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Rainbowgal — You Promised
Published: 2008-01-26 22:05:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 781; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 15
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Description This is war…
And this is what war brings…
Terror and destruction.
This is why the witness sings.

I’m standing in a wide space,
My shoes are stained with blood.
My soul is stretched to breaking point,
I’m kneeling in a crimson mud.

But you promised nothing would happen.
You told me there was nothing to fear
You put your hands on my shoulders
And told me the words I longed to hear.
You promised me we’d come out unscathed,
Our mission completed and done
But now I’m staring down at your body;
It’s over; we’ve lost and they’ve won.

Eyes closed and yet open wide,
Expression glazed, touching the unknown
Screams and shouts echo around
And I’m feeling so sad and lost and alone.

An hour ago, I was so troubled
My heart was thumping with fear and dread
You told me firmly I had no need to worry
Had you guessed that you might end up dead?

Of all the things that we faced in the past,
This was one of my biggest fears
Of losing you, and now that’s come true
And I can’t stop the rush of the tears.

You promised me of no consequences,
You told me this wasn’t the end
You put your arms round me and told me so surely
That you’d always be here as my friend.
You promised me that one day we’d stand
Together, so secure and strong
When I feared for your safety, you said “Do not worry”
Had you realised that you were so wrong?

But it’s over now, you’re gone and I feel
Despair seeping from every pore.
My heart’s torn to pieces and I feel my tears flow
As fresh as the blood on the floor.

Stone, blood and light, fear and hatred
Look what’s happened, dear friend, don’t you see?
I love you so much, as only a friend could
Do you know what your death is doing to me?

I knew deep down that all this would happen
Instincts, you know, they’re often right.
But you convinced me, you promised, that we would come through
You were certain you would win this fight.

Of course, but of course, you were never to know
What fate had in store for you.
If only I’d listened to my inner voice,
If only I’d insisted it was true.

Their screams, my scream, pierce the air
All I can do is fall down and cry
All that you promised, my friend, my dear one
Is nothing now. That’s it. Goodbye.

You promised me there would be no blood
You promised me you’d be safe.
You promised me you knew what you were doing,
You promised me, but now it’s too late.

But you promised, dear friend…
You promised.
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Comments: 12

DLotU [2016-03-01 08:12:55 +0000 UTC]

FMA!!!!!!!! this made me cry, its soo good!   

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EpicSonicTF2Fan1 [2011-10-11 02:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of half life 2, episode 2

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AnimeFreak1002 [2008-03-25 03:35:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG! This is really good!! And FMA!! WOOT! Ok, I'm done...

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Rainbowgal In reply to AnimeFreak1002 [2008-03-25 09:13:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks! And thanks for all the favs!

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MutouMiriku [2008-03-07 20:46:48 +0000 UTC]

That made me cry. Honestly. I can barely see what I'm typing, and THAT'S the gospel truth.

Did Ed die or something?

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Rainbowgal In reply to MutouMiriku [2008-03-08 08:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Uh... yeah. That hit lots of people hard. If you take a look at some FMA music videos on YT you'll usually see a scene with him on his back with a pool of blood beneath him. That's the moment.

And sorry for making you cry.

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SapphireSky1992 [2008-02-01 02:38:05 +0000 UTC]

*pant pant* i got most of my mail cleared so i can finally comment on this!!! well anyway this is very beautiful!!^^

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SquidPixie [2008-01-30 20:33:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh.... O.o
This tugs on my heartstrings! T_T beautiful job!

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DanniKatana [2008-01-26 22:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow...

This is definitely full of emotion and strong passions for friends gone. Darker than your usual works, but wonderful.

Wow. Very, very powerful. I love this.

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Kisukeh [2008-01-26 22:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Very touching.
Awesome.
Fav :3

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sesshomarusecretlove [2008-01-26 22:08:09 +0000 UTC]

ah, I love it.

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Rainbowgal In reply to sesshomarusecretlove [2008-01-26 22:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And thanks for the fav!

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