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The shading and linework for this piece are INCREDIBLE! However, I feel like the feet seem unnatural. They kind of bug me.
Mouse do not have deer feet but actually, have feet a bit like a combination between those of monkeys and humans.
So there should be more paws and the feet can be bigger. And not so small.
Another thing is that the body seems quite too skinny, like a Barbie doll.
Not that this is bad or anything, but when you think about a mouse, you wouldn't think about them
having barbie doll type bodies. I'd recommend working on the body types a bit more,
I would highly recommend trying looking up some real reference images for your artwork. Because although it is extremely nice!
The anatomy fixes can make this look even more natural! And even nicer to look at!
Here are some references if you need some! And I hope this helps you!~
c8.alamy.com/comp/A635G4/close…
i.pinimg.com/236x/dd/d2/fa/ddd…
ssl.c.photoshelter.com/img-get…
www.ultrafastpest.com/wp-conte…
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In fairness, this is an anthropomorphic mouse, so the fact that she has a more slim human, female figure is what would be expected. I agree with you on the feet though. Anthro or not, the feet should definitely match the species
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Of course, as being someone who also draws anthros I do agree, but even with this I still do feel as though the hips are too squished in as if this mouse is missing tons of ribs almost like a real life Barbie which is quite un-natural if we are talking about actual human figures. Although females do have slim figures the slimmest one can go naturally withough rib cage removals is a hour-glass figure (I know this as well because this is also what body type I have and I draw it a lot in my drawings too) if the mouse in this image ever crouched Down they can easily collapse by the weight of their internal organs which is why we are supposed to have our rib cage to support the weight of those. Although even with me saying “hour glass” that this character does have a sort of hour glass figure, but the hips are too close to each other to be a natural hour glass. For a better example look up real life Barbie doll on a video and they should say they’ve had tons of surgery. And then look up hour glass figure and look at their bodies compared to the extreme surgical “plastic Barbie dolls”
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Ok well if you have any, I'll take a look so i can see what a real hour glass figure should be drawn like. It is my main choice of figure when drawing women too.
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