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Published: 2011-11-06 17:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 5556; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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I wanted to draw her before
This is a quick drawing(quick for me) I set a goal to finish this in one day. I'll NEVER ever do that again because I rushed the hair and clothing (as you can see xD) so I would have it finished before midnight. I just have to accept I'm a super slow drawer haha
Took out my old pencils and new cheap no brand paper... It works better for me than those brand stuff
Poorly scanned
Used:
-Pencil eraser, mechanical eraser, kneaded eraser
-A4 Paper, no brand
- bunch of tissues
- 1B, 6B pencils
Reference: [link]
There's something really odd with the proportions....any feedback would be appreciated
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not bad, but something bothers me with the placement of the eyes...
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Yeah I know 
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oh sorry I did not notice those lines...
Well myself I'm unable to do better lol so I'm sorry not to help you more
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Thanks! I'll probably never set a time limit again though
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Time limits just tend to make me rush on my work.
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Same for me and it never ends well
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really you are talented in drawing even if so young!
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Thanks 
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wow you do have a great talent, especially considering your age
it's good that you made that goal, if you keep trying with the time set you can make something like this in a matter of 3 hours
mix it up a little with different sizes and times
i love the soft tones you can create with pencil
you are right there is something odd with the proportions, i'll try to help you with the best of my knowledge
i think what might be bothering you her nose and mouth, the middle of the two must line up with the middle of her chin. think of it like folding the face in half, it's the same on both sides.
the size of her nose and mouth is accurate, so there is no need to change that.
there are other things but that is stuff you will learn yourself as you progress as an artist
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Thank you
and thanks for the feedback 
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^____^ no problem, if you want anymore feedback i am here to help
if you want to move to painting i suggest to start with oil pastels and colors, it helps you understand paint a little.
thats good! not many people like to draw after feedback hahaha i know so many that get butthurt after they ask for feedback
are you taking any art classes? thats the best way to sneak in time, it's like your forced to have that hour or so to your art.
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oil pastels..
I love feedback
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no research just dive in, that's the best way to figure it out. that's what i did (although i don't put that work up here 
does your school offer art? mine did and i wasn't necessarily taught any lessons, she just gave us a type of a project and what medium, if you needed help she'll help but if she saw you got it she leaves you alone.
if you can't i can help you, over the internet of coarse
i'd really like to see how much you can grow, you have a certian spark that not many artists have
im currently teaching some people in the style i was taught. which is eploring by myself, with only minimal restrictions and tough feedback.
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yeah my school does offer it and I'm following it right now
indeed she doesn't give exactly "lessons". she just give assignments and give tips from time to time. And when she tells something, it's basic stuff like primary colours. But I just use it as relaxation. It's really relaxing to do something creative between 8 periods learning.
Honestly, I've only chosen it because It's the only subject that has not only theory(these package also includes art history which unfortunately also includes lots of tests for both of them
Also, thank u! I would really appreciate the help. I already met so many nice people on DA who give tips and such
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thats good! you won't go insane until college
just stick with one art class per year, you cant overwork yourself, or your head will explode!!
:gwomp: no problem, let me know when your ready to start, i'll try my best to work with your time
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don't worry I only have option of one art class haha I was actually intrested in management and organisation or geography but I'm not really good at it haha I'm more into bioligy/physics stuff. and thanks
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oh no i don't mind at all, i've been teaching people over the internet for quite some time (believe it or not)
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I really like your shading+blending (: The skin tones look really nice.
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thank u! I try to let it look as soft as possible
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Georgeous portrait. I love her eyes and the textures in her hair and blouse. Excellent job! Thanks for sharing.
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really? thanks! I just scribbled the blouse in this drawing
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I really like this one, very nice !!!l!
"I love to make people laugh, if I make them smile I'm half way there" Mick O'Day~
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Proficiat !
This is a good improvement since the aqua di gioia drawing. There are only little mistakes, the most significant is the shape at the end of the nose
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Yay I'm happy to hear that
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hey...wonderful...keep trying good papers till you find what like...really does make a difference...
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Thanks
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Just a bunch of tissues, soft paper and soft pencil
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;o;
You're very gifted!
I thought it was a B&W picture when I saw it in the tumbnail! *o*
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