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Published: 2012-08-30 01:09:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 447; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Happy birthday, Yuki Sohma! <333I'm really happy with how Yuki came out~ c: The background, ehh...
Umm... Oh! Well, okay so, I'm glad that I discovered Fruits Basket, because if I didn't, I probably wouldn't have gotten into anime. It's true! It seems like Fruits Basket was my push to get into anime and manga! And stuff along those lines... c:
Um... I'm requesting a critique cos I feel I did okay with this, and I want to know how well I actually did to others. :'D
I really need to figure out how to make better backgrounds. |||orz
Yuki Sohma (c) Natsuki Takaya
art (c) *Chocolate-Chip-Cooky
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Yay, Yuki! You did a really good job on this, and there are only a few things that I think could use some work.
I love the hair, and the face. You have the proportions done really well, and you got his style of dress spot on! The shading and folds are placed very well, too.
The thing that I think is funny is the placement of the arm on the right (his left). The wrist looks like it's bending at an awkward angle, almost like that forearm is shorter than the other, because of the wrist placement. He looks too awkward for the position he's in.
Good job, and keep up the great work!
(The low originality score is only because it's fan art)
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Thank you! And I agree with you on the arm issue.
I'll try to get the positioning right next time!
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You're welcome, I'm glad I could help!
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Yuki . He looks so graceful .
Nice work , Choco-chan. c:
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