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Published: 2008-03-08 04:31:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1428; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 8
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Description So this. This...is my attempted tryout at SRON. THAT DIED. DDD:

My hand is about to too, but...that's besides the point. My internet randomly dies, so...I should have safety saved (but the way to do it was wierd and I'd probably screw it up).

But...I like the line art and the idea enough, so...I figured I'd post it. Even if it's not done. And the more I look at it, the more mistakes I find. >>;; The girl there is obviously the work of someone who hasn't really drawn a girl in a while DD: (like...as much as she has guys LOL).

I might...go and try to do something with it in photoshop. But I don't know. And, I don't know who these people are LOL. They're scavaging for...stuff...and the world is like...dead, but, other than that...no story. Ha ha.

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Gosen406 [2008-03-10 02:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh! Awesome work!! I love it!! Great art here ^___^ I'm definitely faving

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ramhay In reply to Gosen406 [2008-03-12 01:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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Gosen406 In reply to ramhay [2008-03-12 02:59:02 +0000 UTC]

^____^

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RaccoonKitty [2008-03-08 19:11:37 +0000 UTC]

*jaw drops to floor* Amazing! You get in, no prob! I love the expression on the guy who's getting bonked on the head. Good luck!

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ramhay In reply to RaccoonKitty [2008-03-08 20:04:16 +0000 UTC]



Thank you~ (Hopefully I'll get around to either asking if I can finished this uploaded, or draw another one. xDD).

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RaccoonKitty In reply to ramhay [2008-03-08 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]

What your name on SRON? I was just wondering. I'm VHS but I'm only on SSO, I haven't worked up the courage to try out for SRON.

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ramhay In reply to RaccoonKitty [2008-03-08 22:34:23 +0000 UTC]

It's still ramhay. xDD I'm uncreative, so I just stick with what I got >>;; (it's usually either that or "ashleyhyn", which is what I was on SROA when I started trying out *never finished*.)

You should tryout. It wouldn't hurt anything, and you'd probably get some good advice even if you didn't get accepted (I have no idea what the standards are, though >>;; ). My thing about tryouts is that I have a distinct lack to be able to put out a whole lot of effort (like drawing backgrounds LOL). xD But...I'd like the crit. so...yeah. xD

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RaccoonKitty In reply to ramhay [2008-03-12 20:29:23 +0000 UTC]

*goes to look you up* I'm thinking about trying out but I'm still practicing on drawing backgrounds and my own style. Thanks for the advice and good luck!

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pirategurl15 [2008-03-08 15:14:51 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! haha is the guy in the middle about to hit the guy on the left in the head? lol i really like i this a lot! you should finish it... of course if you wanted to, ...fav!

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ramhay In reply to pirategurl15 [2008-03-08 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ Yes...Mr. Short Hair has a habit of getting into dumb messes, and the guy in the middle gets irritated by it. xDD

I hope I can finish it - I really want to. DD:

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MASRMiller [2008-03-08 11:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Okay the picture is great but please explain to me what the hell is going on in it because Iam way confused.

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ramhay In reply to MASRMiller [2008-03-08 15:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, thanks.

Errrmm...basically these three guys are looking for parts or something because they're in a like...post-apocalyptic type world where there's like a huge war going on or something. They guy with short hair was messing with the giant...machine thing they're looking in and broke off a panel. The guy with long hair is like the "leader" kind of who gets annoyed easily and who is PO'd currently at short-haired guy because he always touches and breaks things. The girl is just a tagalong sort who's good with mechanics but is more interested in the little robot she found.

I had originally meant for them to be characters who actually, kind of, have a background story but they didn't really look like them (I still haven't figured out how they really look, though) >>;; If that were the case, though, the two guys would be like refugee/criminal soldiers. The girl would be the same. DD:

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MASRMiller In reply to ramhay [2008-03-09 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Well it's a good Idea for a story.

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ramhay In reply to MASRMiller [2008-03-09 19:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks The characters these guys were supposed to be are actually from an idea I was going to write for a short story contest thing. No idea if that'll happen, though.

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MASRMiller In reply to ramhay [2008-03-10 09:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Well if you need to bounce ideas off someone Iam always avaliable.

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tom-bob-russ [2008-03-08 08:49:05 +0000 UTC]

what tis SRON? anywho, nice job none the less. even without any background story, the picture itself says enough. nice job.

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ramhay In reply to tom-bob-russ [2008-03-08 15:21:03 +0000 UTC]

SRON is an oekaki that you have to tryout for. It stands for Suta-Raito Oekaki Normal or something >> I'll probably change it to S-R Oekaki in the desc. so it's not so confusing xDDD

Thanks!

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RageTH [2008-03-08 08:34:55 +0000 UTC]

She looks pretty good to me!

I love the overall effect!

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ramhay In reply to RageTH [2008-03-08 15:21:16 +0000 UTC]



Thanks!~

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RageTH In reply to ramhay [2008-03-10 05:14:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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vintagey [2008-03-08 07:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Not sure what SRON is...but the chick looks like Terra. Cool picture nonetheless; hope to see you continue it!

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ramhay In reply to vintagey [2008-03-08 15:23:58 +0000 UTC]

SRON is the Suta-Raito Oekaki Normal (I think), that you have to tryout to draw on >>;; I'll probably change the desc. to say S-R Oekaki, to save later confusion xDD

Ah ha...she does look like Terra DD: Darn it. Wasn't intentional (her hair went through several transformations xDD). Thank you~ I hope I can continue it, so...we'll see.

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Wolfdoodler [2008-03-08 05:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Actually you only need to worry about the weird safety saving in SROA.

Which you coudl totally get into.

The way SRON and Sutaro do it is theres a safety save feature when you hit submit. SO IT HIDES HTE PICTURE FOR YOU without having to do any mumbo jumbo. If you mail an admin on there i'm sure they could upload the picture for you and you could try to salvage it because you'd prolly get in with jsut this one picture. Its that awesome.

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ramhay In reply to Wolfdoodler [2008-03-08 20:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? DDD: Then I could have saved it. >< Man.

I've started to try out for SROA before, but I only ended up doing two tryouts. I don't think my work ethic can last me for the full amount. LOL.

The oekaki at TGN has a feature like that - but, I had read the rules on SRON and it mentioned the wierd way to safety save, so I assumed that it didn't have the special feature. I might message one of the admins, but I thought you couldn't upload tryouts? >>;; I dunno, though. I might just try a different idea and finish this one in photoshop. D: THANK YOUUUU~

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Wolfdoodler In reply to ramhay [2008-03-09 04:05:32 +0000 UTC]

upi can upload tryouts if they have been drawn on the oekaki and lost. Because we've all lost a picture and been like AW DAMMIT.

Yeah, also both ways of safety saving confuse people so the members of SRON are pretty lenient about it, :]

No problem! <3

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ramhay In reply to Wolfdoodler [2008-03-09 19:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Aww YES. There's a possibility that I might just do that. If I waited like a week after the fact, would they still upload it (I still have a screen shot that shows the whole background of the oekaki anyway, so they'll know where it's from LOL)?? I have no time during this week to work on it. D:

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Wolfdoodler In reply to ramhay [2008-03-12 03:07:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm fairly certain that they would upload it. They are very nice people there. And they will love you more since you read the rules about trying out. :] many people don't read the rules.

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OctoberFindings [2008-03-08 04:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Regardless, it's really good. I like the pink washout look- clases with the whole vibe of "you screwup, stop touching things!"

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ramhay In reply to OctoberFindings [2008-03-08 05:11:06 +0000 UTC]



Thanks~

Ha ha, glad the pink is okay - in oekaki, I always use pink for my base sketching. I don't know why. xDD I couldn't get rid of them, this time, though, because I lost it. >>;;

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OctoberFindings In reply to OctoberFindings [2008-03-08 04:56:44 +0000 UTC]

*clashes not clases

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