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RaltheCommentator — Remembered Alive Pg 13
Published: 2013-01-02 18:57:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 6912; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 10
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The pages with the Well of Souls (as seen in Hercules) will be in color so it'd be easy for readers to identify the setting when they see it, as opposed to grayscale.Even some of the happiest folks in the world have had their share of insecurities...
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Oh Mickey 
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Even in Epic Mickey, after the Blot yanked his heart out, he wasn't near this tense.
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I kinda like the green background with the characters staying white. Makes them pop up more and it's like you said, the setting is more recognizable that way.
Oh boy looks like those two have some talking to do before they cook up a plan to get out. No use in stopping the bad guys if the heroes can't work together as a team. Guess we'll all have to wait and see how this ends up.
I really like the diaglogue in this. Although there has been a few pages now where the diaglogue has been, purposly, been very little or left out, in this page the diaglogue between the two is short and to the point.
In other words the textbubbles aren't cramped with to much exposition and such. Which is a good thing. For the reader it keeps things nice and clear.
Keep up the great work!
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Thanks! I'm minoring in creative writing in college, so it's great to see that it's strong here.
Soon, you'll see a more direct answer to why Mickey is so rattled up.
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If I was a guest in the park and I saw that attack happen, I would hide somewhere and stay in the park...i know it would be suicide to do it but, I would stay and help...
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Lol, I doubt you'd get far. The villains don't want any humans in there while they're taking over. They'd rather fight with toons.
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Oh, don't worry, I'd be hiding in one of the shops watching...is it possible to be in it like a little intruder that pisses off the villains when they find out? XD By then, that shield wouldn't let me out...let alone in if i was outside...lol so I'm pretty screwed and so are the villains...they couldn't get rid of me...unless Dr. Facilier decied to take my soul or something, then I'd be really screwed...
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His shadows ARE every where, and Chernabog sees all!
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I'd have something those shadows fear, light. Scare their butts away...i'd imagen if I was caught, it would be trying to save a toon...XD they could only lock me up or kill me...most likely lock me up or something...XD I'd save Eugene if he was in danger, and then I would be screwed...lol
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I'm really interested in what could be unnerving enough to make Mickey lash out like that.
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You'll find out soon...
What do you think of the glass effect I used in one of the panels?
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Panel #5, right? It looks like textured glass like you get in some fancy windows or sliding doors.
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Well, as long as it looks like glass, that's ok with me ^^
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aw poor mick i bet he was so looking forward to seeing walt again now he's got tricked by the villains there's no one to take the fustration and sadness at on except ozzie
this is getting epic
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Well, it's not just the trickery that's gotten Mickey all rattled up, as you'll see in the next page.
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Let me guess, it's the fact that he feels like he's failed Walt, right? I bet Oswald feels the same way but he's not showing it in order to be strong for his brother.
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Close, but it's more than that. It DOES have to do with Walt, though.
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Ooo, toughie... The fact that Walt left Mickey alone and that Walt let this happen or something?
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Closer, but still not right.
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Awww, lol. The only other thought I had was that he seems frustrated that Oswald isn't showing as much concern or emotion or frustration as Mickey is. Or maybe he's mad at Walt for creating the villains in the first place? Eh, probably still not right but I'm running out of guesses lol.
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No, and no. XP I'll give ya a clue: Walt is in heaven, but where are his animated offspring?
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Ohhhhh when you put it that way it seems obvious lol 
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No I don't. Could happen to anybody. ^^ I'll make it more clear in the next page.
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I can see Oswald comforting a crying Mickey at some point. Wonder if Walt's gonna come save them if they can't escape on their own.
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The lower hands in the second panel look wrong. Like they're not attached to Oswald...
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They are, you just can't see all of Ozzie's torso since Mickey is knealing on top of his hands (or the closest thing to knealing since he has a ghostly tail and no legs XP )
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Ah, I see. I got confused because Mickey's torso is about the same shape as Oswald's head.
...I wonder if those other souls would be willing to help.
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Well, for some reason, Mickey and Oswald are the only ones who can still move about rather than just floating around with the other "mortals." It's just one of those qualities that makes toons like Mickey so unique.
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I sense that we'll soon be seeing a side of our dear mouse that very few ever have...
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Unless you've seen Mickey's Christmas Carol, or the King's death scene in "Prince and the Pauper"
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Oh no! Mickey loosing it! Great job...please continue
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Mickey I'd say you just put your foot in your mouth, but you don't have them anymore...
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WHOA! poor Mickey he's under pressure, I hope they will escape soon... uhmmm and what about they stole Caronte's ship? *watching GTA Sant Andreas*
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Caronate's ship? 
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Charon, the Ferryman of the Underworld.
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Ohhhhhhh, I get it! Well, the boat wouldn't even go anywhere since Hades put a giant glass wall right over the well of souls. XP
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Charon: Does this mean I get a day off?
Hades: Not in your afterlife man.
Charon: No rest for the wicked...-_-"
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XD Caronte, Ade's boatmen, do you remember Hercules Movie?
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I don't remember THAT in the movie.
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in this scene 
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I get it now. ^^ Well, I doubt the boat would get far since Hades put a thick, glass wall right above the Well of Souls so that no soul could get out, and nobody else could get in.
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