Comments: 21
animefreaknaruhina [2014-01-01 00:41:40 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't suck it Actually pretty good
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animefreaknaruhina [2014-01-01 00:17:56 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't suck it Actually pretty good
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SmileyChibi [2011-11-04 11:03:01 +0000 UTC]
This is my FAV naruto couple <3 Love iittt
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Andrea120000 [2010-11-29 19:21:59 +0000 UTC]
I love...
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Gaaraluvr4evr [2008-02-24 22:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Really good so far!
GaaraXMatsuri=Really really bad pairing
GaaraXSakura=Where the real luv is!!!
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sasuhina4eva6247 [2008-02-23 10:16:29 +0000 UTC]
thats not sucky at all its good for a first fanfic cuz its much better then mine
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Sabaku-No-Sirri10 [2008-02-21 14:36:41 +0000 UTC]
it's very good. Though, I have a few sugguestions. Alright. I'm kinda a fast reader and it's easily to read things when you break off people's speech. Like this:
"I like pie" Said Jenny
"Really?! I like pie too!!!!" Said Clyde
"Oh my god!!!!!" I think I'm in love you!!!" Jenny exclaimed.
It's alot easily to read instead of:
"I like pie."Said Jenny."Really?! I like pie too!!!!" Said Clyde."Oh my god!!!!! I think I'm in love with you."
I don't mean to be mean, because I really do like it and I know it's your first time, doing fanfic and I've done a million in my lifetime so, just giving a helpful hint.
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gaara1girl [2008-02-21 02:58:18 +0000 UTC]
yay gaasaku fanfic! ! ! ! ! !
more plz! ! ! ! ! !
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mystic0pal [2008-02-21 02:08:51 +0000 UTC]
hurry up i want the second chapter! sorry i liked it
! ^-^ make n=more soon please!
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mystic0pal In reply to queenofcats81 [2008-02-22 01:15:27 +0000 UTC]
welcomes! hey have you seen the tango de gaasaku drawing by redsakura i love it! it is in my favs! ^-^
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queenofcats81 In reply to mystic0pal [2008-02-22 06:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I think I have it as one of my faves too!!
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Panda-Ami [2008-02-20 23:49:15 +0000 UTC]
I like it so far ^^
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