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Published: 2018-02-19 19:05:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 698; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 1
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Description A group of hunters and a Warden patrolling the Hive.

More at : raichmann.deviantart.com/galle…
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Comments: 11

ProtoTEnterprise [2018-09-11 02:57:01 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I´m from   

I really like this drawing. It has a lot of style and more with the shape of the sea creature, very dynamic that pattern of colors, the shape of its body, that expression it has and those multiple details on the body that look like armor fits very well. It looks like an armored beast and more with that level of cleanliness that has the drawing, very clean and incredible in terms of design.

I also highlight the creatures in the background that have very striking designs, being snakes that in turn have a very striking body style, with that pattern of colors between the green and pink red that looks great and those bestial expressions that has above all the from the right to the bottom do not stay behind.

The only thing that I see as bad to the drawing is that it looks too opaque. Not of absolute darkness, of course, but I think that a little bit of brightness, just a little bit, would help to highlight more the main creature and not the sensation of mixing with the aquatic background, blurring and almost losing itself of sight for a few moments.

But in itself, this drawing is very good, totally eye-catching and fresh designs, with an atmosphere if aquatic and mysterious and not to mention how they are drawn.

Simply spectacular!

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raichmann In reply to ProtoTEnterprise [2018-09-11 13:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much !

I'm not really good at lighting, not good at all actually, but i'm trying to learn a bit for my next piece on them.

I'm gonna try to use the lighting from their lantern better, it should provide a nice new touch and help distinguish them from the colors on the background.

I very glad you liked them  

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Cynth1c [2018-09-10 02:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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raichmann In reply to Cynth1c [2018-09-10 17:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks !

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drawingequalslife [2018-09-10 00:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I am here from ProjectComment. 
Your art work is very imaginative, and I love the idea of it! These creatures are very interesting to me, but there are couple things that could help improve your work perhaps? For example, maybe add some more shading? When something isn't shade it can make that object look flat, and lacking depth. Shading helps enhance drawings, and paintings A TON! I promise
The next thing I think could help is highlighting your creature. This also adds depth and can make it look more "real" along with the shading. Like, maybe if you highlight the eyes and his armor, I think it would look really cool. DONT FORGET that for highlighting and shading there is always a light source that determines where the highlights and shades go. I am still in the process of getting this right. But it has helped me immensely.
I am impressed that the creature in the back actually looks like he is behind the main creature. This is something I struggle with personally, so I applaud people who are able do accomplish this.
I also think that the colors you chose compliment each other perfectly! 
Your painting/drawing is very cool, so don't' let peoples critiques stop you from doing what your doing!

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raichmann In reply to drawingequalslife [2018-09-11 13:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks !

Your feedback is very helpful and i will keep it on mind for the next ones !

I'm sure if i follow it the next ones will be way better !If i can figure out how to do highlights (i barely know shading )

 

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aether-adopts [2018-08-19 10:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Try colouring the lineart maybe? It will really make it more spectacular!   

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raichmann In reply to aether-adopts [2018-08-19 15:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Not really sure how
I know how to use Krita to color the line art but i have no ideia how to match the colors of the lineart to the ones on the character so i dont lose the edges of the drawing.
Any tips on how ? please  

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aether-adopts In reply to raichmann [2018-08-20 06:34:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm not too familiar with Krita, but it may have a feature called 'Inhierit Alpha'

A video on it --> www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2HB57…

Hope it helps!

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raichmann In reply to aether-adopts [2018-08-20 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much !

It's gonna be a huge help in the future  

And thanks again for going the extra mile and even finding a video on it !

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aether-adopts In reply to raichmann [2018-08-21 06:43:18 +0000 UTC]

 

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