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Kheelaia [2013-12-21 22:02:15 +0000 UTC]
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Yay! I love writing critiques! Let's start!
First, I think the background is awesome. Its drawn really well, I can't draw trees so I admire you so much but thre is always a weak point and here i is too. It's definately the bridge. Stones are nearly NOT shaded... But except it background is okay xD
And about the character... It's okay I guess? I cant see it closer, but seems to be really pretty, also shaded very well. And of course mane! I love how you draw hair, really! Also there are clothes, that are awesome too. Shading on the cape may be a bit darker, but it's okay.
Only really ba thing here I can spot is shadow under the pony, because it's placed wrong. Should be placed more in direction of viewer, because that is how light goes (or at least how it seems to go).
Summing, it's awesome drawing, wiith few lacks in shading, but I still love it!
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Rameslack In reply to Kheelaia [2013-12-21 22:25:28 +0000 UTC]
Yay my first critique! Thanks alot for the pointers I will keep them in mind when doing my next picture.
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Argus456 [2013-12-02 02:18:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow,I'm speechless...
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SleepingSilentBelle [2013-12-01 20:17:18 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic work, Rame. That background is absolutely stunning.
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Rameslack In reply to Rotorix [2013-12-01 16:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Happy to hear it
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