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kalmanen [2019-07-17 14:04:22 +0000 UTC]
Interesting to compare the two!!! Your flesh tones are definitely better, more natural and the light overall is softer and more muted, which fits the dramatic light/dark difference. I like that you give her head more space here, it feels more like an traditional painting/portrait (same for the expression!) though I wouldn't mind having that little extra touch of lighter shade in the eyes to make them pop. Perhaps the model did have a bit of couperosa or otherwise just very warm tones on her nose and upper cheeks, but now it looks much more better - in the old one, there's a little too much pink/red and it gives her that almost "alcoholic" look Her lips and nose were very pronounced, I like them in this version much better, even though her expression is much more somber/sad now. Her bangs also don't feel like they're sitting on top of her head instead of being part of her head, you know? Much less sharp contrast there which is great!
I don't really have a lot of criticism about this version, I think you have come a long way since the old portrait and definitely to the better direction. I would maybe consider giving her body more shape, or at least some vague idea that she just doesn't disappear into darkness after the shoulder LOL Other than that, this is really nice!! I can't wait for another couple of years when you'll hopefully do a new repaint
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CSStables [2019-06-22 13:53:07 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful shading and use of light and color again! I love how you implemented a bit of cold colors in her hair where it's darker, makes the painting feel more dimensional <3
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Zenithity [2019-06-17 12:01:39 +0000 UTC]
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