MrB1ank [2015-03-22 00:27:24 +0000 UTC]
So.... your character just kills the King of Quincies, one of the most powerful beings in Bleach canon, just like that? You don't actually think that makes your character menacing or interesting, do you?
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RankTrack45 In reply to MrB1ank [2015-03-22 00:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Actually, the Quincy King would have killed Ranma if he hadn't bitten into him with his mask breaking pieces of it into his wound. The pieces deteriorated into his body slowly poisoning him. Their fight cause the poisonous effect of the Hollow reishi to spread faster and lessen his abilities enough to make them evenly matched. fav.me/d7n76yw
i wrote this chapter of my story The First Vizard almost a year ago. Back then know one knew of the power that Juha Bach has shown over the past two months. I only utilized the fact that Hollow reishi was poisonous to Quincys to make the fight results more believable.
i happen to agree with what you said in your comment on Tom's commission page. Ranma Kurogami is OP. The very reason that he is no longer the main character in my stories. He's a teacher of Vizard, a guide to greater power. In the end, an OC is an OC. And I created this one for a fan fiction to explain the origins of the Vizard race.
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