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Two things.

One thing all critics forget, and it is the most important part, is the person you are telling all this must want to change and that happens only if the person finds it in themselves to change. No amount of mean words, stomped feet, you sucks and smartassism is going to make anyone better, in fact it might make them worse in the long run.

In fact I remember this beta reader I had in my writing days scream at me, she screamed at me about not letting other people do all the work and how terrible I was and should be better. What she did not realized that WAS the best I could do and was looking for real help to improve. The stinger was she never did tell me what I was doing wrong in the first place, she just assumed "I should know better."

The second thing. Some times I don't know if critics want to "Help", or they just want all art to be exactly like their's. People like different things, but some times it feels like many are trying to make every single post into the exact same piece of art. "For anatomy sake, ya know."

Lastly, the moment you attached extra tits or dicks onto a character you lose the right to argue about "anatomical correctness."

Tech stuff: There is two drafts of this, the first one was discarded because it felt pretty stiff as the guy was saying he was misunderstood and everyone stood like boards. This draft I tried my hardest to have some kind of movement. Or at least character.

Description
Two things.

One thing all critics forget, and it is the most important part, is the person you are telling all this must want to change and that happens only if the person finds it in themselves to change. No amount of mean words, stomped feet, you sucks and smartassism is going to make anyone better, in fact it might make them worse in the long run.

In fact I remember this beta reader I had in my writing days scream at me, she screamed at me about not letting other people do all the work and how terrible I was and should be better. What she did not realized that WAS the best I could do and was looking for real help to improve. The stinger was she never did tell me what I was doing wrong in the first place, she just assumed "I should know better."

The second thing. Some times I don't know if critics want to "Help", or they just want all art to be exactly like their's. People like different things, but some times it feels like many are trying to make every single post into the exact same piece of art. "For anatomy sake, ya know."

Lastly, the moment you attached extra tits or dicks onto a character you lose the right to argue about "anatomical correctness."

Tech stuff: There is two drafts of this, the first one was discarded because it felt pretty stiff as the guy was saying he was misunderstood and everyone stood like boards. This draft I tried my hardest to have some kind of movement. Or at least character.