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Description
Name: Tetra
Gender: Female
Occupation: Scrap Lord
Titles: "The Huntress" "The Beast"
Prevailing Element: Water
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Weapons: Spear-arm, a large claw, a bladed tentacle
MOC Status: Revamped
Old Versions: [link] [link] [link]
Bio:
As the infection continued to take hold, Tetra began to mutate into something more bestial. Her torso lengthened in a painful process that gives her a hunched poster and made it difficult for her to remain upright. To compensate for this, her spear arm grew to match her claw arm. Also Tetra's mandibles became larger and her ponytail grew out into a strange, bladed tentacle with a small claw at the end. She’s surprisingly agile despite her gangly appearance.
Tetra’s sanity continued to wane as she grew more powerful. This is reflected in her speech; it’s odder and it has the tone of someone who is defiantly batshit insane. For example: if Tetra is deciding on infecting someone; she'll pick them up, examine them and it turns out they're not worthy, she'll angerly shout, "This clay is useless!" or some other nonsense before throwing/bating them away. She’s also now more prone to violence, goes into berserker rages more often, lashes out at whatever angers her, and goes so far as to goading powerful survivors or scraps into attacking her so she can have a good fight. If they manage to beat her and she likes him or her, Tetra will act friendly towards them from then on and actually start to flirt with them, which is quite disturbing with her currant appearance. If that same person goes to her for help often, Tetra might decide to "keep" them because they're just acting so nice. She still retains her now twisted code of honor regarding infecting others, but she’s now much more possessive of her companions. For example: if they one tries to leave her, she’ll kill them, but will still talk to their corpse as if they’re still alive. “He tried to leave, so I killed him. Now he’ll never try that again…”
It is no longer advisable to approach Tetra, avoid her at any cost. Most now how her as “The Beast” due to her almost feral nature. She is unstable, powerful, and insane. If you see her; hide, DO NOT run; because running will just encourage her to chase you.
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Ok, I'll level with you guys, I really want some comments on this one. So could someone please make a remark on the story or the build? All I want is some feedback on my creations...

Description
Name: Tetra
Gender: Female
Occupation: Scrap Lord
Titles: "The Huntress" "The Beast"
Prevailing Element: Water
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Weapons: Spear-arm, a large claw, a bladed tentacle
MOC Status: Revamped
Old Versions: [link] [link] [link]
Bio:
As the infection continued to take hold, Tetra began to mutate into something more bestial. Her torso lengthened in a painful process that gives her a hunched poster and made it difficult for her to remain upright. To compensate for this, her spear arm grew to match her claw arm. Also Tetra's mandibles became larger and her ponytail grew out into a strange, bladed tentacle with a small claw at the end. She’s surprisingly agile despite her gangly appearance.
Tetra’s sanity continued to wane as she grew more powerful. This is reflected in her speech; it’s odder and it has the tone of someone who is defiantly batshit insane. For example: if Tetra is deciding on infecting someone; she'll pick them up, examine them and it turns out they're not worthy, she'll angerly shout, "This clay is useless!" or some other nonsense before throwing/bating them away. She’s also now more prone to violence, goes into berserker rages more often, lashes out at whatever angers her, and goes so far as to goading powerful survivors or scraps into attacking her so she can have a good fight. If they manage to beat her and she likes him or her, Tetra will act friendly towards them from then on and actually start to flirt with them, which is quite disturbing with her currant appearance. If that same person goes to her for help often, Tetra might decide to "keep" them because they're just acting so nice. She still retains her now twisted code of honor regarding infecting others, but she’s now much more possessive of her companions. For example: if they one tries to leave her, she’ll kill them, but will still talk to their corpse as if they’re still alive. “He tried to leave, so I killed him. Now he’ll never try that again…”
It is no longer advisable to approach Tetra, avoid her at any cost. Most now how her as “The Beast” due to her almost feral nature. She is unstable, powerful, and insane. If you see her; hide, DO NOT run; because running will just encourage her to chase you.
______
Ok, I'll level with you guys, I really want some comments on this one. So could someone please make a remark on the story or the build? All I want is some feedback on my creations...