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RavensongForever β Scourge's Curse-Pg.4
Published: 2013-03-15 02:10:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2645; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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It's been a long while since I uploaded anything, so I decided to finish off page four of my fan-comic about Scourge. The story is a bit slow at the beginning, for I have to introduce some of the supporting characters besides Shadowkit and give him a background. Things should start heating up within the next few pages, so be patient. :3Page 1:
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Ivytail +Scourge(c)-Erin Hunter
Blackkit, Lizardkit, Shadowkit(c)-~RavensongForever
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I DOIN' A SCOURGE FANFIC!!!!! DAT CREEPY!!!
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Hurry up with the next page I can't wait!! X33
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I like the name, Shadowkit. I wonder what his warrior name would be.
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Hallo. X3 Und danke. ^^
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It looks good and the plotline looks great. But Shadowkit of ShadowClan is a bad name, simply for the fact that the Clan is ShadowClan. It's one thing most Warriors writers will try to shy away from, having a cat with the name of one of the Clans. So say if you have a WillowClan, you wouldn't have a Willowpaw. Same goes with any other Clans.
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Danke, I appreciate the advice. ^^ I agree with you on some points, but I'm not going to change the name for a couple of reasons: Shadowkit is temporary. His name will change completely soon. I've tried various other names, yet I settled with Shadow because he's cloaked in the darkness of Scourge's shadow. He's destined to follow Scourge's path as if he's his shadow. Also, while someone basks in light, their shadow seems wrapped in darkness: making them opposites with the same outline/shape. Basically, I'm stating how I found more symbolism in 'Shadow' than names like Night, Blood, Ice, ect. Still, you're input is considered.
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Ah, ok. I see where you're coming from now. I was just warning you of some fangirls who will see this and shoot you XD
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Don't worry, that's why I wear this bullet-proof vest. XD
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