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Kitastropher [2009-12-30 13:55:21 +0000 UTC]
I liked the subtle reference to pi.
A deliciously black piece of writing here!
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DarthWader [2009-12-26 13:20:43 +0000 UTC]
So aliens just come and wipe out humanity for the heck of it?
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rattyrayvn In reply to DarthWader [2009-12-27 03:02:42 +0000 UTC]
I like to leave it open...though my original idea was that the Earth was receiving a collection of signals from another world which then went through a mass extinction (probably global warming). So the mysterious announcements would be the alien equivalent of government advisories.
Maybe that's a sign I need to rewrite the ending a bit?
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DarthWader In reply to rattyrayvn [2009-12-27 03:30:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, I do like the idea and was really getting into the story up until it ended abruptly.
I guess it could be longer and more thought provoking.
Also, consider this. If we do find defiant signs that we are not a lone in the universe. Then, how would this affect society? I can imagine that it would change the way we think, bring new scientific theories, and might even change religions around the world.
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rattyrayvn In reply to DarthWader [2009-12-27 04:47:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your advice, I will keep it in mind when planning stories in the future - always find it quite difficult to retroactively expand on something.
As for the other thing, I guess no two people would feel the same way about it. Some would see it as a great leap forward, but not everyone would be so willing to give up their "special place" in the universe...
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