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Long ago in the forest of Everfree in search of fate and who I was supposed to be.The warnings I did not heed for adventure was what I sought.
Foolish was my quest and my decision I soon came to regret lost among the trees of Everfree.
In vain they searched for me in hope that tragedy was not my destiny.
Never was I found and my soul is now bound within the darkness of Everfree.
But mourn me not for in the light of the moon I dance among the trees, accepting the fate
delivered to me.
So cry not for me, I`m just a ghost of Everfree.
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I do hope Apple Bloom's family will come visit her so she won't be lonely.
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I used this picture and poem for a college assignment yesterday. Even though most students had no idea what MLP was, they understood what was going on simply using the description "a ghost in a forest called Everfree."
At least one of my class mates did like your drawing! Keep in mind its only been a few hours because I posted late night.
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Well thats one way to get your A+
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You might not like this next part, but here is was the assignment details.
"After reading chapters 5, 6, 9, 16, and the selections for this week, answer the following question in a fully-developed paragraph.
Explain what makes a poem a "good" poem and what makes a poem a "bad" poem. Give an example of a bad poem (it can be something short that you've written or you can find one online). Be sure to use APA documentation style."
I got props for "fixing" it too, which definitely helped.
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I heard once of the creature that lived in the Everfree.
Heard tales of the great monstrosity.
I saw to stop it, only me.
Foalishly into the Everfree
When I saw it, I did not plea.
For I saw my destiny.
The final passing of what will be.
The ruin of all along with me.
For-
Screw this.
Nice work, as usual.
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Hmm.... let me try...
Long ago in Everfree
I searched my fate on who to be.
To heeds and warnings I gave no thought
Adventure being all I sought.
Foolish was my filly quest
A choice I soon came to regret
Lost among the ancient trees
Forever one with Everfree.
The people searched for me in vain
And over time their hope would wane.
From here on out I'd always be
Forever one with Everfree.
But do not mourn my passing by
My flesh may fail, but my soul won't die
A ghost to be, my destiny
Forever one with Everfree.
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Yours is better then mine
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Now that is very sad but it's also precious somehow.
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Yes. That could be right.
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