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ProudAkidoPrincess — It would never be enough
Published: 2010-11-30 08:37:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1262; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 1
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Description I could stare at your sleeping face for hours and never get tired.
I could lay in your arms always and I would never get bored.
I could bathe in your warmth for eternity and it would never be too hot.
I could love you forever and it would never be enough.

You are so deep in my skin; I feel your presence when you come near.
My whole body wishes to be beside you.
And when it is, to be closer still.

You are in my every thought. My every dream.

Why is it like this?

There have been others.

And to be perfectly and utterly honest, more than I can count.

But now.

It's just you.

I can't get you out of my mind and I never want to!

Because I love you. And I would never stop.

I will love you forever and even forever is not long enough.
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Comments: 47

KingAkatar [2010-12-06 06:42:31 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous. While I was reading this, I instantly began imagining a little montage of sitting against my ginger and cuddling. It is so heartwarming. <3

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to KingAkatar [2010-12-06 08:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww Thank you very much! Luck and Love to you and your Ginger.

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KingAkatar In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-06 18:12:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I love well-written poetry! <3
And to you and your girl, too. Isn't love grand, especially when spreading it?

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to KingAkatar [2010-12-06 22:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Definetly. ^^

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DznHeiner [2010-12-05 00:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Aw. *-*

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to DznHeiner [2010-12-06 08:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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DznHeiner In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-06 20:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Twas my pleasure

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to DznHeiner [2010-12-06 22:30:15 +0000 UTC]

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Inameny [2010-12-04 22:48:00 +0000 UTC]

I love this!

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Inameny [2010-12-04 23:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much darling.

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ewwd456 [2010-12-02 21:17:13 +0000 UTC]

lovely poem. perfect

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to ewwd456 [2010-12-03 07:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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ewwd456 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-03 20:52:59 +0000 UTC]

no prob.

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SapphireHazel [2010-12-01 11:56:33 +0000 UTC]

This really beautiful, it reminds me of the first girl I ever liked, and my first real love. Good job on this poem

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to SapphireHazel [2010-12-01 19:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank You Very Much!

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ActsofArt [2010-12-01 00:59:55 +0000 UTC]

This is very well written and very sweet.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to ActsofArt [2010-12-01 01:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Unwritten-Memories [2010-11-30 18:49:57 +0000 UTC]

She's a lucky girl! I wait for the day that I have someone who thinks of me this way.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Unwritten-Memories [2010-11-30 19:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Rather than her being the lucky girl I think it's me. And have faith You'll get yours soon.

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Unwritten-Memories In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-11-30 19:31:41 +0000 UTC]

I know I will.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Unwritten-Memories [2010-11-30 20:00:47 +0000 UTC]

That's the spirit!

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firemagic1991 [2010-11-30 16:34:05 +0000 UTC]

this is so very beautiful

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to firemagic1991 [2010-11-30 19:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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firemagic1991 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-11-30 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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Gaki44 [2010-11-30 16:14:21 +0000 UTC]

That is so beautiful. I love this. It is well written and has great flow and the emotions are very visible.
I find it adorable that you write this about her <3 I find it funny too because it sounds like something I would have written for my lover XD As it is, I will fave it because it reminds me of myself and how I feel about my boyfriend ^.^ this is truly beautiful.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Gaki44 [2010-11-30 19:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!! That means a lot to me! I'm glad you can relate to what I wrote. I only write from my heart which is definitely the best way to write. ^^ Again Thank you sooooo much!

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Gaki44 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-13 14:07:31 +0000 UTC]

hehee you're so very welcome! I'm glad!
Writing from the heart it the best way to write! hehe

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Gaki44 [2010-12-14 01:01:45 +0000 UTC]

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Gaki44 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-14 15:09:34 +0000 UTC]

hehee aaaawwweee!! :huggles: yay hugs!!

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Gaki44 [2010-12-14 19:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Cuz hugs are AWESOME!!!!

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Gaki44 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-15 16:17:05 +0000 UTC]

AGREED!!!

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Gaki44 [2010-12-15 17:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Teehee

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Gaki44 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-16 00:23:51 +0000 UTC]

heheee :huggles:

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to Gaki44 [2010-12-16 08:13:36 +0000 UTC]

You are now my new HUG buddy! You are epic! So here!

Cause hugs are truly awesome.

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Gaki44 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-16 21:12:34 +0000 UTC]

hahaa XD sounds good to me hehe thanks-you you are too!!

hahaa I dunno how to do the other hugs o.O

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rm5 [2010-11-30 13:55:57 +0000 UTC]

wow, such emotions. i truly envy you. beautiful.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to rm5 [2010-11-30 19:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. And Envy me not.
Soon you will have someone who will think of you this way.

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rm5 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-04 05:02:20 +0000 UTC]

that's really nice of you. thank you. ^_^

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to rm5 [2010-12-04 06:52:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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DominiqueG [2010-11-30 13:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Very cute, eh.

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to DominiqueG [2010-11-30 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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DominiqueG In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-11-30 19:40:59 +0000 UTC]

No prob, mate

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pegasis17 [2010-11-30 09:29:20 +0000 UTC]

wow!!! thats amazing hun very well done and very powerful; reminds about how i feel when im near my woman too!!!

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to pegasis17 [2010-11-30 19:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you lovie. really. It means a lot coming from you.
I just had to write it... cuz I felt like I would explode.

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pegasis17 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-01 02:10:55 +0000 UTC]

i know how that is more than you know cuz thats how my woman makes me feel all the time!!

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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to pegasis17 [2010-12-01 02:18:02 +0000 UTC]

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