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Raelsatu β€” Ornate Blade

Published: 2013-10-15 03:02:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 9259; Favourites: 370; Downloads: 180
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Description Work in progress of a large dagger/one-handed sword.
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Comments: 32

rstarr14 [2013-10-16 18:51:50 +0000 UTC]

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This is first-rate, top drawer weaponry. I love the varying textures, different levels of glossiness and matte, and how each part is decorative - not a traditional spot on the whole piece. Would be lovely if the wood came as part of it, so it could be hung on a wall / be reaching for it, one could be missing... More possibilities when you include the wood.

This will sell like crazy, one of the only issues I would address is perhaps making the blade just a bit longer. When I imagine lifting this weapon and turning it over in my hands, it looks heavy in the middle and too light at the tip. I believe you could achieve a better balance - but the reinforced forte does contribute to that, I can tell you've considered it.

And I know the pommel and decorative crosspiece are gorgeous up close, but I feel at a distance - even a medium distance - it could appear a bit messy. I'd recommend a little more negative space in there - so you can appreciate the work you've done at any distance and angle - rather than up close only.

It almost appears segmented, like you could separate the weapon between the rubies, and a chain or cord holds the blade to the grip and you can make a bladed nunchuka set - or just "release" one nunchuk to keep people at bay and keep the other one a dagger in your hand for close quarters.

Without a doubt, though, the beauty of the piece outweighs the minor issues I've gone into here. If I were more skilled and prolific with character creation I would buy it in a second as is, but just offering friendly critique. Good luck!

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DJWolfMane [2015-09-02 01:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Can I use this image on Wattpad to open a chapter of my new book? I'll be sure to mention you should you consent.Β 

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Raelsatu In reply to DJWolfMane [2015-09-02 23:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Of course; thanks for asking. =]

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DJWolfMane In reply to Raelsatu [2015-09-03 09:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mangrowing [2014-08-11 15:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Thunder... Thunder... Thunder... ThunderCats, HOOOOOOOO!!!

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WolfgirlnamedKai [2014-07-26 21:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Me and my cousin saw this and were like HOLY SH*T

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icevortex68 [2014-04-15 19:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Hi i am doing a blog with study purpose can i use your art i will put a link to your deviant art page, it is like collecting the art pieces that i like the most in there. As i said it is for study purpose in university. Please answer me ASAP. Thank you in advance

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Raelsatu In reply to icevortex68 [2014-04-16 02:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for asking; and yes that's just fine. =] Glad you like the piece.

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Unit645 [2014-03-04 16:40:19 +0000 UTC]

An elegant weapon. From a more... civilized age.Β 

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Rodriguelz [2013-10-25 00:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh tua Sword of shit Serah Farron. I'm Make.

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usere35 [2013-10-17 20:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Great model! Especially love the subtleties in the textures/materials. I really want to do something like this now.

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rakazo07 [2013-10-16 03:59:56 +0000 UTC]

angaz nito.....amazing in english!!!

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GiantPurpleCat [2013-10-15 21:53:11 +0000 UTC]

What a beautifully crafted dagger!

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prince789 [2013-10-15 17:59:06 +0000 UTC]

WWWOOOOWWW. it look so life like. did you made this?Β 

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Raelsatu In reply to prince789 [2013-10-15 21:29:04 +0000 UTC]

I did. Thanks for the comment =}

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Impybutt [2013-10-15 11:07:17 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning. I would totally buy one.

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Raelsatu In reply to Impybutt [2013-10-15 21:34:09 +0000 UTC]

Ty!

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Nerwen-Ancalime [2013-10-15 10:50:43 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooooooh pretty!!!

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TJverhagen [2013-10-15 10:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Looks really good. If it was real I'd hang it on my wall.

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Dang999 [2013-10-15 08:58:06 +0000 UTC]

This is aΒ beautiful blade

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Raelsatu In reply to Dang999 [2013-10-15 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Ty for the comment =}

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Dang999 In reply to Raelsatu [2013-10-15 21:38:19 +0000 UTC]

yw

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James-RedFox [2013-10-15 08:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow I thought that was a real dagger until I read the comments.Β  Amazing job.

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Raelsatu In reply to James-RedFox [2013-10-15 21:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Aha, thanks.

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Nocturnal-Dayz [2013-10-15 07:21:12 +0000 UTC]

What an elegant design! The hand guard looks quite dangerous to hold, but I quite like its look with the unique shapes, and the surface on the flat of the blade. It would look perfect sitting in a treasurer's gallery or something similar.

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Raelsatu In reply to Nocturnal-Dayz [2013-10-15 21:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Ty; glad you like it. =}

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efan96 [2013-10-15 07:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow ~ It's looks like real ! ..

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Elemental699 [2013-10-15 07:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Amazing~ May I ask what rendering program you used or is it a trade secret?

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Raelsatu In reply to Elemental699 [2013-10-15 21:25:00 +0000 UTC]

I used a standalone version of Octane for the render. Thanks =]

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FoomBerry [2013-10-15 03:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Real metal?

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Raelsatu In reply to FoomBerry [2013-10-15 03:10:28 +0000 UTC]

It's a 3d render, so the metal isn't real. Would be interesting if I could get a real-life version created though.

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FoomBerry In reply to Raelsatu [2013-10-15 03:41:18 +0000 UTC]

That would be a lovely blade if you could find someone to do it.

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