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You should probably read this journal first: fav.me/d6rl2bt

the last page in case you need to go back and look over it: fav.me/d6mi5vm 

Link to my Nuzlocke comic.

Link to the comic on the forums.  


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so, so, unnecessarily complicated


After agreeing to help the Kimono girls, James is pardoned to make preparations when he informs them that he needs to do something beforehand. James explains what happened to the other Pokemon who take the news of two of their friends’ deaths hard in their own ways. Hamma, however, has refused to come out of her pokeball since getting recalled before. After the initial shock dies down, Banksy starts suggesting other options that aren’t going along with the Kimino Girls’ plans and James refuses all of them, without explanation. Jazz tries to get Banksy to calm down, which only serves to frustrate him more, given the situation, and James notices that Jazz seemed to be in pain. When asked, Jazz waves it off as not being as important as the issue at hand.

Afterwards, James gives Chuck a phone call, and asks him what he knows about Ho-oh. Chuck tells him that he only remembers fables of Ho-oh angering and turning its people (unprovoked) and killing many people before the nation’s other legendary figure, Lugia sacrificed itself to strip Ho-oh of most of its revival abilities, preventing it from returning to life instantaneously.

The fact that Chuck’s story was slightly different to the Kimono girls’ leads James to also call Pryce jr to ask about Ho-oh as well (because Pryce is the oldest person he can contact). Pryce gives him more or less the same story that Chuck did, with the only differences being him telling James of a story he heard that involves Ho-oh pulling three pokemon out of its world to wreak havoc with it after one of its revivals over a century after its defeat. However, those pokemon refused to obey Ho-oh, while also refused to oppose it and were cursed with immortality to pay for their indecision.

(James doesn’t tell either of them why he asked about Ho-oh to begin with)

After James finishes with his preparations, he meets the Kimono girls again, who escort him to the top of the Tin Tower to prepare the summoning ceremony. The whole time, Jazz exhibiting progressively more intense signs of pain.

The Kimono Girls summon Ho-oh’s body which, as they had previously said, behaved in a feral manner, indiscriminately setting things within its range alight until James manages to catch its attention. James calls out Scarmigl, who had evolved into a Golem sometime since her last appearance, to fight Ho-oh. After the Scarmigl weakens Ho-oh enough to make it begin to submit, the Kimono girls inform James that he had completed his job, but he continues to order Scarmigl to attack, something they really were not pleased by. After a while, Ho-oh succumbs to the damage- too weak to exist in the world of the living it is forced back into its limbo, but not before expending the last bit of its energy to try and destroy its surroundings.

Later, James wakes up, bandaged, in one of Morty’s rooms in his house, one of the other Kimono girls in a bed across from him. Morty discovers that he’s awake and tells him that the only reason as many of them survived is because of their pokemon’s protection. He then asks him to not blame the girls for what they did, as they were under Ho-oh’s influence. Whenever Ho-oh is ready to return, an item called a clear bell makes its way into the hands of someone with some sort of blood relation to the first kimono girls, that person gathers more like them and they prepare to revive their master.

He goes on to explain the original Kimono girls were a group who were loyal to Ho-oh before it fell from grace. When Ho-oh went insane because of the betrayal of its people, the group sided with Ho-oh, believing its aggression to be divine justice. When Ho-oh was defeated, they made the clear bell from its ashes to preserve its wrathful heart. The ultimate objective of every generation of Kimono girls is to reunite Ho-oh’s body (stuck in limbo) with Ho-oh’s heart (the clear bell), using another person as a catylist.

When James asks him why he’s sure the girls were merely brainwashed by contact with the clear bell, he tells him that the reason he’s sure is because he knew two of them before they became Kimono girls- Kirei and her younger sister Keiko. Morty grew up near them and was childhood friends with Kirei. When they suddenly disappeared, he looked for them and found them to Ecruteak. After discovering how they had changed, he researched into it. He says that, ironically, he had helped recover every person from the Ho-oh incident except Kirei, as she’d managed to once again disappear along with the clear bell.

He tells James that he was picked by them to be the catalyst for one reason or another he was unaware of, but before that, he was their first choice. The reason being he exhibited his skill as a trainer from a very young age. The reason they changed their mind, however, is because they discovered that Morty could see everything from Ho-oh’s realm and would be a lot less useful to them as he’d be fully aware of what was going on. When asked about what he can see, Morty calls Innomin, his Gastly, which James comments that it looks just like his psycho Gengar. Morty confirms that it is the same pokemon and reveals that it came from the same place Ho-oh did. When Ho-oh was trapped in its own realm of revival, it dragged a lot of nearby pokemon in there with it. Those pokemon can’t die, and are stuck in there for the most part. Sometimes, however, they can slip out, but are easily forced back and lose any memory of what happened after they escaped. Innomin is a very frequent offender, and Morty formed a friendship with him, despite knowing that his friend will continuously forget him every time he returns to him.

 

Morty then leaves him and asks him to leave as soon as he’s able, since his hospitality has its limits.

James wakes up his other pokemon to give them a full explanation, telling them that the reason he seemed like he was on the kimono girls’ side was because he wanted them to keep believing that. The reason he couldn’t tell any of his pokemon was because they had already established that they were able to spy on him without his knowledge, so revealing his true intentions out loud would have given them away. He had planned to get Scarmigl, who on paper had the highest resistance to Ho-oh’s attacks and keep attacking it until it was unable to stay on this side, since he’d heard from two of the tellings of the Ho-oh story that Ho-oh needs to regain its strength to come into their world, so he was hoping that weakening it would send it back, which it luckily did.

After making up with the team, the Kimono girl who was in the same room as him wakes up, and after introducing each other, James discovers that she’s Keiko, Kirei’s sister. He gives her the news about her sister and apologizes. She explains that she discovered the clear bell in a field one day, and after that her memory is patchy. She understands what she helped do and apologizes for that, and informs James that they had known he was going to double cross them in the end, but had expected him to have tried to subdue Ho-oh and use its power as his own to try and betray them, which would have actually worked out for them and let James act as the catalyst anyway. Defeating Ho-oh, however, was not something they had anticipated James doing.

Before he leaves, James asks Keiko about why they picked him to be the catalyst, and she tells him that she doesn’t remember it all that well, but it had something to do with professor Elm and a boy named Ethan. When asked if she means him, since he’s been called other names beforehand, she says that while her memory isn’t great, she knows for some reason that Ethan is definitely someone else.

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Comments: 70

demiveemon [2018-02-02 00:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for writing these up and adding such nice illustrations. Reading through your nuzlocke and watching it evolve from a running gag, to something much more deep and mature (not to mention the constant improved illustrations) has been a real pleassure. :3

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TGI-Zuzume [2016-05-24 21:50:00 +0000 UTC]

The first spelling of catalyst is incorrect in your description, bye the way, but, anyway, I'm glad you're doing summary pages now!  I will continue to watch this until the end!

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Unhallowedthesis [2016-02-16 20:28:41 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely LOVE how you drew Ho-Oh!!!! Its absolutely stunning, and otherworldly.  Its fantastic!

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XiwyCain [2015-08-13 23:05:28 +0000 UTC]

See you later, you damn-hot trainer.

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Falling-Into-Chaos [2014-12-21 12:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I know you aren't writing the summary pages anymore, but why was Jazz in pain? I'm not sure if something's been hinted at, whether he's dying or ill or something, but I just thought I'd ask.

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Talidaga-Montrega [2014-12-01 13:54:07 +0000 UTC]

I think I've read through this comic 3 times or so already. I just tend to wander over to reading the comic again. I still loved it, story and characters 

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NehanShoja [2014-05-18 02:55:47 +0000 UTC]

So much for closure. That's very disappointing, but I'm sorry never the less for your more crude fans. I enjoyed the read, and the story. It's going to really bother me not knowing the end, terrible as you claim it would be.
Oh wells... Here's some tears. Onward to your other series, which is at least equally awesome. Of course, I love your work sir. As part of your fanbase, I apologize for our behavior.

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NehanShoja In reply to NehanShoja [2014-05-18 02:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Gosh I wish there was an edit button... I know I read that journal entry before but I must have blocked it out from pure denial >_<

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Reshiramlovefreddy [2014-04-17 00:47:28 +0000 UTC]

THERE WILD HO-OH BETTER RUN NOWWWWWNOWWWWW

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8Darkness-Seeker8 [2014-03-26 03:03:31 +0000 UTC]

WHAT. THIS IS THE END

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RedDiamondUmbreon [2014-03-09 21:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry people are being jerks. That really sucks.

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SirChampion [2014-02-10 07:35:32 +0000 UTC]

yes!!! I finally got to read it and I must say Proto it was defiantly worth the read I really like the story you've made

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10003000 [2014-01-28 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]

when are you going to make more? i want to know what happened to silver!

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Protocol00 In reply to 10003000 [2014-01-28 08:42:17 +0000 UTC]

protocol00.deviantart.com/jour…

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Andahnte [2014-01-24 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I love your art and I had a questions that I thought of.


Today in art class I found out about Banksy, a famous British spraypaint artist. Was your Banksy named after him?


Sorry if it's just coincidence, I connect things that dont usually have an actual connection

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Plutonian-Frostmonky [2014-01-22 19:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, that was amazing! Are you going to do a part 5 though? with the elite 4? COME ON! Just explain the clones! PLEASE

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Protocol00 In reply to Plutonian-Frostmonky [2014-01-23 05:27:47 +0000 UTC]

well, sorry to break the news to you but protocol00.deviantart.com/jour…

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Plutonian-Frostmonky In reply to Protocol00 [2014-01-24 03:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh, SORRY! didn't I only saw the journal you quit in general. maybe put a link to it in the commentary. Anyway, have fun with cross-out then!

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RandomnessAplenty [2013-12-27 11:05:48 +0000 UTC]

But...the plot seems pretty fantastic! How is it unnecessarily complicated, or "shitty", as you'd stated before?

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Ruzzarabbit2 [2013-12-08 11:38:03 +0000 UTC]

are you going to keep doing the comic?

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Eridan1107 In reply to Ruzzarabbit2 [2013-12-14 04:23:45 +0000 UTC]

I would check his journals if I were you.

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CountessFoxington [2013-12-04 22:46:09 +0000 UTC]

AND THE PLOT THICKENS! Oh wait, it was already pretty thick.
Also, Ho-Oh's summoning panel is just breath-taking.

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RagnaLocke [2013-12-02 20:14:32 +0000 UTC]

I love Ho-Oh's design here. Looks awesome, especially the first panel. Is the blue/purple smoke a reference to Suicune?
For some reason Keiko reminds me of Mulan. Maybe it's just the hair.

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Gottabeperfect [2013-12-02 18:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see Ho-Oh was successfully put away, though it is sad that the Pokemon is insane. Interesting development about the Kimono girls and Morty, and very good plot with Morty there. At the end another clue is revealed about the mystery surrounding James.

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Protocol00 In reply to Gottabeperfect [2013-12-02 19:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Well actually, Ho-oh's gone through this cycle countless times before. 


Every time it has been summoned and put back, the problem's only been reset, not fixed. The cycle will continue much after James' time, and possibly for centuries more, until someone figures out how to either stop Ho-oh for good, or return it to it's former state. Although, considering how all that is left of its mind within the clear bell is the part of it that despised the people who relentlessly hunted it down and helped make the situation the way it is, the latter solution isn't too likely.

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AnimeFlight [2013-12-02 15:12:50 +0000 UTC]

That Ho-Oh is so gorgeous.

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SleepyPyrotechnics [2013-12-02 04:03:45 +0000 UTC]

As much as I love this nuzlocke, I still cant get over the fact that Morty's Ghastly/Gengar is the Anti-Spiral

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Dragonling140 [2013-12-02 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Freaking love that second panel. Amazing. I also like the first panel, the faces are great.

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ZetsubouKamina [2013-12-01 19:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Sad that you won't be continuing, but it's for the best. I'd honestly much rather have a good series end abrubtly than a good series become worse because of the creator's loss on interest.

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Ty-Co [2013-12-01 06:47:18 +0000 UTC]

The way you drew Ho-oh is amazing. Sorry to hear you aren't going to continue this but I will look forward to your future endeavors. Gold/Silver/Crystal/HG/SS where long games all things considering, so I can understand your reasons for not wanting to continue. Your artwork is still awesome nonetheless.


And to all those with the negative comments if you don't like how someone does something, do your own and leave them be.  

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Joki-chan [2013-11-30 20:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Just so you know I've really enjoyed your summary pages, and I'm kinda sad you won't be continuing them.  However, I totally understand your reasoning!  Even if you think your work is kinda dumb I'd like you to know I find it interesting and fun and this was one of my favorite Nuzlockes while it lasted.  And I'm super excited for you X and Y Nuzlocke!  Keep up the awesome work!

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powermenz [2013-11-30 04:40:30 +0000 UTC]

u know u couldve just sketched the comic like this and just wingedd it u know i mean ive been a fan since the beginning but i wouldve understood if u just sketched the whole thing like this that way i wouldnt have to read the description

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Protocol00 In reply to powermenz [2013-11-30 04:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow I'm getting really tired of this.


I made these updates FOR YOU, not for me. I didn't WANT to continue making content for this AT ALL period, but forced myself because I wanted to give YOU GUYS some way to see what happened instead of just completely dropping it because I felt that would be unfair to the people who really wanted to know what would happen.


Understand?


I am not here to solely provide you with entertainment, I am here to share my work with anyone who wants to see it. I have no obligations to bend over backwards because something is inconvenient for you. 


If you don't like reading, then don't. I didn't expect everyone to. Don't, however, bitch at me, or ANYONE ELSE who provides you with free content, about how you think they should go out of their way to produce work that meets your interests.


And really, fuck everyone who feels entitled to someone's work that they don't pay for.

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TheLegendaryFoxFire In reply to Protocol00 [2013-12-01 06:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Shame there is not thumbs up button. I agree with everything you said here.

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powermenz In reply to Protocol00 [2013-11-30 05:24:01 +0000 UTC]

look man im sorry i didnt mean for u to rage out on me im really sorry but please keep continuing ur work and again i am sorry i hope u forgive me.

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Protocol00 In reply to powermenz [2013-11-30 05:26:27 +0000 UTC]

No fuck it, I'm done.


This is on your head.

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Eridan1107 In reply to Protocol00 [2013-12-14 04:23:03 +0000 UTC]

A shame, I just discovered this comic series and I have to say that while you may have thought that the plot was bad (and perhaps it even was) it was still interesting. 


Ah well, perhaps it is for the best, if this were something that we were paying to see I would argue that you have a duty to your fans to at least finish the summaries, but it's not, it's FREE and you have every right to discontinue, even though I may not personally like it.


I get where you're at too. I myself am currently struggling with a work that I am only just now realizing how massive it is and am considering dropping it, as I am starting to lose some of that initial spark I once had for it. Still, if I may impart a bit of wisdom someone once told me: even when things look overwhelming and you're staring to hate what you've created, finish it anyways. You'll learn from it, and become a better writer. 


Just something to keep in mind for the future. X and Y isn't exactly a small game to cover either. 

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Protocol00 In reply to Eridan1107 [2013-12-15 01:08:39 +0000 UTC]

The reason I really didn't want to take that stance was because Death's Nuzlocke isn't a complete story, it's part of a story. The full story was planned to be three nuzlocke runs long. At first, I knew that the probability of me even finishing two of them was pretty slim, considering how plot heavy the extended plot is, but I didn't really care. I figured I'd just stop whenever I had to and I'd be fine. Recently, however, I had a change in stance, and really didn't want to continue working on something I knew would take 9 or so years to complete in full, and would most likely give up before it's done. Reworking the plot in a way that would finish it in a single run would take time, and mess up the plot pacing even more than it already is, as I was close to the end of this run, so I'd have to fit in double or triple the exposition in a short time frame than I initially wanted to, and that's something I just didn't want to do.


The idea of putting time and effort into something that I knew wasn't going to get finished is what made me decide to stop, and, no offense to you, but I'd really rather not be given any advice on how Death's Nuzlocke could have been handled better, regardless of if the advice is right or not. I'm just done with the whole ordeal, and the only future involvement I'd have with this series will be with just the characters at best.

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AliceTheHunted In reply to Protocol00 [2014-03-03 18:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Though I don't like not having an ending, I would have hated it even  more if I had never read your comic in a first place. And for me that is a good sign of a story. I don't care about the ending, even dread it, if the story itself is amazing.

Thank you for doing the pages you did do. They were a delight to read.

I wish you the best of luck on your future endeavors, which I will be stalking you cause your awesome. Keep doing what makes you happy.

(9 years D: Dang that would kill me if I tried to do something like that. Do what you know is best and f the haters!)

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powermenz In reply to Protocol00 [2013-11-30 05:28:29 +0000 UTC]

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MasterImpsy [2013-11-30 04:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh god I'm have anti-spiral flashbacks. I don't find the story complicated at the moment. I can follow it pretty well.

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AQuinis [2013-11-30 01:49:43 +0000 UTC]

 Awesome. Thanks for putting so much work into these images, they're amazing! <3

 Can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfold!

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LuzuOL [2013-11-29 23:21:17 +0000 UTC]

I love how you made corrupted ho-oh and that anti spira gastly made my day (Anti spiral gengar is, so far, my favorite gym leader pokemon from your comic).
PS: I've always prefeered graveler's design over golem's but I must say that Scarmigl looks pretty cool. I would love to see a full body reference of her.

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jake-wolfermelon [2013-11-29 18:22:47 +0000 UTC]

why does that ghastly remind me of the anti-spiral...

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Protocol00 In reply to jake-wolfermelon [2013-11-29 18:34:39 +0000 UTC]

The whole flat textures with white outline look was an anti-spiral reference in itself.

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Radioactive-Sodapop [2013-11-29 17:45:46 +0000 UTC]

The panel where Ho-Oh is summoned reminds me of one of the witches from Madoka Magica. That just made this part of the story that much more awesome! X3

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FlamerXMagofire [2013-11-29 16:21:55 +0000 UTC]

... Am I the only one who wishes this was an animated series? THIS IS FREAKIN' EPIC!

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Angry-Viha [2013-11-29 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Ho-oh looks amazing <3

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Hugo93F [2013-11-29 14:40:56 +0000 UTC]

I loved to read every word there. I love this. I-I love you in secret. /Shot

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Chewya [2013-11-29 14:19:36 +0000 UTC]

I think I actually like the sketchy style of these shorts.  I think Ho-oh looks fantastic, though.

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