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Published: 2015-10-09 07:18:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 68795; Favourites: 3035; Downloads: 0
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here's a little personal work to work this faith will the mood and atmosphere a bit heavy and mysterious!So if you have a comment or commantaire is subject hesitate to let me know
thank you a lot
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First of all, very good job, great rendering and colours, well detailed. I will critique this according to my opinion, I don't mean to be harsh or be a jerk. I hope you will find my critique reasonable and people think it is fair.
About Composition, I think it is good, but not at the level at other aspects of the painting. I think the humanoid figure and the dragon looks a little unrelated. Figure facing sideway and the dragon facing nearly to us. I think it would be stronger if they were facing the same way or facing each other.
And the originality, I have seen a painting exactly the same composition a year ago, from one of Sycra Yasin's videos. And this monster behind and a figure with a weapon front is a little overused. And Because of that, the paintings impact becomes weaker. Also it is my opinion that epic things like that are overused and lost a lot of impact over the years. Every day or modest stuff that have psychological side has more impact, but it's my opinion.
About the design, I think it is good sci-fi designs with sword and dragon is nice. colliding two genders is fun.
About technique, it's perfect man, not the style I prefer but I wouldn't be fair to critique against it.
Have a good day.
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thank you very much for your advice and this pertinent criticism
actually the composition and originality of the sceine are a little move to 2nd level, because I am concentrated soot advantage over simple items to make a cooΓ©rente and realistic atmosphere because if is not really my forte
so for the theme I chosie the simplisitΓ© rather to develop a technique that I do not mΓ©trise perfectly !!
thank you again for your point of view
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Hey! I can not find anything "wrong" with this, it is beautifully and skillfully made, but due to your request for critique I could only suggest you possibly up the foregrounds saturation/contrast to bring the subject into greater focus with the looming dragon overhead. First view of this brought the dragon into high focus for me (but that may be because I simply adore dragons and your dragon is very cool ^^), with the subject being slightly overshadowed by it, if this is your intent then you did it great! But if you want the subject to catch the eye more brilliantly with the dragon as the looming threat, the simple selection then upping the contrast and saturation a bit would be the only slight improvement you could make. I must note that due to the request, I am reaching for "problems" for that aren't really problems! It's epic, and really unique! Love it! <3
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thank you for this review
actually this is not the dragon which I seek to highlight
the dragon is mysterious and great for the sceine side!
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I don't think I could do a full critique, but if you wanted more opinions on the painting then I would say that the texture used for the dragon's skin kind of steals depth from it. To me it looks a little like a 2D outline with a hexagon pattern filled in over the top. This could just be that the style is not one I prefer so I hope you take no of offense, regardless I think this is a beautiful piece of art.
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On the contrary I thank you for taking the time to find some fault and to have explained why!
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You're very welcome, it only seems fair to try and give something back after you share your fantastic artwork
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Am I the only one here who saw this at first glance and thought "ninja turtle"?
But regardless, the piece is well-done, with a professional-level technique.
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Haha, it's true that the hat can suggest a shell
thank you for the compliment
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You left me breathless with this pic. Outstanding work !
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thank you very mutch Β !!Β
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Love it, love it, love it!Β This is an awesome composition with great use of atmospherics perspective.Β Great Work. Β
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Thank you, it's always pleasant to hear!
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Overwatch es out in May 2016 and my drawing in October 2015
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Love how the fog overlays the dragon, very good use of the technique.
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Thank you I realized this illustration especially to work the fog!
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hahahΒ I still prefer my title!
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u sure bout that?
you never know when a dragon frog might come in handy
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( Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°)have you seen the movie... chef?
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yeah, its actually pretty good
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well damn... das nice to hear man
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Actually, its a perfectly normal mistake. When reading, we don't like at each individual letter, but we look at the contort of the words and interpret that. This said, getting words jumbled up is very common-- especially because there is an "r" not long before "fog," which makes it a very logical misread.
There are several studies done on this you can look up. Some of them even have templates you can read through to see just how much the human mind canΒ rearrange words.
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you should have typed "look" instead of "like"
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Thank you for catching that instead of the point-- good eye for detail
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You are one of the best artist on DA. Love your work
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thank yous very mutch for the biautifull compliment
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thank yous very mutch Β
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np most welcome take care.
do more. you are one talented artist
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