666markofthebeast666 [2019-09-13 01:35:03 +0000 UTC]
I feel like you could have done more with the facial expression of the girl in the foreground. It seems to me like she should be tense, or at least focused, but she seems just... sort of absent. The composition is brill aside from that, though, good show!
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