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Whoo, this entry has been a tiresome endeavor, and despite having over a month, I just couldn’t finish it, ugh! This kills me so much because I love these little guys, they’re super cute… but also super detailed! Goodness me, so many details, my poor hand…. You aren’t even seeing all the detail! Those parts of white on the hippogriff and the demon child by the doorway, they’re covering up the extra details I intended for you to see when the shading was put in! Unfortunately, time and motivation was not on my side, so here you go! I do intend to finish this at some point.

Well, it may take me another weekend, if I can muscle up the will, to finish, so it may not be too long. I did intend to have Lighting Bliss (belonging to Lighting Bliss the artist/brony analyst who I do not intend to tag until I draw her in the picture as to not bother her) off in the doorway there as part of the plot you’ll be able to read down there. I hope this is sufficient enough for your contest! I had a few ideas, but this ended up being the one I choose; I'm still tempted to draw this one, maybe some other time as some fun fan art if that's alright.

All the little children shown here and mentioned in the story (all that aren't Lighting Bliss) belong to

Look here to learn more about them: schokocream.deviantart.com/art…

Look here for the contest: schokocream.deviantart.com/jou…

The Story (quick note, I’m calling Maddy and Mary’s child Zestle because there’s no official name that I know of and I need one, I’m also assuming Aeon and Tyandaga’s kid, I swear I didn't spell that right, is Demon, that’s what’s written, please correct me if I’m wrong about anything, I'm sorry if I am, I looked over what I could to get everything right, it’s late and I probably will make a lot of mistakes)

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“All clear!” Pumpkin called to her compatriots as she trotted in excitedly, her pink, hippogriff friend bounded closely after her followed by five other fillies. Around the little fillies were they typical commodities of your average kitchen from tables and chairs to cabinets and

“Why did you drag me along… for this…?” Soaring Soul grumbled as he was the last to drag his hooves into the kitchen.

“Because Zestle can’t sit still, Malichite would just sit there and cry, Harmony’s too small, and Rico’s… Rico….” Thunderhead explained.

“And we can’t do it without you!” Golden Pie piped in as he pressed his nose against Soaring Soul.

“Oh, don’t I feel special….” He groaned in response. Pumpkin placed her hooves against the cabinets and looked up at the counter.

“There it is, the sweet gold grail of sweet goodness!” Pumpkin spoke as drool seemed to drip from her lips, her eyes locked onto a jar with the words “Cookies” written on it.

“Do you think it’s filled with some rainbow treats?!” Sugar Crystal questioned as she stood by her best friend.

“Maybe some extra special magical deliciousness only Mrs. Bliss could make!” She pushed against her chubby cheeks in delight.

“Actually, they’re just regular cookies.” Thunderhead explained.

“Don’t ruin the moment.” Pumpkin glared at her.

“Can we move this along, I have better things to do than to sit here and watch you two drool?” Demon sneered at the two.

“Do you want the cookies or not?” Sugar Skull asked.

“If it means siting here as you waste all the time those three buffoons are buying us with no cookies to show for, then no.”

“Ugh, you are almost as much of a kill joy as Soaring Soul.” Pumpkin stated, Soaring Soul huffed at the remark.

“So, how are we going about this?” Heart Charmer asked curiously.

“While Demon stands watch, we’ll pile up, standing on one another in a triangle, and Sugar Crystal will bring us the goods!” The orange coated filly explained.

“Why does she get to be on top?!” Soaring Soul complained.

“I’ve got thumbs!” Sugar answered as she moved her thumbs arounds.

“Now let’s get into formation!” Pumpkin cried, she then placed her hoof on her nose. “Not it!” Heart Charmer quickly followed in this motion leaving Thunderhead, Soaring Soul, and Golden Pie confused as they stared at the two. Pumpkin groaned.

“We’re picking who’s not going on the bottom!”

“Can we have a redo?” Thunderhead asked.

“We don’t have time, just stand there!” Sugar Crystal stated pointed to the spot she stood in before quickly stepping aside. Thunderhead sighed.

“I’ll gladly form the base of our cookie operation!” Golden Pie said as he saluted with pride and ran into position.

“Whatever….” Soaring Soul sighed as sat in his spot while Thunder reluctantly walked next to him. Heart Charmer walked up to her colorfully maned friend, stepping gently into his head and onto his back who went down on his front hooves and hoisted his backside up.

“Ally-op!” He exclaimed as he lifted his friend up high. Heart Charmer couldn’t help but let out a little giggle at her silly little friend. Pumpkin stepped a bit clumsily onto Thunderhead and used Soaring Soul for support.

“Ah!” Soaring Soul groaned.

“Careful!” Thunder grimaced as part of Pumpkin’s weight weighed down on her.

“Come on, Sugar Crystal!” Pumpkin motioned to her reassuringly. The eager hippogriff moved her front close to the ground before pouncing onto of Thunder and climbed up Pumpkin’s back. Pumpkin and Thunder moaned and groaned as Sugar’s claws burrowed into their bodies as she scaled the tower and reached the top. Her eyes widening a moment, her mouth a gap, as she stared at the treasure chest before her.

“This is going to be so good!” Sugar Crystal stated with excitement. As the group focused on the cookies, Demon stood by the door looking about lazily, pretending to pay attention, as he thought about all his plans he had in mind, devilish plans. His ears then twitched at the sound of hoof steps not too away.

“It’s in the kitchen!” Lighting Bliss called to the group out in the family room. Demon smiled at this, looked to the group quickly before taking off.

“Do you have them yet?” Pumpkin groaned impatiently.

“Almost!” Sugar exclaimed as she nearly had her claws around the jar. Just before she could claim her prize, a shocked gasped cried out.

“What are you doing?!” Lighting Bliss cried. All head turned in shock at the mare as Thunder took one misstep causing Pumpkin’s hoof to slip. This small action set off a domino type chain as all the children came tumbling down, forming one massive heap of fluff and feathers.

“Uhhhh…. Demon....” Pumpkin growled then looked up to see that he had fled.

“That… little… traitor….” Thunder growled.

“What in Celestia’s name were you thinking?!” Lighting Bliss cried. “You could have gotten seriously hurt!” The group only moaned in pain. Lighting took the jar of cookies in her magic. “No sweets for any of you,” the group moaned again “and none for you for a week, Thunder and Golden.”

“But, mom!” Thunder cried.

“Don’t mom me young lady!” Lighting scolded her daughter. “Now get up, I’m sure your parents would like a word with each of you!” Lighting huffed and walked out of the room.

“It could have gone worse, we could have had a sweet ban for a month.” Golden Pie piped up in his ever cheerful tone.

“Shut it, Golden….” Soaring Soul mumbled.

Description

Whoo, this entry has been a tiresome endeavor, and despite having over a month, I just couldn’t finish it, ugh! This kills me so much because I love these little guys, they’re super cute… but also super detailed! Goodness me, so many details, my poor hand…. You aren’t even seeing all the detail! Those parts of white on the hippogriff and the demon child by the doorway, they’re covering up the extra details I intended for you to see when the shading was put in! Unfortunately, time and motivation was not on my side, so here you go! I do intend to finish this at some point.

Well, it may take me another weekend, if I can muscle up the will, to finish, so it may not be too long. I did intend to have Lighting Bliss (belonging to Lighting Bliss the artist/brony analyst who I do not intend to tag until I draw her in the picture as to not bother her) off in the doorway there as part of the plot you’ll be able to read down there. I hope this is sufficient enough for your contest! I had a few ideas, but this ended up being the one I choose; I'm still tempted to draw this one, maybe some other time as some fun fan art if that's alright.

All the little children shown here and mentioned in the story (all that aren't Lighting Bliss) belong to

Look here to learn more about them: schokocream.deviantart.com/art…

Look here for the contest: schokocream.deviantart.com/jou…

The Story (quick note, I’m calling Maddy and Mary’s child Zestle because there’s no official name that I know of and I need one, I’m also assuming Aeon and Tyandaga’s kid, I swear I didn't spell that right, is Demon, that’s what’s written, please correct me if I’m wrong about anything, I'm sorry if I am, I looked over what I could to get everything right, it’s late and I probably will make a lot of mistakes)

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“All clear!” Pumpkin called to her compatriots as she trotted in excitedly, her pink, hippogriff friend bounded closely after her followed by five other fillies. Around the little fillies were they typical commodities of your average kitchen from tables and chairs to cabinets and

“Why did you drag me along… for this…?” Soaring Soul grumbled as he was the last to drag his hooves into the kitchen.

“Because Zestle can’t sit still, Malichite would just sit there and cry, Harmony’s too small, and Rico’s… Rico….” Thunderhead explained.

“And we can’t do it without you!” Golden Pie piped in as he pressed his nose against Soaring Soul.

“Oh, don’t I feel special….” He groaned in response. Pumpkin placed her hooves against the cabinets and looked up at the counter.

“There it is, the sweet gold grail of sweet goodness!” Pumpkin spoke as drool seemed to drip from her lips, her eyes locked onto a jar with the words “Cookies” written on it.

“Do you think it’s filled with some rainbow treats?!” Sugar Crystal questioned as she stood by her best friend.

“Maybe some extra special magical deliciousness only Mrs. Bliss could make!” She pushed against her chubby cheeks in delight.

“Actually, they’re just regular cookies.” Thunderhead explained.

“Don’t ruin the moment.” Pumpkin glared at her.

“Can we move this along, I have better things to do than to sit here and watch you two drool?” Demon sneered at the two.

“Do you want the cookies or not?” Sugar Skull asked.

“If it means siting here as you waste all the time those three buffoons are buying us with no cookies to show for, then no.”

“Ugh, you are almost as much of a kill joy as Soaring Soul.” Pumpkin stated, Soaring Soul huffed at the remark.

“So, how are we going about this?” Heart Charmer asked curiously.

“While Demon stands watch, we’ll pile up, standing on one another in a triangle, and Sugar Crystal will bring us the goods!” The orange coated filly explained.

“Why does she get to be on top?!” Soaring Soul complained.

“I’ve got thumbs!” Sugar answered as she moved her thumbs arounds.

“Now let’s get into formation!” Pumpkin cried, she then placed her hoof on her nose. “Not it!” Heart Charmer quickly followed in this motion leaving Thunderhead, Soaring Soul, and Golden Pie confused as they stared at the two. Pumpkin groaned.

“We’re picking who’s not going on the bottom!”

“Can we have a redo?” Thunderhead asked.

“We don’t have time, just stand there!” Sugar Crystal stated pointed to the spot she stood in before quickly stepping aside. Thunderhead sighed.

“I’ll gladly form the base of our cookie operation!” Golden Pie said as he saluted with pride and ran into position.

“Whatever….” Soaring Soul sighed as sat in his spot while Thunder reluctantly walked next to him. Heart Charmer walked up to her colorfully maned friend, stepping gently into his head and onto his back who went down on his front hooves and hoisted his backside up.

“Ally-op!” He exclaimed as he lifted his friend up high. Heart Charmer couldn’t help but let out a little giggle at her silly little friend. Pumpkin stepped a bit clumsily onto Thunderhead and used Soaring Soul for support.

“Ah!” Soaring Soul groaned.

“Careful!” Thunder grimaced as part of Pumpkin’s weight weighed down on her.

“Come on, Sugar Crystal!” Pumpkin motioned to her reassuringly. The eager hippogriff moved her front close to the ground before pouncing onto of Thunder and climbed up Pumpkin’s back. Pumpkin and Thunder moaned and groaned as Sugar’s claws burrowed into their bodies as she scaled the tower and reached the top. Her eyes widening a moment, her mouth a gap, as she stared at the treasure chest before her.

“This is going to be so good!” Sugar Crystal stated with excitement. As the group focused on the cookies, Demon stood by the door looking about lazily, pretending to pay attention, as he thought about all his plans he had in mind, devilish plans. His ears then twitched at the sound of hoof steps not too away.

“It’s in the kitchen!” Lighting Bliss called to the group out in the family room. Demon smiled at this, looked to the group quickly before taking off.

“Do you have them yet?” Pumpkin groaned impatiently.

“Almost!” Sugar exclaimed as she nearly had her claws around the jar. Just before she could claim her prize, a shocked gasped cried out.

“What are you doing?!” Lighting Bliss cried. All head turned in shock at the mare as Thunder took one misstep causing Pumpkin’s hoof to slip. This small action set off a domino type chain as all the children came tumbling down, forming one massive heap of fluff and feathers.

“Uhhhh…. Demon....” Pumpkin growled then looked up to see that he had fled.

“That… little… traitor….” Thunder growled.

“What in Celestia’s name were you thinking?!” Lighting Bliss cried. “You could have gotten seriously hurt!” The group only moaned in pain. Lighting took the jar of cookies in her magic. “No sweets for any of you,” the group moaned again “and none for you for a week, Thunder and Golden.”

“But, mom!” Thunder cried.

“Don’t mom me young lady!” Lighting scolded her daughter. “Now get up, I’m sure your parents would like a word with each of you!” Lighting huffed and walked out of the room.

“It could have gone worse, we could have had a sweet ban for a month.” Golden Pie piped up in his ever cheerful tone.

“Shut it, Golden….” Soaring Soul mumbled.