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Randi-lovesArt — Haran Chronicles Addeline Karayan Remake

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Description (UPDATE: 2-3-2024: Replaced real world religion themes with a fictional religion.)

This is a remake of my Haran Chronicles character Addeline.

Addeline not only has both brown hair and purple hair now, but also has a new hairstyle alongside a new outfit. She really gives off a fairytale princess look, now.

Old design is here:
www.deviantart.com/randi-loves…

Name: Addeline Karayan
Race: Human
Age: 15
Personality Type: ISFJ

BIO:

Addeline Karayan is the 2nd youngest child of the Karayan family.
Unlike any member of her family, she does not have a sadistic or corrupted personality to her. She is a rather kind loving and caring individual, who only wants to make peace with the war between Raz and Senshi, more then anything else she desires.


She loves interacting with everyone, but whenever an interactive situation goes wrong, getting into those conversations only makes it worse.  

An example is when Jenrid was arguing at Issac, Addeline would try to settle their situation out with an obscure activity, such as walking outside, hugging each other, and other cutesy things. She cannot balance well with her hidden wings, causing her to bump into almost everything in sight, she is not used to flying.    




She is a Misdaqian spending most of her time reading the Tumi Al'ahlam, and being very observant to private conversations, without them knowing that she’s heard everything.

Both her parents not like this fact of Addeline being religious and nice to everyone, attempting to steal her copy of Tumi Al'ahlam and that they are both constantly telling their daughter to become evil and ambitious like them, but she always refuses to be like her Mother and Father.

Addeline was blindly fallen into Hisoka’s trap into being transformed into a more darker being. She has slightly been affected by this new transformation, but the procedure was not fully completed, thanks to her retainer Mana busting her out of it when Hisoka left.




The reason why she is a Misdaqian in the first place is because when she was younger, his father used to go to church with her often, but in later years, he simply did not care about the religion anymore, he only took her there for education and nothing else, and does not want her to be addicted to it.

Whenever she gets into a fight or argument to anyone, she will exceedingly be hotheaded to that person and will attacked them if they do not stop. Is not exactly the best at debates because of this fact.






Personality:
+Kind (She is always nice to everyone, and will do anything to make them feel better.)
+Observant (Hearing private conversations without being exposed.)
+Selfless (To her loved ones and retainers.)

-Clumsy (When she’s attempting to fly with her wings.)
-Hotheaded (When she gets into arguments.)
-Gullible (She literally trusts any person she can count on without any regrets.)






Other Relationships:
She is very disturbed in how Saiko does all of his actions. (Especially with his creepy obsession with Staramy!) Most of the time, she doesn’t even want to spend some time with him.


She treats Aden very nicely, and will demand her family to leave him alone and treat him fairly like everyone else. She always invites him into having tea parties with her retainers, and reading the Tumi Al'ahlam to him, since it intrigues him.


Addeline never liked Shison, because of his sadistic and cruel personality. She convinces him to be more well mannered, then to just slaughter everyone in sight. Shison on the other hand, never cared about what Addeline had to say, as he mostly ignored her because he does not believe that the Karayan family needs to change. Like Hisoka and Nyx, he also detests Addeline wielding a Tumi Al'ahlam in her room.




Abilities:
With the power of believing in her own potential and creativity, she is able to attack enemies with electrical magic and is given wings to fly. She is also able to communicate with spirits and deceased ghosts.






Story of how Addeline met Andreas:

Addeline met Andreas when she explored a ruined village. “Is anyone there?” She echoed. She went inside all of the buildings it had, but it appears that nobody is here. “Why is nobody here? It sounds like an abandoned village to me.” She thought to herself.

She further investigated on the small area, until a man was laying down, his whole body was covered in blood and arrows. Addeline approached him, but he became more frightened when she walked to him. “PLEASE DON’T HURT ME!” He begged miserably. Addeline decided to help him out and introduce herself. “My name is Addeline. I haven’t seen anyone here, do you know what happened by any chance?” She asked politely.




“My name is Andreas, I was mistreated by my family because I was nothing more to them then a weak and pathetic entity to them, they treated me like a pawn, and they later abandoned me when I was younger. I tried to be the nicest child they created, but nothing seem to convince them into treating me more fairly. The reason why this place is abandoned is because a group of Light Eaters attacked this village, because they did not want any locations that are nearby their territory, and that some of the villagers messed with them. So please, can’t a coward just be depressed in agony?”




Andreas asked. “Of course not. I wouldn’t want to hurt you at all, you seem like very nice person to me. If I recruited you as my retainer, you would have a very wonderful life living with me, and that you can help protect me from danger!” Addeline offered. “You want me, the great Andreas, to tag along with you?” Andreas asked. “Of course, take my hand silly~” Addeline spoke. Andreas took her hand and was able to get up. Andreas walked with Addeline to his new home.
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GremlinSaturnKaiju [2020-08-21 01:03:09 +0000 UTC]

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Randi-lovesArt In reply to GremlinSaturnKaiju [2020-08-21 01:04:17 +0000 UTC]

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GremlinSaturnKaiju In reply to Randi-lovesArt [2020-08-21 01:04:40 +0000 UTC]

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XxRosieGrlx [2017-01-22 06:21:05 +0000 UTC]

omg
I'm a terrible friend
I hadn't even commented lately D:

But I really like her design! I like how dark her hair is and how the eyes are getting more detailed. Some people won't like it, but I personally like more detailed drawings (unless they give me a headache). And the pink compliments her skin tone and hair colour quiet nicely! And I can see the improvement from the traditional drawing! Good job!

I'm going to be a bit nitpicky here (and I know you really don't like it :/):
I would move the soul crests towards the top more (not facing forward) on her shoulders and give her a cross necklace instead of a armor... thingy idk lol (cross necklaces are more in fashion than an armor piece that could cut off her circulation)
(And I think giving her wings to fly would make her a bit boring. Why not give her a jump boost or something? (or double jump or something like that))

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Randi-lovesArt In reply to XxRosieGrlx [2017-01-22 06:28:29 +0000 UTC]

This drawing was made a month ago tho.


Hurrah! Glad you like it.

It's a torso. XD

As for the SC's on her shoulders, the only SC she has is again, on her torso.

(Ah I see.)

Jump boost sounds cool.

As for the wings, I gave her those because it would fit her angelic and Christian-like character/demeanor a lot!

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XxRosieGrlx In reply to Randi-lovesArt [2017-01-22 06:38:46 +0000 UTC]

omggg *sweats*



I think you misunderstood my point of view
I'll rephrase: I think the soul crest shouldn't be facing the camera but instead up towards the sky. (Ugh I think i just made it worst. I can't type today xP)

Would that be a cliche tho? Giving wings to Christians (or not Christian)-like characters? *shrugs*

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Randi-lovesArt In reply to XxRosieGrlx [2017-01-22 06:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Like a halo? IDK What you're trying to say.


Kinda, but I only have 1 winged character besides her, which is Staramy. 

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XxRosieGrlx In reply to Randi-lovesArt [2017-01-22 07:48:14 +0000 UTC]

... *sighs* Off to goole images I go...
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/d… the light orange part of this shirt
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/d… red part

Hmm. well, ok.

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Randi-lovesArt In reply to XxRosieGrlx [2017-01-22 08:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, you mean something like those?

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XxRosieGrlx In reply to Randi-lovesArt [2017-01-24 03:45:26 +0000 UTC]

I... think? XD

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