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Published: 2013-09-11 07:30:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 3136; Favourites: 174; Downloads: 29
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Description Sep.10, 2013
Finishing Time: 20h (Drawing: 9h; Painting: 11h)
"Joellen, it has been a while(18 months…) since I accepted your request(lol); my apologies. But here your go; hope you'd enjoy."

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Original Concept by ~TotalArtFreak
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Comments: 37

TormsyTGKat [2013-09-11 16:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I really enjoy this as a monochromatic piece, but when I opened the work larger I noticed that your lights and darks could be pushed a bit more. I really think it would a depth and character if pushed subtly...I realize that the reasoning for the moon being muted is to push your focal point to the girl's face, but if you lean towards realism the moon is a reflection of sunlight, without clouds, this would be a pale white(orange, red, depends on the time of year). If you give yourself two light sources (one being the moon and the other being a unseen source infront of the girl) it can really make this piece pop a little more. Taking the light source to the eyes and nose of the skull, it will make it look less like color and more like light. The meekness in color and light is why I rated the impact a 3. It is something I struggle with myself.

I must mention, this is beautiful. I love your line quality, the details in the metacarpals and flanges. the details are very nice. I like how her hair kind of mimics the movement of the webs in her details....I could go on about my love of details in this....but I digress.

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rainy-season In reply to TormsyTGKat [2013-09-14 05:12:53 +0000 UTC]

My heartfelt thanks to you, for your honest and insightful critique! It's very helpful

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TormsyTGKat In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-14 19:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Anytime! You do great work, it was a pleasure.

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darkbutterflyz [2014-01-26 10:25:05 +0000 UTC]

请问你是怎么上色的? O.O

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rainy-season In reply to darkbutterflyz [2014-02-17 06:27:28 +0000 UTC]

這個也可以參考 rainy-season.deviantart.com/ar…

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rainy-season In reply to darkbutterflyz [2014-02-17 06:11:53 +0000 UTC]

哦 好的。 我看了你的数码绘,估计用的是PS里的自带的某个笔刷。首先你要下载一套共享的优质笔刷:sagebrush。链接: ishare.iask.sina.com.cn/f/1481…  怎么安装笔刷可以网上学。


上色第一步是上底色。皮肤第一层,衣服第二层,头发第三层。底色不但是一个基础色,还是你之后上色的选定范围。就是说之后画细节时,在每一层就不会画出边界去了。然后每层就上色加工:有一个反射光和直射光的光影问题,看这个: www.youtube.com/watch?v=nbicuv…  还有颜色概论:www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxuUiO…


下面都画完了对吧,下面就是我的技巧了。 我其实上色很不灵,好看的感觉都是用PS调出来的。具体技巧可以网上查,我就大概说说几种手段:1. 盖印所有图层stamp all layers,把这个新图层(stamp layer)属性调成multiply(叠加),调低透明度到50%,就能把整个图加深层次。2. 如果把这个stamp layer 调成 30%透明的 softlight 模式,这样就能把整体变亮,略发光的感觉。还有把这个softlight层用高斯模糊gaussian blur 2-3, 这样又多了灵动感。 3. adjustment layer调整图层;curves曲线,color balance色彩调整 等都是常用的整合整体色调的工具。 4. 纸纹运用:增加一些质感texture。 这些我全都混合着用 哈哈 ‘上色白痴‘极度依赖PS的。 

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darkbutterflyz In reply to rainy-season [2014-02-23 11:19:48 +0000 UTC]

O.O  

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darkbutterflyz [2014-01-26 10:23:52 +0000 UTC]

好漂亮!!<3  我也很想和你一样画的那么好。。

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rainy-season In reply to darkbutterflyz [2014-02-17 05:48:00 +0000 UTC]

哦 哈哈 你這麼說我都臉紅了(我也不是那麼好啊);看來你是在催我別犯懶,而是多努力上進,哦 我明白了。謝謝

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rajasegar [2013-11-13 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Great piece of work!
Thanks for sharing...
Featured in Daily Inspirations in hangaroundtheweb.com

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rainy-season In reply to rajasegar [2013-11-18 09:32:23 +0000 UTC]

What a pleasure! Thanks.

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AjAtrese [2013-09-24 23:01:12 +0000 UTC]

I agree to what TormsyTGKat said about this piece...
For me... It has an amazing concept, nice colors, background unifies with your main focus...
The only thing was to make your values to a higher level...
Put some light source to make it pop out more and dark for the shadows...
All in all its a great illustration... just explore more about lights and darks....

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rainy-season In reply to AjAtrese [2013-09-26 02:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Alyssa, thank you for your honest comments; its very helpful. I'll keep improving those areas

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sfBluepan [2013-09-14 16:31:55 +0000 UTC]

這真的很生動,畫得非常好。 

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rainy-season In reply to sfBluepan [2013-09-16 08:55:24 +0000 UTC]

谢谢!

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Articu [2013-09-13 15:19:53 +0000 UTC]

so original style, nice colors tone!

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rainy-season In reply to Articu [2013-09-14 03:36:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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OniricSkull [2013-09-12 13:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Is great how you capture the feeling and the concept. I really love this image. Nice work.

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rainy-season In reply to OniricSkull [2013-09-14 03:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. 

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OniricSkull In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-14 16:30:00 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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WolfAndShadow [2013-09-11 21:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Great atmosphere

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rainy-season In reply to WolfAndShadow [2013-09-12 07:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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WolfAndShadow In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-12 14:59:38 +0000 UTC]

It's all good

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Lady69 [2013-09-11 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful !!!

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rainy-season In reply to Lady69 [2013-09-12 07:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks!!

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Lady69 In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-12 09:27:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Zeryo9 [2013-09-11 20:02:54 +0000 UTC]

This is so amazing, absolutely love the overall style of this!

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rainy-season In reply to Zeryo9 [2013-09-12 07:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your opinion!

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Zeryo9 In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-14 01:51:55 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!

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GUWEIZ [2013-09-11 14:59:28 +0000 UTC]

The foreground and background are done superbly! I feel they helped a lot in guiding my attention to the main subject

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rainy-season In reply to GUWEIZ [2013-09-12 07:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes,I tried to make them guide the eye and not taken away too much attention. Thank you for commenting

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Paldan [2013-09-11 13:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Great work! Love the moody and other-worldy feel to this

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rainy-season In reply to Paldan [2013-09-11 13:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for commenting; appreciated! I had a hard time figuring out how to paint night scene; didn't want regular dark blue sky, so I made it reddish.

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Paldan In reply to rainy-season [2013-09-12 13:41:39 +0000 UTC]

It's thinking like that that give this image its character! You step away from the accepted norm and creat something truly unique!

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rainy-season In reply to Paldan [2013-09-14 05:22:20 +0000 UTC]

 thx 

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TotalArtFreak [2013-09-11 09:03:44 +0000 UTC]

wow this is amazing I love how you put your personal twist on her! She looks allot different! more Salem traditional american witch like haha! you put so much time into this ;-; im so honored for all your hard work!

I love the wolf and the locket on the belt, this is so interesting! thank you!

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rainy-season In reply to TotalArtFreak [2013-09-11 09:38:18 +0000 UTC]

 Lolz;the most difficult part was character re-design; did a ton of researches... 

But above all, I'm glad you like it.  

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