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DznHeiner [2010-12-05 00:40:50 +0000 UTC]
Aw. *-*
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Inameny [2010-12-04 22:48:00 +0000 UTC]
I love this!
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SapphireHazel [2010-12-01 11:56:33 +0000 UTC]
This really beautiful, it reminds me of the first girl I ever liked, and my first real love. Good job on this poem
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Gaki44 [2010-11-30 16:14:21 +0000 UTC]
That is so beautiful. I love this. It is well written and has great flow and the emotions are very visible.
I find it adorable that you write this about her <3 I find it funny too because it sounds like something I would have written for my lover XD As it is, I will fave it because it reminds me of myself and how I feel about my boyfriend ^.^ this is truly beautiful.
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rm5 [2010-11-30 13:55:57 +0000 UTC]
wow, such emotions. i truly envy you. beautiful.
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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to rm5 [2010-11-30 19:39:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. And Envy me not.
Soon you will have someone who will think of you this way.
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rm5 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-04 05:02:20 +0000 UTC]
that's really nice of you. thank you. ^_^
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pegasis17 [2010-11-30 09:29:20 +0000 UTC]
wow!!! thats amazing hun very well done and very powerful; reminds about how i feel when im near my woman too!!!
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ProudAkidoPrincess In reply to pegasis17 [2010-11-30 19:41:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you lovie. really. It means a lot coming from you.
I just had to write it... cuz I felt like I would explode.
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pegasis17 In reply to ProudAkidoPrincess [2010-12-01 02:10:55 +0000 UTC]
i know how that is more than you know cuz thats how my woman makes me feel all the time!!
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