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InYuJi [2009-03-12 02:44:09 +0000 UTC]
this really is a good chapter
brief question, does this happen to take place after Rayman 3 Hoodlum Havoc? Or after Rayman 2 Great Escape?
I wonder what sort of celebration happens at 12:00 mentioned from previous part? Hoping that it will be pleasant and not scarring (but that's just me, I have a more childish mind, still holding on to any remnants of innocence left)
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Rayfan In reply to InYuJi [2009-03-12 04:05:34 +0000 UTC]
Actually, Rayman 3 didn't even exist when I started writing "Piranha" waaaaay back, so this story has nothing at all to do with it. I think that game drastically altered Rayman's character from what it had been before, anyway.
"Piranha" is more like a re-imagining of Rayman 2, not a sequel to it. I love the game, but I wanted to treat Rayman more like a real person, in a more complex way. My stories don't really take place in the game universe, which for Rayman is so inconsistent from one game to the next that I don't worry about it too much. Also, I guess I started with the idea, "What if Rayman lost?" and that just wouldn't have made much of a story in the actual game setting.
Anyway, thanks, I appreciate your comments very much. The "celebration" will be in the next section, which I'm working on, but it'll probably be a while yet.
And you hang onto that innocence. I think even Piranha would do that if he only could.
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InYuJi In reply to Rayfan [2009-03-12 14:05:32 +0000 UTC]
so I'm guessing Piranha won't be using killer chained beartraps to fight
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PutterPen [2009-01-06 09:00:36 +0000 UTC]
Hah . I already like this new character even though he's just been introduced.
DRAW HEEM!!
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Okida In reply to Rayfan [2009-01-11 12:58:34 +0000 UTC]
no problem if it comes out slowly, there's this little thing called real life that gets in the way DX
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Rayfan In reply to Okida [2009-01-13 04:06:33 +0000 UTC]
"Real life"? I think I've heard of it... sounds like a waste of time. XD
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Okida In reply to Rayfan [2009-01-25 14:00:32 +0000 UTC]
you know, I thought that myself XD
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Tobish [2008-12-20 23:57:49 +0000 UTC]
*Has Translated. *
Much liked! You are a talent!
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nekog [2008-12-20 16:35:06 +0000 UTC]
No way. New chapter of Piranha? Are you joking? I practically forgot what was going on in the story.
This is like christmas. Its Fucking CHRISTMAS. -intends to read when she's back home-
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raygirl [2008-12-19 10:06:07 +0000 UTC]
A gripping read as always...and nice introduction of a new character, he's awesome! Poor fool has no idea what he's in for, especially competing with Elly. It's a little like the early relationship between Will and Lyra from the Dark Materials series
I look forward to see what Piranha has planned for these two!
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WebDragon [2008-12-19 04:30:57 +0000 UTC]
*dances* Wheee! Another great chapter! I think using another character as a window into Piranha worked very well. The reader knows a little bit more about what's going on behind those eyes, but not much! So in a very real sense the reader is discovering Piranha right along with Vee. Scary potential subtext included, nice way to add in that without spelling it out!
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WebDragon In reply to Rayfan [2008-12-20 02:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Hehee, yes it's quite obvious (and amusing!) that Piranha has no idea what Vee and Elly are referencing. Yay for comedy in the darkest situations!
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inaam07 [2008-12-19 03:39:14 +0000 UTC]
WOOHOOOO! Perfect timing...i was in dire need of some excellent literature to read!
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inaam07 In reply to Rayfan [2008-12-19 04:08:15 +0000 UTC]
Indeed no! and i certainly was not dissapointed - another fantastic chapter. I swear, in fear of sounding like a broken record, that this chapter was a joy to read. I mean, if you think about it, not much actually HAPPENED...but if you READ it, its...hooking. It grab you by the throat and doesnt let go untl you've finished - and even when it does, you wish it hadnt!
You know, i think its a testement to your character that you persevered and had the patience to stick with Pirhana this long.
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