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prairiedaisy β€” how to forget
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Description how does the wind speak; as
unraveled voice, or enduring silence?

how will the hand fall; as
untamed flowers, or enfolded peace?

how will you dream,
unschooled heart, in soundless meter,
in flightless flicker or unfuelled fireΒ Β 
and unhealed hope of heartless lovers,
or sightless slivers of broken light -

tell me.

how do you remember?
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Comments: 25

sherrabelle [2009-09-27 14:36:02 +0000 UTC]

I keep coming back to this again and again. It is so... great that I become wordless when I try to describe how I feel about it.

how will you dream,
unschooled heart, in soundless meter,
in flightless flicker or unfuelled fire

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prairiedaisy In reply to sherrabelle [2009-09-27 20:34:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it had such an impression on you. That means a lot to me.

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pardonM3 [2009-07-23 19:42:07 +0000 UTC]

how will you dream,
unschooled heart, in soundless meter,
in flightless flicker or unfuelled fire
and unhealed hope

.

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prairiedaisy In reply to pardonM3 [2009-07-26 16:21:26 +0000 UTC]

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losingmyfaith [2009-07-23 03:07:00 +0000 UTC]

i love this, good work!

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prairiedaisy In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-07-26 16:26:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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losingmyfaith In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-27 03:38:12 +0000 UTC]

welcome!!

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gliitchlord [2009-07-22 18:47:08 +0000 UTC]

The words.

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prairiedaisy In reply to gliitchlord [2009-07-26 16:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Charles.

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cookymonstah [2009-07-22 04:45:47 +0000 UTC]

i love how this flows, your word choice, and its simplicity.

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prairiedaisy In reply to cookymonstah [2009-07-26 16:27:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do. Thank you!

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IAmPhoenixMoth [2009-07-22 00:54:11 +0000 UTC]

The contradictory possibilities are what I like best in this.

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prairiedaisy In reply to IAmPhoenixMoth [2009-07-26 16:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Ahh Epi, you read me well.

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IAmPhoenixMoth In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-26 20:54:16 +0000 UTC]

only because you seem to like me enough to allow me to see you.

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prairiedaisy In reply to IAmPhoenixMoth [2009-07-26 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]

That's fair enough. But it also means that you are emotionally attuned.

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IAmPhoenixMoth In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-26 22:18:15 +0000 UTC]

which makes me pleased.

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prairiedaisy In reply to IAmPhoenixMoth [2009-07-26 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]

as you rightly should be.

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IAmPhoenixMoth In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-27 01:17:05 +0000 UTC]

mmm.

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platinummyr [2009-07-21 22:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Welcome back

I remember in words,
not pictures;
In moments, not times;
In whispers, not voices.

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prairiedaisy In reply to platinummyr [2009-07-26 16:29:25 +0000 UTC]

I dunno how 'back' I'm going to be, the study I'm doing right now is taking a lot of my time and I feel bad for neglected dA but something's gotta give, right?

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platinummyr In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-26 23:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Something always does, yes. Study is good, so keep at it!

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prairiedaisy In reply to platinummyr [2009-07-26 23:24:07 +0000 UTC]

*neglecting {forgive me it's late over here.} I will definitely keep at it.

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platinummyr In reply to prairiedaisy [2009-07-26 23:27:33 +0000 UTC]

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rebeldork [2009-07-21 22:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow - beautiful.
I love the alliteration and the simpleness. It's very lovely.

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prairiedaisy In reply to rebeldork [2009-07-26 16:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed this - thank you for that!

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