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TrollerCoaster257 [2016-02-07 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]
I did write this in the critique thingy because i needed to type a bit more too help you improve!
Okay! First off the anatomy.
First her head is too big for the body the body would not be able to support the weight of the head. Second her neck her neck is too long and too wide. Third her legs, her thigh is longer than the calf they must be of equal length. Fourth her hair, you said her current age is 16? Correct? She would not have that long of hair for that age atleast unless, It was dead hair and it would have a lot of split ends and would be curlier at the bottom. That is all i have for anatomy.
Okay! clothing. Her clothing looks stiff you should add more wrinkles to your clothing. Second Her goggles they look flat they need to be more defined. And she is a princess correct? If she was a princess she would not be wearing clothes like that. Royalty is 100% chastity. If a princess was wearing revealing clothes like that, then they would be shamed.
Third Shading I have a few problems with the shading you made the backround really nicely shaded and it is blended nicely. But on your character it is flat shaded. like an anime/cartoon. If you were planning on shading flat. you should have done that with the backround. so it would fit in. or atleast blend in the shading on your character i also have another problem with you shading on your character. She looks to be standing in a spotlight yes? so the shading it should be like... dark in the middle and light on the sides. If that makes sense. an that is all the problems i have with the shading
Fourth, the backround. I think you really well on the backround! I like the sparkles and the nice blends of pink! It looks really nice! I also love the little hearts you put in they are cute! And make it look really cute! Well i hope this helps you! This is a friend to friend critique! I just want to help you get better!
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TrollerCoaster257 In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-07 03:30:09 +0000 UTC]
Hahah yeah i know how you feel. And well i guess that is okay! But i think she should atleast wear proper clothes on special occasions. And yeah i understand you i used to hate how i drew back then i have gotten a lot better as well! and yeah i guess i under stand that, but when i see reference sheets. i see that they put down was colors they used for the base and for the shade like on the side, so you could possibly do that. And i cannot wait to see it! And well im glad that helped! Oh i had no idea i thought i read somewhere that her current age was 16 haha im sorry about that. Well i am really glad that this critique helped you! have a nice day.
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PrincessSkyler In reply to TrollerCoaster257 [2016-02-07 03:35:10 +0000 UTC]
She does! ^U^ I have a few outfits in her closet I drew her in! ^U^
Wait did I forget to update her age? That's probably why AAAAA MEMORY PLS.
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TrollerCoaster257 In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-07 03:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Well i would love too see those! And well im sorry to hear that! Well its good i brought it up i guess!
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darkartsfart [2016-02-05 17:57:07 +0000 UTC]
I never noticed the scars with stitches until now. There a story behind those? And yes, this is your best one yet.
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PrincessSkyler In reply to darkartsfart [2016-02-05 18:18:14 +0000 UTC]
I don't have MUCH of a storyon them, but they are battle scars
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darkartsfart In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-05 18:20:28 +0000 UTC]
Hope that was a battle she won. I'm a fan of the "Beware the Nice Ones" trope and Skyler is as nice as a person could ever get so...
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Ch1biKuro [2016-02-05 14:29:05 +0000 UTC]
Booty Shorts~ x3
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MinuscleViper [2016-02-05 10:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Fascinating
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Attackrage92 [2016-02-05 05:59:49 +0000 UTC]
it's a super cute image, good job skyler
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Attackrage92 In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-05 06:08:24 +0000 UTC]
no problem Skyler!
suddenly i want to see skyler use her hair the way old/parody vampires use their cloaks, you know, holding it over her face. or just dramatically pushing it behind her as she walks out the room
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Attackrage92 In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-05 06:21:39 +0000 UTC]
it's hard to explain, and difficult to show an example, but you see it often in villains with capes, they dramatically turn around and the cape kinda, has some kind of effect... why am i bad at english!?
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PrincessSkyler In reply to Attackrage92 [2016-02-05 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]
Maybe describe the effect?
For some reason immediately I thought of Skyler doing that and then I remembered a scene from an old cartoon called Beavis and Butt-Head where the guy pulls his t-shirt over his head and goes "I am cornholio".
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Attackrage92 In reply to PrincessSkyler [2016-02-05 06:30:01 +0000 UTC]
the cape kinda, waves after flying upward to align with the shoulders the cape is attached to due to interacting with their fist, i guess? that's the best ive got
that was not in my time, i wouldn't have liked the show, i don't get that kind of humor
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PrincessSkyler In reply to Kittycatisca [2016-02-05 06:04:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm gonna log in tomorrow! ^^ (My computer WiFi is rather slow)
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K-Thrillz12 [2016-02-05 05:46:48 +0000 UTC]
You look Gourgeous. (Ican'tspell)
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PrincessSkyler In reply to K-Thrillz12 [2016-02-05 05:47:53 +0000 UTC]
Just use a Pokemon pun and go "You look Gourgeist" :sunglasses:
And thanks! ^^
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