BanditBusterJ [2013-12-06 13:14:22 +0000 UTC]

ah yes, the 'overdone' factor in a fando

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Moonstar-SilverClan [2013-12-05 01:05:27 +0000 UTC]

You know that theres no such "Quebec weekly" rigth? I actually live in Quebec -.-

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Pony-Berserker In reply to Moonstar-SilverClan [2013-12-05 11:18:36 +0000 UTC]

and don't say it's the first time you see a made-up name in a work of fiction. it's a common thing.

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Moonstar-SilverClan In reply to Pony-Berserker [2013-12-05 12:51:36 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say that, a lot of time theres made-up name in fiction, but I was surprised because I rarely see one with the name of my province..

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Pony-Berserker In reply to Moonstar-SilverClan [2013-12-05 11:17:27 +0000 UTC]

1. I came up with a title that wasn't supposed to be real. search through comments for explanations.

2. Reality is unrealistic. There's a French-language Quebec newspaper with a title translating into "Quebec weekly".

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Moonstar-SilverClan In reply to Pony-Berserker [2013-12-05 12:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay.....

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