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radiumlowi — [RA: 84, 88, 91] The Star-chasers' Dreams
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Published: 2015-05-29 13:55:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 673; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Never drawn the leading trio of Radioactive Tales together in a same drawing. Finally completed this drawing before the trip on Sunday. Glad that I'm art-debt free!!
The protagonist, deuteragonist and male head are gathering under the moonlit sky. Wait? Steampunk moon and a garden made from candies, just to blame Protactinium's intense radiation XDDD They are dressed in different alternate outfits: Radium as a mere average high school girl as a civilian (watch out her trefoil sign on her bag!); Polonium in her non- military outfit yet still on duty. Lastly is the leading guy in his "traveller" outfit, he has his very own fashion tastes indeed
wearing a brown brimmed hat with his 18th century-ish costume: featuring stockings and breeches. He looks absolutely lovely going with his juvenile appearance and traits. Admit he's the cutest creature among the radioactive elements
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Nice drawing...xD
I like the coloring technique. Cuteness rules. I like the outlining technique...xD
However, the whole, entire drawing seems tilted leftward of the drawing...xD
I think you should check out the way you hold the pencil and the way you focus your sight on the paper...xD
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No scanner sucks... still comments are greatly welcomed!
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Oh, I see... Sorry...
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Very adorable together. Polonium's outfit is adorable, as is Radium's and the 18th century costume is very nice too--gives off a retro feel I really like.
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Thanks much, Polonium's pink dress do stand out from the crowd
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You have a very interesting style, and the color pencils add a fascinating texture to the image. I know some people might encourage you to touch it up a bit with an imaging program, but I like the way that you've left it as is with the coloring.
Since you did post this in ProjectComment for May's comment month, I am going to leave some critique.
I would have like to have seen the background completed. The way that the sky fades from light to dark (left to right) is intriguing, but I would like to see it completed in coloring behind the characters. It would make the picture seem more complete. The style of the moon in the background is an especially nice touch.
It would also be interesting to see what they're standing on. Since there are quite a few sweets behind them, it would be interesting to know if they're standing on a candy-bricked road.
I do like their placement - the way that you use the eyes to create position, and the character in the middle - the focus of the piece - wearing brighter colors than the other two. It certainly makes her "pop out" more. The only thing about the eyes is that they seem quite creepy without pupils.
There are quite a few details in their outfits, though, that are harder to see because of the similar shades. I would suggest possible inking the lines before coloring so that the details in the clothes you've created will be visible in your final piece.
You might consider looking at the hair lines, though, because they intersect with the eyes, eyelashes, and cheeks in such a way as to be distracting since all of the lines are still visible.
I do think you've got an intriguing style, and I do hope you continue to develop it! Thank you kindly for allowing members of to critique the piece.
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Thanks much for the critique! Regarding to the art style, I use a simpler style drawing chibis. The characters' eyes are pretty much very stylised: in full body pics or some chibis, their pupils are coloured barely visible. Need to explain since the characters are personifications of radioactive elements, their eyes can thus glow.
Yep, I'll try my best and improve my art style!
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