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PuddingValkyrie — VDBiF 27 - Better Dialogue, Please
Published: 2013-11-27 01:04:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 986; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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How to get away with awful, awful dialogue - write dreams.Even Tyrian can't believe this dialogue. It was slightly more awful but I decided to tone it down a little X3
FFFFT my brain rebelled a lot and also I was hindered by laughing.
Two comics in one day? I must really want to get on with arc. ..I do. I really do.
Will / Tyrian / Vampires Don't Belong in Fairytales / Miss Prince (c) Alicia L. Wright (me) and Tannbourne Ltd.
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That's some bad dialogue all right; love the way it breaks the 4th wall.
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Everyone is a critic.
- Tyrian's brain.
Loved it.
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