Comments: 12
NicolaiGrey [2012-09-07 01:04:12 +0000 UTC]
amazing piece, you are very good at putting emotion through your work,
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Clouded-Rachel [2012-07-16 15:42:20 +0000 UTC]
This is very well-written. I love how you described that everything seems to slow down.
I'm sorry about your break-up.
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0hgravity [2012-07-15 17:21:34 +0000 UTC]
you've created a highly tangible mood here.
I can definitely feel the weight of isolation and cold. It has a vivid sense of hunkering down
into a small, small space, of being completely buried.
I could sense that this was written with slow-thawing fingers.
nice work.
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eene-fangirl [2012-07-15 16:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for your break up but this was pretty good.
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