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Published: 2012-08-27 17:28:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 521; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 4
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Description :U i drew her
hurray XD
im testing shading also?
do you like?
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Comments: 32

Daeyqia [2012-09-05 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]

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First off, let me say that this does look kinda adorable.
The color choices for the markings aren't bad either, but there's quite a few things to mention.
Eyes don't work that way. It wouldn't show through the hair. And no, that is also NOT a style question. It just doesn't work that way and it doesn't exactly look good either. You can let the outlines for the eye show through, but that is the most I'd say is okay.
The eyes are a little too far from each other, or at least it looks like that.
And I don't think hair works that way either, if it's fluff coming from the top of the head, which is should be, the from our view right ear should not be behind the hair. Ears also have insides which you left out. I don't know if it's a species question, but assuming it is not, you simply left them out and it just looks like something is missing.
Legs don't exactly work that way either, to me, they look kinda broken, facing completely sideways like this. They should've faced forward a little more. And why did you draw toes on the hindfeet, but not on the forepaws? It looks kinda strange to be honest.
You could've put some more work into making the markings look a little neater, and not just kind of lazily painted on. Since I think I'm seeing a little of the hairs color bleed into the face, and that just doesn't look good. Try to work a little tidier next time. the tail and the bow look fine to me though.
The background also seems a little lazily and sloppily made, a little more work with it would surely make it look better.
In the last words I gotta say that I like the coloring of the eyes. It looks nice.

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qoaties In reply to Daeyqia [2012-09-05 22:45:17 +0000 UTC]

i guess i could work on that .. maybe all of it XD thanks for critiquing thou

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Daeyqia In reply to qoaties [2012-09-05 22:46:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I tried to not be too harsh ^^

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MixedFox [2012-08-31 15:27:36 +0000 UTC]

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awww, i love the shading and the colorful background. its so lovely and i love the eyes are so beatiful
i love the color of this character, absulety fabulousness! sorry i cant spell
but, i really like the detailed colors and the lines. its so cte, keep it up to your art! ^^
I love this picture so much! really great at art and the coloring! ^^
and i really love the background. abstratc and nice ^^ i hope you will like and fair my critique :3
it was really so adorable and cute! keep it up to your art! ^^
-mixedfox~ c: c:

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Meowy-Pixel [2012-08-27 18:15:51 +0000 UTC]

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sorry for bad spelling but!

Absolute Fabulousness! <3

The shading is very realistic and smooth, not to much.

THE EYES I COULD JUST DIE FOR <3

Background is very creative yet simple, and i like that.

and her hair realy contrast with it

CUTE,CUTE,CUTE!

all i can say is if this was on a cake, i would saver every bit of it <3

as the last Critique said:

CUTE CUTE
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i love all of it <3

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apocalypseAradia In reply to Meowy-Pixel [2012-08-27 18:44:18 +0000 UTC]

This isn't a critique.

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Meowy-Pixel In reply to apocalypseAradia [2012-08-27 19:01:34 +0000 UTC]

my critique is that i think its good

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apocalypseAradia In reply to Meowy-Pixel [2012-08-27 20:50:09 +0000 UTC]

that's not a critique. a critique, while it does point out the good parts, also has some of the bad mixed in so you can help the person grow as an artist. that's a compliment.

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Meowy-Pixel In reply to apocalypseAradia [2012-08-28 07:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I couldentd see any thing bad in it
Besides it my first critique so it no perfect :/

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apocalypseAradia In reply to Meowy-Pixel [2012-08-28 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]

If you can't see anything wrong with it, don't critique it. Because that kind of defeats the purpose of a critique. Just comment.

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Meowy-Pixel In reply to apocalypseAradia [2012-08-29 07:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Kk I know for next time

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xXNeon-CookieXx [2012-08-27 17:41:46 +0000 UTC]

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AKNBEKBFIKNERBWOIBEFWERB- Wow, i love this ;w;

Its soo adorable >w<

I love the style and the shading!

The shading is just amazing!!

The eyes are really cute and they stand out~

Love the back ground!

I love this pic so much!!!!

Your are is simply adorable!


Please may i have a pic like that? ;u;

CUTE CUTE
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qoaties In reply to xXNeon-CookieXx [2012-08-27 17:43:00 +0000 UTC]

yes ;w; you can and thanks

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xXNeon-CookieXx In reply to qoaties [2012-08-27 17:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and no problem~

Could u draw taileh plz?

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qoaties In reply to xXNeon-CookieXx [2012-08-28 01:41:59 +0000 UTC]

sure c:

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ciitylamps [2013-10-28 21:54:03 +0000 UTC]

you forgot





u butt

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qoaties In reply to ciitylamps [2013-11-01 21:45:00 +0000 UTC]

nOo

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HotPaul [2013-03-17 17:38:21 +0000 UTC]

daww tjhsi thing looks really sad let uncle paul hug it

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84-29388498905029375 [2012-09-06 22:36:06 +0000 UTC]

cute but very generic.

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yoloisntamotto [2012-08-31 15:33:24 +0000 UTC]

>:U
Stop making stuff cute, it doesn't ruin anything and is the main cause of world peace.
seewhatididthere

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qoaties In reply to yoloisntamotto [2012-08-31 15:40:20 +0000 UTC]

lD is very confused

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yoloisntamotto In reply to qoaties [2012-08-31 23:23:56 +0000 UTC]

cute stuff makes the world better

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girraFIG [2012-08-28 20:31:27 +0000 UTC]

i like the sahding on the tail dude its cute c:

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qoaties In reply to girraFIG [2012-08-29 17:06:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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EmiKitty [2012-08-27 20:21:16 +0000 UTC]

omg a character from mee 8D

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qoaties In reply to EmiKitty [2012-08-27 23:52:49 +0000 UTC]

yep owo

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MixedFox [2012-08-27 17:39:03 +0000 UTC]

aw

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qoaties In reply to MixedFox [2012-08-27 17:43:16 +0000 UTC]

im happy you think its cute >w<

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MixedFox In reply to qoaties [2012-08-27 17:43:44 +0000 UTC]

yusyuss

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gdpr-22556363 [2012-08-27 17:30:10 +0000 UTC]

want me to critique??

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qoaties In reply to gdpr-22556363 [2012-08-27 17:31:40 +0000 UTC]

sure owo

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gdpr-22556363 In reply to qoaties [2012-08-30 16:44:40 +0000 UTC]

now im too lazy bawwew

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