Comments: 55
pimzy-official [2016-06-15 17:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Let me start off by saying that this is very well done; the proportions of the face, the detail in the bandana, all spot on. However I saw that you submitted 2 other black and white deviations to the 4-5 lines folder, "The Wild One" and "Lauren Bacall Revisited", and I think they were both stronger pieces, with The Wild One being the strongest. The reason why is because they had a greater tonal range. You get pretty close to black, but the lightest value is a medium/light grey, and it makes the drawing seem almost washed out. Introducing some white into the highlights of the face and even the background would make this drawing stand out just as much as the others.
I hope this was helpful. ^^
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pimzy-official In reply to professorwagstaff [2016-06-16 17:22:33 +0000 UTC]
No need to thank me, haha, you're the one who put the hours in and it shows. So no problem. ^^
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BadClone [2016-06-05 11:47:11 +0000 UTC]
This is very impressive. The values of the shading are very smooth, and blend perfectly. The texture of the hat is excellent. John's face looks like it was sculpted. I think this is appropriate for an iconic movie star. The facial expression John has looks almost forgiving. The curvature of the eyelids suggests that to me. I think this is an excellent use of shading to capture a legendary entertainer.
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professorwagstaff In reply to BadClone [2016-06-05 18:35:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your comment I really do appreciate it. Have a great day.
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Black-Chimaera [2016-03-24 00:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I'm from Comment Tag and my word was ''Western''. I'll let you guess why I picked this!
I have already commented on another of your work before, but let me say it again, you are good with pencils. This piece shows again a good range of values, from white to nearly black on the face. The light source is clearly determined, and all of your shading follows it. I also like your attention to detail, like all the patterns in the scarf. There are also so small areas of various values around his eyes especially, and it really helps bringing out his expression. The drawn frame around it is simple but it makes the drawing looks more finished than if it was only reaching the sides of the paper.
Now I'm not sure if it was intentional, but why is the stripe on his hat not shaded? (Or maybe it is shaded, my screen is terribly bright) I'd add a really light shading to it just to give it the same shape as the hat.
But seriously this is really good work, especially his eyes, they seem so lifelike.
And that completes the Tagline!
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professorwagstaff In reply to Black-Chimaera [2016-03-24 13:33:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your kind words and constructive comments. I usually print out my resource material from a regular printer and don't always get everything I should. So usually I dra what I see on the paper. So the strap around the hat was most likely whited out in the printout, hence not shaded. Bad habit. Kinda lazy too. Thanks again.
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JPMNeg [2015-07-24 14:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Outstanding work!
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graphicnovelgirl [2015-06-22 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]
Very cool! I love the way you've drawn the hat's shadow
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professorwagstaff In reply to graphicnovelgirl [2015-06-22 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Ani. I appreciate the nice words as always. Haven't seen anything new from graphicnovelgirl lately. How are things?
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graphicnovelgirl In reply to professorwagstaff [2015-06-25 06:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Hello Prof, things are super crazy at work and home so unfortunately not much time for art. It's been such a busy few months ... I am now married hoorah! We had a fantastic day and a beautiful holiday, but now back to earth with a big bump. School breaks up in 3 weeks and 2 days for the long summer hols, so plenty of time for art then! Whenever I can I'm enjoying looking at wonderful art on dA and I can't wait to join in again.
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ventimocha [2015-06-20 00:14:43 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting blending. What kind of pencil and paper did you use?
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professorwagstaff In reply to ventimocha [2015-06-20 00:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I used Strathmore 300 series paper, and Derwent pencils 2B,4B,6B, and 9B.
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gregchapin [2015-06-19 23:46:29 +0000 UTC]
John Wayne... one of the greats... nice work, Professor!
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DominikScherrer [2015-06-19 19:06:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow, stunning drawing! I especially like the shading!
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Arthur-Ramsey [2015-06-19 00:07:10 +0000 UTC]
I drove through his hometown recently this rocks Cliff
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luceene-k [2015-06-18 22:38:00 +0000 UTC]
great work on the Duke
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