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purpleturtle909 — The Crush
Published: 2006-06-02 05:02:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 3370; Favourites: 106; Downloads: 16
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Description I see him everyday,
As I’m walking down the hall,
As I’m talking to my friends.
Does he notice me at all?

I walk by hoping,
He will whisper my name.
To hear the sweet sound of his voice,
That always makes my day.

The tensions building up inside,
What ever shall I do?
I want to tell him how I feel,
But this is all to new.

So as I sit here thinking,
What ever shall I do?
Ideas are going crazy,
Maybe I’ll pull though
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Comments: 22

Kitten105 [2014-06-04 22:11:43 +0000 UTC]

YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS. DON'T STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY.
1. say your name ten times.
2. say your mom's name five times.
3. say your crushes three times
4. paste this to four other groups.
If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday.
But if you read this and do not paste this, then you
will have very bad luck.
SEND THIS TO 5 GROUPS IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN
YOU'RE DONE PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSH'S NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS

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akatsukiminato [2014-03-10 05:15:06 +0000 UTC]

It's pretty upsetting how people have crushes that don't like them back . Well i guess some people have luck and some don't......but i'm a little happy now that my crush is my boyfriend! but here *gives boy luck to you* NOW GO OUT THERE AND MAKE OUT WITH HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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femaleceratosaurus [2010-10-07 03:04:50 +0000 UTC]

i feel like the same way.. cept the guy i like is kinda a flirt

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wishiwaswinryforever In reply to femaleceratosaurus [2013-11-16 07:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Hey, join the club dude. 

Why do guys have to flirt with EVVVEERRRRBOOOODDYYY?! Just make up your mind! 

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Adnappanda [2010-06-23 04:14:24 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooo

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bookworm012496 [2010-05-12 21:46:51 +0000 UTC]

i feel them same, i just got over a crush ive had for 3 or 4 years . . .

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Dark-ShadowXx [2010-05-06 17:56:37 +0000 UTC]

This is so well written! It describes the feeling of a crush in school perfectly

There's two typos though. One should be "This is all TOO new" and the other should be "Maybe I'll pull thRough"

*Sigh*
This reminds of a guy in my high school that I've liked for quite some time now but we hardly ever talk and I'm really upset because I don't think that I'll ever see him again after high school ends (there's only 1 year and 2 months left)

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madi9813 [2010-02-26 01:15:29 +0000 UTC]

beautiful this is exactly how i feel bout my crush every time i hear his name i blush like crazy

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Suzii96 [2009-10-29 15:40:59 +0000 UTC]

I loved this poem .. it reminds me of my story
Check mine poem out and tell me what you think

[link]

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Kahulu [2009-09-12 15:56:49 +0000 UTC]

I feel this way EVERYDAY when I'm at school. I see this guy that I've had a crush on for the LONGEST time (don't ask me how long!) and I always hope he'll notice me. Once in a while he does, or perhaps that's just wishful thinking.....Beautiful poem

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Pokemon-Loving-Nerd [2009-07-02 18:43:47 +0000 UTC]

this is embarassing.
but ive got a huge crush on my teacher and this reminds me of him

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springearthbender14 [2009-05-31 08:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey! this situation is same like the one I go trough in school everyday too!

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Melawen26 [2008-09-19 22:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, very touching!

Especially because I can relate.

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SoulfulMusician [2008-02-18 06:12:19 +0000 UTC]

very nicely done.

i love it.

i'm in a similar situation.

awesome job. (:

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purpleturtle909 In reply to SoulfulMusician [2008-04-26 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]

well thank you very much.

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NekoStafish1 [2008-01-27 19:43:22 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute! im sure many girls feel this way...

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purpleturtle909 In reply to NekoStafish1 [2008-04-26 21:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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karinaxx [2007-02-21 01:15:22 +0000 UTC]

this is lovely definatly my fav.

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lil-trumpet-girl [2007-01-08 04:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Thats amazing, nicely done.

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purpleturtle909 In reply to lil-trumpet-girl [2007-01-08 20:28:33 +0000 UTC]

why thank you.

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BlacknWhiteLights [2006-08-26 00:22:22 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It's a very nice peice of literature. It's kind of like me. I recently got over a guy that I've been in love with for the past 2 and a half years and kinda odd. I like his friend and the thing is, they're names are almost the same.

--- Rachel

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Hiroko222 [2006-06-02 05:19:25 +0000 UTC]

nicely written

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